Updated part18 KRIYANSH SS Can a Stranger become the Love of your Life - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesomee partšŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update... continue soon eager to know if Kriya will find out the truth !!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank u soo much everyone!
Thanks for the encouraging comments and the time spent to read and write the comments!!!
U guys make my day!!
I will definitely get well soon but u guys dont worry u will get updates everyday..
Incase u dont that means am really sorry, i will update it tomorrow!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
KRIYAANSH SS
PART 7
Hope u guys like it.
Aaj bhi thoda headache hai so dont know kaisa bana hai..
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Kriya stormed in the fitness room.
"REY!!" shouted Kriya

Rey got a heartattack when he heard that!
"Kriya! Shit!" he muttered

He quickly tried to hide the gifts and messages but Kriya snatched them from him
"Rey beta, you are gone! And look at her, the way she snatches!" thought Rey

Kriya examined the gifts and messages while Rey kept on cursing himself.

"Kriya, u see its nothing like that..." started Rey

"Rey just shut your stupid mouth!"Kriya cut him.

"What a baatcutter! Seriously who in the world named her Kriya! Rey, today your seriously gonna get killed. Get Ready." thought Rey

Rey's cursing went down the drain because the next second what happend was something which shocked Rey out of his skin, Kriya hugged him! Yes, finally! his Kriya hugged him.
Rey couldnt stop himself from hugging her back.

Both of them felt complete in each other's embrace. Rey loved the feel of her, her scent, her smile, her beauty! Everything made him go mad for her.Kriya broke the hug making both of them feel incomplete, making both of them miss the feel of eachother!

"Thanks a lot Rey! Thank u for encouraging me." thanked Kriya

Rey was shocked again, he was speechless beacause of his baatcutter's thank u.

"Friends?" asked Kriya extending her hand forward.

Now this was the limit! For the third time Rey was shocked. Just then his phone rang, it was from Sharon. He cut the call even though he knew that Sharon would kill him later
and extended his hand for friendship.

"Hell! I am in her friend zone! When will she be my girl friend huh." thought Rey

"-kay, so now I have the right to know about your past! So tell me." asked Rey giving attitude.

"No ways!" shouted Kriya and tried running away but Rey pulled her back by her waist causing her to dash on Rey's chest. They couldnt stop staring at eachother... Their eyes were locked!

Rey just loved her or liked her, he didnt know! He just knew her eyes showed every emotion, he could stare at those beautiful brown orbs all day long if he wanted to.

On the other hand, Kriya was really happy! She had her first friend, someone whom she can trust.

Tring...Tring...
Rey's phone rang! He left Kriya and took the call. Kriya was too cunning for words, she ran away before he could even notice.

"That's why I like her!" thought Rey
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KRIYA'S P.O.V

Kriya was so happy today. She couldnt even control her happiness! She danced like a clown! Made faces in the mirror! she totally wanted to record this moment in her life.

I cant believe that my secret admirer was Rey. I got a friend today, my first friend...

Why!Why! Why did Kriya have to use the words first friend.

Now, she couldnt stop herself from remembering her past. She couldnt! She had to, she needed to pen her feelings down atleast somewhere. She tore that page which said that
Rey and being friends. She started writing again...

My secret admirer had made me forget the past but I guess its fixed! I am sorry Rey, u and I cant be friends. I cant trust anybody and am better that way only. I have already experienced being betrayed by a friend. If I get betrayed again I cant stand anymore:
My secret admirer had made me forget the past but I guess its fixed! I am sorry Rey, you and I cant be friends. I cant trust anybody and am better that way itself. I have already experienced being betrayed by a friend and if I get betrayed again, I cant, I wont be able to stand again:
Nita was the only one who knew I still danced. I trusted her afterall she was my best friend. But she was a betrayer...

Uploading my dance videos! Showing my parents tat I still dance! How could she do that? The media was there to make this situation more famous! Nita was known as a trustworthy
girl and me, a betrayer...

Kriya's eyes were overload by tears which couldnt stop from coming out. She broke down.. How badly she wanted to die! This world was too harsh for her! But she couldnt, she had to proove herself. She didnt realize when her eyes shut down while the tears kept dripping from her eyes...
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REY'S P.O.V

Rey was jumping up and down! Finally, he was close to Kriya. His plan had clicked, her smile returned and soon she would be his! His mind felt so light. His princess had a smile on her face nowadays, her past was no more! She lived in the present.

He saw Kriya everywhere, sometimes drinking water, sometimes eating with him! He couldnt help but blush

Rey slept beaming with happiness while Kriya slept literally dying with sorrow.
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THE NEXT DAY:

KRIYA'S P.O.V

I have to tell Rey about it but how!
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PROMO: HOW WILL KRIYA TELL REY? HOW WILL REY REACT?

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Hope u guys like it.
Like I said, I will update even though am sick so really hope u guys like it.
Jhootas and Chappals welcome!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
love the new twist that you have added in
makes the story more and more interesting
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow nice update drama queen finally kriya knows he is rey but wdh friends???? gosh ye ladki pagal hain ohhh so kriya ki friend ne kiya ye sab...poor kriya BT this may be mu between kriya n her friend have to solve ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
I m sooo sorry...

M commenting on 2 parts at a time...

I have no particular reason to be late...buh jus sorry...maaf kar dena...

Comming to the update...

I totally loved both the parts...

Rey secret admirer...ausome...

dose messagea were ausome Diya...

Dey actually touched my heart...

Dat first gift was soo relevent to her..dats soo spcl gift for her...

Shit she found out Reys her secret admirer...

I thot she would kill him...

She hugged him.. yaaay...

buh then whats dis new thing...??

I cant be frnds wid Rey...nooo Kriya dont doo dat...

I sooo feel bad...

Do. write. soon...

Love Aditi
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: reyaditi

I m sooo sorry...

M commenting on 2 parts at a time...

I have no particular reason to be late...buh jus sorry...maaf kar dena...

Comming to the update...

I totally loved both the parts...

Rey secret admirer...ausome...

dose messagea were ausome Diya...

Dey actually touched my heart...

Dat first gift was soo relevent to her..dats soo spcl gift for her...

Shit she found out Reys her secret admirer...

I thot she would kill him...

She hugged him.. yaaay...

buh then whats dis new thing...??

I cant be frnds wid Rey...nooo Kriya dont doo dat...

I sooo feel bad...

Do. write. soon...

Love Aditi

Its oki addi!!
Thx.. tujhe update acha laga na wohi mere liye bahot hai 😊
Aur twist toh aagaya ab rukho
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Posted: 11 years ago
Supab update
Kya yaar kria abhi abhi to happy hui thi
Fir se flash back me jake sad ho gai
N rey jo itna happy he uski to sari happyness chin ne wali he

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Posted: 11 years ago
diya jab tabyat kharab hai toh kya zarurat thi strain dalne ki or ab ready rehe or scolding or lecture k liye kyunki MD tujhe chode gi nai or update awesum tha n pls pls rey or kria ko jaldi se ek kr do

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