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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SweetDevil_KR

arre saare ek hi question puch rahe hain rolf...
but i m not disappointed atall as i expected from her as she is queen of twist lol...
luv u jaanu & rolfing

Ab samjha mai kyu kal se itna rofl kar rahi hu!
Ab yeh bhi aagaye!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow amazing doll.
Anyone can inagine and understand the anger boiling in Rey's blood.
And the way you described the raging emotions then letting them out and eventually Kria calming him was totally superb.
And must say the bond between brother and sister was beautifully expressed.
Brother and sisters are someone with whom you can sure those secrets that you can't even share with your parents.
Loved the ending.
Leaving at a cliff hanger.
Chal doll jaldi uodate kario kyonki august maI toh milne wale nahi update tere se
Edited by arshafan94 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: arshafan94

Wow amazing doll.

Anyone can inagine and understand the anger boiling in Rey's blood.
And the way you described the ragibg emotions then letting them out and eventually Kria calming him was totally superb.
Loved the ending.
Leaving at a cliff hanger.
Chal doll jaldi uodate kario kyonki august maI toh milne wale nahi update tere se

Thx bhai!
Kya baat hai, emotions ki taarif Aapse mil rahi hai.
The king of emotions se!!
Chup chap rukho, update ke liye 😛
Tab tak Mujhe hasne do🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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🤣🤣🤣
God Rey' anger...that fight...on the highway to hell🤣🤣🤣
I don't know but I just wanna ROFL at it...itna filmy intense moment!
All because of u...intense moments pe mujhe hassi aa rahi hai🤣

When u said care calmed him down and I care for you...reminded me of Kriya's I care for u and Rey's mera liye itna kafi hai dialogues in D3...

Ab yeh bhai...jo dance ke wajha se margaya ta...phirse wapas kaise agaya???😲
Okay my imagination of Kriya's dead brother was...he was some ten year old when he died ab yeh doctor banke wapas agaya🤣
Abtak main uske death ke mystery ke bareme soch rahi thi ab yeh sochna hoga ki wo doctor kaise bangaya...ghar se bakar MBBS kar raha ta kya...ya wo doctor hai hi nahi🤣
Mujhe Rey ka reaction dekhna hai...usse lagega ki...kriya is a bag of mysteries...roz ek naya mystery kulega😆

Aur ab dead bro is back...kuch aur twists reverse karne ka irada hai kya???
Edited by Rajeshwari_KR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajeshwari_KR

Res😊

Unres

🤣🤣🤣
God Rey' anger...that fight...on the highway to hell🤣🤣🤣
I don't know but I just wanna ROFL at it...itna filmy intense moment!
All because of u...intense moments pe mujhe hassi aa rahi hai🤣

When u said care calmed him down and I care for you...reminded me of Kriya's I care for u and Rey's mera liye itna kafi hai dialogues in D3...

Ab yeh bhai...jo dance ke wajha se margaya ta...phirse wapas kaise agaya???😲
Okay my imagination of Kriya's dead brother was...he was some ten year old when he died ab yeh doctor banke wapas agaya🤣
Abtak main uske death ke mystery ke bareme soch rahi thi ab yeh sochna hoga ki wo doctor kaise bangaya...ghar se bakar MBBS kar raha ta kya...ya wo doctor hai hi nahi🤣
Mujhe Rey ka reaction dekhna hai...usse lagega ki...kriya is a bag of mysteries...roz ek naya mystery kulega😆

Aur ab dead bro is back...kuch aur twists reverse karne ka irada hai kya???

Kyaaa! Aise ideas aate kaha se hai!
And intense pe rofl!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update... Every update of urs ends up with a new twist...
Continue soon... Waiting to know who tat guy is!
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry for commenting so late😃
coming 2 d update it was fab as usual👏
bt nw wat is dis new twist 😕
will be waiting 😃
update soonish😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
final finish read your parts 11.. i knew it that rey will get into hit and fight with the guy
and some how kriya stop rey and told him to help him take to the hosipatal.
but kriya has a brother and he is a doctor and update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome story.
please pm me
xx shannel
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Posted: 11 years ago
KRIYAANSH SS
PART 12

Hope u guys like it😊
This is for all my close friends, brothers and sisters! Love u all!
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Yes, this man looked just like her brother. Those shining eyes which lit up when he used to dance, that smile which would leave everyone mesmerised, the attitude he used to prove himself.. This man had everything!

But how, how could he be her brother! Wasn't he dead? How is he here? What was happening?

