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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved the update...

Rey and Raj besties...ausome...

Sharonz Dare ...ausome mahn...

date with Kriya...yeah...n excited...

Kriya jealous of that girl...yeaahhh...She Loves him...

I wish he confesses sooon...

Pleeaasshhh...Say it Rey...

Do write soon...

Love Aditi...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Awe
Miss u too jaan
Trying to get network here
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thnx for d pm...
Read n a go...
Awesom luvd it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
KRIYAANSH SS
PART 14

Hola guys!! Got some time so updated!
Welcome to the world of twists!
Hope u guys like it!!šŸ˜›
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Kriya was hell irritated, her anger had reached the peaks of Mount Everest, her eyes were red in rage. How could Rey even think of dancing with someother girl when it was supposed to be their so-called-date! It was dare but it was their date and Kriya hated not completing things and most of all she hated LOSING!!

NO matter how hard she tried, there was one person who knew exactly how to cool her temper down. Yes, it was Rey. Just looking at his charming smile, all her anger dissapeared and for some reason she would start to blush! Wait, blush!! What the hell was happening to her!! Does she like or even love Rey!! UGH!!

"Kriya, I wanted to tell u that..." started Rey

Now how could Kriya not know how to cut afterall she was a baatcutter, Rey's baatcutter.
"Tell WHAT REY!! I have been listening to this same stupid line from past half an hour., Am standing for 30 mins dammit! Ok fine, tell me when u want to. For now am leaving." declared Kriya

"Damn this girl! Woah, Rey whats wrong with u. Stop cursing her and speak!" thought Rey

Kriya waited for 2 minutes but after looking at Rey's blank face, she started to walk away. Before she could even take another step, she was pulled back by someone dashing her body on his chiselled chest.

"What the hell! How dare u!" started Kriya.
She shut her mouth after feeling that touch, being in his arms, by just one touch, she would understand who it was and only one man had that effect on her.
"REY REY REY!! Why the hell is only this name going in my head. Universe ji, why cant I think of something else." cursed Kriya.

"You're not going anywhere. You'll be with me, only me... You are only mine and if anyone else even touches forget touch even talks to u then his family better prepare for his death ceremony. I love u Kriya, I love u my baatcutter, I am incomplete without u, Will u be mine forever?" blurted out Rey

Finally, finally Rey had told Kriya what he felt about her. How much he loved her, how much he craved for her, the smile, the nature he was in love with. He had told the girl about how special she was for him. Yes, yes, Reyaansh Singhania, the richest buisnessman, the best dancer in the world was in love. IN LOVE with Kriya Ghai.
Little did Rey know, Rey's these words had completely shocked Kriya. She had no idea, Rey loved her. She was happy but somewhere in her she just didnt want to fall in love again, she was afraid, too afraid to be betrayed again.

"No... Am sorry Rey." Kriya's mouth uttered... These words killed both of them. Kriya was angry at herself! How could she do this, she didnt want to let Rey go and now becuase of those stupid words. She was controlled by fear and those words slipped out. She looked at Rey, his eyes were full of sadness, his face was lowered down, he was completely dead.

"Rey, no no..." started Kriya

But this time Rey stopped her.
"Its okay baatcutter, I understand. We are still friends right?"asked Rey

Kriya just nodded.
Silence gushed through them, none of them had words to say, both were incomplete without eachother, both were full of regret, dismay, pain... Both waiting, waiting for the other to let the words flow.
The silence was broken but none of them had broken it, Rey's phone broke the silence. Rey checked the caller id, it was from Raj. He just picked it up.

"Damn u idiot!! Why the hell do u have perfect timing. I mean seriously your timing was JUST PERRFEECTT!!" shouted Rey

"Whatever dude, no wait thanks! But How could u propose my sister, how could u even think about it u fool!! " shouted back Raj

"What the hell!!" started Rey.
He was shocked, how the hell did they know about this. Was there a video camera somewhere. These dolts can never change! He started looking up and down, right and left, wondering where the camera was.

"Whatever dude, save your screaming, you're gonna need it later. Oh hello, stop looking around. There is a video camera so dont get too close to my sister or everyone can say Rest In Peace Mr. Reyaansh Singhania." threatened Raj

"Wow, I was so wrong that both brother and sister were idiots! Nope they are definitely idiots but how could I forget to add that THEY ARE DUMB as well." thought Rey

"Shut the front door! U know I love her. But for now, pls for gods sake, for universeji! Keep the phone!!" shouted Rey

"But, why..." started Raj

Rey just kept the phone. He knew once Raj started it was too difficult to shut him up. Afterall he was baatcutters brother. He looked around for Kriya but she had dissappeared during the long conversation of shouting. Rey just went to Swayam's home. He knew it was the best place to ever feel better and Swayam was the best person in such situations.

He just opened the front door and closed it with a bang.
Swayam was surprised, he was just having a snooze with the love of his life, the girl of his dreams, Sharon Rai Prakash. Just then Rey came in and shouted in his loudest voice.

"SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT! GET YOUR HEAD OUT OF YOUR STUPID DREAMS AND LISTEN TO ME!! GIVE SHARON A BREAK DUDE!!" shouted Rey

"What the..." said Swayam, getting up with a jerk

"Ok now listen..." Rey told him the whole story from the start till the end.