"God, why do I keep on getting surprises! Why, why can't my life story ever stop twisting? Ugh!" Cursed Kriya
She couldn't stop herself from staring at that doctor, she just couldn't stop wondering...

Just then that doctor clicked his fingers in front of Kriya's face bringing her back to attention. Her eyes found the name badge on his coat, Dr. Raj Rai Prakash. Kriya was shocked! She was right, he was her brother, he was alive! Her mind was full of zillions of questions waiting for their answers.

"Choti?" Asked that doctor

"Bhai!" Screamed Kriya and hugged him tight.
How glad she was to see him alive, how much she had missed him, the leftover guilt of her past was erased. Choti, the name! The name she died to hear everyday... And finally she heard it now, her heart filled with happiness, she was finally at peace.

"Where were u bhai? So many years, u were known as, as de.. Dea...dead.." Asked Kriya, her voice shaking

"Choti, even u are known as dead or lost. What's the big deal?" Answered Raj

"But bhai, how do u know?..." Started Kriya
Kriya was getting more and more confused at her brothers every answer.

"How do I know? Choti, u think u were, are and always will be alone? But u are totally wrong, just wrong. I was always there with u, everywhere u had a pair of eyes following u. The days, u faced the worst anyone could a Ever experience. U were hurt but I was the one who felt the pain as well. Everyone, everyone who has hurt u ever a little bit HAS BEEN PUNISHED!" Explained Raj, his eyes burning in anger and pain

Kriya was getting more shocked now. The question, how her brother was alive just slipped out of her mind. Her brother had always been with her and she didn't even know...

"Bhai... Then why didn't u ever meet me? Do u have any idea how much I missed u, your smile, your dance, your love, your over possessive nature for me, your love, your teasing and naughty antics! Do u even know how much I've craved for u?" Shouted Kriya, letting her feelings out.

"Dammit choti! This hasn't been so easy for me either. If u have missed me, craved for me, I am not less! I couldn't tell u about me, it would make u weak. I couldn't never let myself be your weakness but nor could I stop myself from staying away from u when u were in so much pain! After every bad time of yours, I was the one who cleaned every bit of your precious tears that kept on falling from your eyes, I was the one who engulfed u into big hugs even after your tears fell! It was me dammit!" Blurted out Raj

These words hurt both of them. Both of them had missed, craved,weakened and even died because of each other. 'Support' was something they had always given each other. Both of them cared, loved each other! Their parents were never interested in them, all they had was each other.

As rightly said, A BROTHER LOVES U LIKE A MOTHER, CARES FOR U LIKE A FATHER, TEASES U LIKE A SISTER, AND OVERALL SOMEONE WHOM U CANT STOP LOVING...

Kriya needed her brother now, she just wanted to be in his arms, the safest place ever! Raj pulled her in to a big hug as if just reading her mind.
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Rey came from the reception. He was taken aback to see Kriya hugging someone else except himself.

"That guy! Ugh! Why the hell is Kriya hugging him!" Thought Rey.

Rey's blood started boiling again, he was loosing it, his possessiveness erupted out off his veins. Kriya was the only one who could make him feel like that. Even a small touch from someone else was enough to make his eyes shoot daggers, his heart stop beating, his desire of murder to spill out. He marched towards them, his attitude designed to kill.

He pushed that guy back but before he could even warn him forget raise his hand, he was shocked! His eyes popped out! The only question in his mind was what the hell!

Raj lowered Rey's hand and just smirked.

"Rey, what the hell! How could u even touch Raj!" Defended Kriya

"Why? Is he your boyfriend?" Asked Rey jealously

"Rey! Shut up idiot! He's my brother not boyfriend!" Blurted out Kriya

Rey was know shocked beyond words, his mouth opened wide, he stood rooted to the spot.

"Oye, shut your stupid mouth. I know u are trying to give access to a fly, how about me only putting one inside your mouth so u can taste it! My idiot best friend." Shouted Raj

"Woah wait, best friends!? What the hell!" Shouted a confused Kriya.

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PROMO: How do Rey and Raj know each other? Best friends, how?

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Hoped u guys like it.
Sorry, this one had less kriyaansh scenes but this was just written to express every sibling relationship.
My feelings expressed for the people close to me specially during august...
And btw get used to twists pe twists!
Pls do comment and like!
Jhootas and chappals welcome, branded aur street ones are welcome too!
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Edited by diyaswaronholic - 11 years ago

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