Swayam just nodded but once he heard the word, rejection and no.. he started paying attention.

"Oye, u heard anything?" asked Rey looking at the sleeping Swayam

"Ya.. yaa.. continue." answered Swayam

"U!!" shouted Rey and without thinking just poured cold, icy cold water on Swayam

"What the fish dude!!" shouted Swayam

"So, thats the end of the story. Any suggestions?" asked Rey

Like always Swayam was out of ideas first.
Both went mad, mad thinking... thinking for ideas!

"I wish Raj was here." said Swayam

"Oh Puhlease, that guy's banned me from Kriya!!" said Rey

Tada! Just then an idea clicked in Rey's useless brain. Wait useless? sometimes his brain could be useful too.

"Dude! I got an idea!" shouted Rey, shaking Swayam like mad.

"Woah, there is something called as calmness. Use that and then talk." answered Swayam

"Hehe well Kriya gets mad when I go with someone else and more when I ignore her. SO how about me and her just friends and I get some girlfriend. She will get jealous I guess. Basically in this one week, I will make Kriya realise what love is. Promises,Pain, Happiness, Jealousy, love is a mixture of emotions and Kriya is gonna know that. Get it?" said Rey

"Rey, Pakka you are a DRAMA KING! Nautanki number one!" shouted Swayam

"Haan, woh toh mai hu! Tell me something new!" answered Rey, laughing.

"Watch out Ms Kriya Ghai, Reyaansh Singhania is someone whom u can never resist. Afterall I was a stranger when I fell in love with u. You are mine and will always be mine." thought Rey.
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PROMO: WILL REY BE ABLE TO MAKE KRIYA FALL IN LOVE WITH HIM? WILL KRIYA TELL REY THOSE 3 MAGICAL WORDS? WILL RAJ ACCEPT THIS RELATIONSHIP?
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Hoped u guys liked it!!!
I know i know, twists ka pahaad hai!
So enjoy!!
Please comment and like generously!
Saste ya rich jhoote aur chappal welcome!!🤣


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Posted: 11 years ago
res
unres.

since you did keep your promise.
i am commenting.
waisai it is one story i always wait you know.
loved the way you showed the entire drama unfolding.
drama king haan.
great.
waisia the definition of love you gave was so apt.
love is a mixture of emotions.
will be waiting for the update.
Edited by arshafan94 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
"Watch out Ms Kriya Ghai, Reyaansh Singhania is someone whom u can never resist. Afterall I was a stranger when I fell in love with u. You are mine and will always be mine." thought Rey.


Completely luved it šŸ‘ Update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful...
she rejected...i thought rey will be hurt...bt ye to pagal ho gya hai...
bygod...ye log kitna chillate hain...mera to padhke hi sir dard ho gaya...
i loved his planning nd all...raj is a possessive bro...cool so rey ko use bi patana padega...
m loving it...superb update diya
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Posted: 11 years ago
Jaan...
What was that...
Proposal bhi ho gaya aur reject bhi.
Inki love story ka kuch toh karo.
Poor rey.
Maine socha, some sort of devdas type ho jaye ga.
Par situation toh kuch aur hai yahan.
Truly, Maan gayi tere twistful dimaag ko.

I thought rey kriya ko propose hi nahi kar payega.
Loved the update And the unexpected twist too.
Update soon.
Nikki
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazingg partšŸ‘
continue soonish😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Soch nai tha ki itna jaldi update milega
Supab update
Kria getting irritate as rey was only saying one line from last 30 min
N than when she was about to go rey pull her back n his dialoge
"You're not going anywhere. You'll be with me, only me... You are only mine and if anyone else even touches forget touch even talks to u then his family better prepare for his death ceremony. I love u Kriya, I love u my baatcutter, I am incomplete without u, Will u be mine forever?" blurted out Rey
Hyyy so sweet lovely n possesive
N then when kria se no still rey understand her n say they still will be friends
Awww that was so sweet
Love this understanding rey
N than raj ka call aaya n his n reys convo

"Damn u idiot!! Why the hell do u have perfect timing. I mean seriously your timing was JUST PERRFEECTT!!" shouted Rey

"Whatever dude, no wait thanks! But How could u propose my sister, how could u even think about it u fool!! " shouted back Raj

"What the hell!!" started Rey.
He was shocked, how the hell did they know about this. Was there a video camera somewhere. These dolts can never change! He started looking up and down, right and left, wondering where the camera was.

"Whatever dude, save your screaming, you're gonna need it later. Oh hello, stop looking around. There is a video camera so dont get too close to my sister or everyone can say Rest In Peace Mr. Reyaansh Singhania." threatened Raj

"Wow, I was so wrong that both brother and sister were idiots! Nope they are definitely idiots but how could I forget to add that THEY ARE DUMB as well." thought Rey

"Shut the front door! U know I love her. But for now, pls for gods sake, for universeji! Keep the phone!!" shouted Rey
Omg
That was awsome
Each dialoge I so love it
N then rey poor sw ko nind se utha diya n se was dreaming about sharon
Poor boy rey ne usper icey cold water daal diya
Hahahahah
Even sw n reys convomwas also tooo good
N then rey making plane to make kria jealose was supab
Wating for the plan to execute

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