Updated part18 KRIYANSH SS Can a Stranger become the Love of your Life - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
its a beautiful story diya...
m waiting for rey kria union...
u write beautiful...
the pain was amazingly described...
keep it up...
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
So finally her past is out...

She suffered a lot of pain...

not allowed to dance when she wanted too...

Rey wanted to know everything about her...

He pecked her...dats ausome...

Ya...I think he will find out about her past...

Ausome update...

Do write soon...

Love Aditi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
Amazing update...

omg rey pecked her... :*
lovely..

her past is out.. finally..
really interesting..

waiting for the next part..

update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
amazing part👏
hayee rey pecked her❤️
continue soonish😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
He pecked her
Wow already romance started
Soo nice
I wish he comes to know of her past and get her smile and trust in love back
Thanks for pm
Awesome update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
KRIYAANSH SS
PART 5
Hope u guys like it😊
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Rey had got an idea. He finished the choreography and saw Kriya going out at the same time. He just dashed into her and he was right, her bag fell down and the papers along with a few other stuff spilled out.
Kriya was in a hurry so, she didnt pay much attention to her stuff. Rey quickly grabbed the papers and gave her the rest of her belongings. Both of them parted ways! Rey to discover the mystery of Kriya's past and Kriya to reach the first step of dance, her class.
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KRIYA'S P.O.V

I was looking forward to today, my first training class! I started the music and warmed up until the students came. The students hurried in, they were about 30 students and luckily they were all girls.

"So maybe they could do Kamli" thought Kriya, remembering the dance battle with Rey

"Hey girls! I am your teacher but for god;s sake dont call me maam or miss. Always call me Kriya!" Kriya introduced herself.

"Can we do Kamli" asked the eager students

"Definitely! agreed Kriya, feeling secretly glad.

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REY'S P.O.V

Yes! Rey had read the starting line and he knew it was the story of his Kriya's life. His Kriya or the going to be his Kriya. He didnt care but she was only his and no one elses. He started reading her story...
His eyes were filled with tears, his hands were shaking, he was cursing himself!
He couldnt believe Kriya had been through all this. PAIN AND SORROW! She had NO happiness in her life. He had to forget his dream of being a dancer but he atleast had his family with him but Kriya, she had NO ONE! She had never felt special because of anyone. Her story was just like his but hers was a zillion times worse. He knew he liked Kriya and for some reason it hurt him like hell seeing her so hurt. Whatever Kriya had been through poked him like thorns in his heart and it added more pain because he had insulted her in every way!
"How could he do this! How!" He shouted, crushing a glass with his bare hands. He couldn't even imagine the pain and problems but Kriya she had been through them! Experienced them, cryed, prayed to God for atleast someone! Those papers just told the summary of her life, after leaving her home she must have been through A LOT!

He had to know every single second, every moment, every pain and every problem she had been throught!!
He had to know more about her, MORE !!

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KRIYA'S P.O.V

It felt so good after dancing. Finally, her dream of having a dance career was becoming true. Yes! She jumped up and down like a kid. She remembered Rey's and her dash, his skin going through hers... She didn't know why but she wanted to be in his embrace, she had no idea why she always thought about him!
"Was she in love?" She thought but her past stood like a mirror in front of her. Those lines peaked into Kriya's mind again:
The first time I had fallen in love. That boy just used me, he used me to become famous. That night became so popular that, that boy was called a genius! He had never cared about my feelings... I lost my popularity, my friends but most of all I lost my SELF RESPECT! Now, everyone thought I would sleep with anyone. I was know as a s**t...

"NO! NO!" Screamed out Kriya

"She couldn't bear those bad memories , she couldn't. It had hurt her so much! It had taken her ages to control herself, AGES TO STAND UP AGAIN! she couldn't fall again. She was strong, she wasn't any weakling... SHE WOULD BECOME SOMEONE! SHE WOULD BE RESPECTED!" Kriya felt better listening to her strengths but her bad times overcame her and caught her within them...

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REY'S P.O.V

He had to do something by which he gained Kriya's trust. He needed to be her friend first. He felt something, maybe he and Kriya just had a sister-brother bond or was IT LOVE? He just wanted to make her feel special, maybe by being a secret admirer...
He wanted to see her happy! He wanted her beauty back, her smile back!

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PROMO: HOW WILL REY MAKE KRIYA FEEL SPECIAL?

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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
ausome update...

Loved it...

Finally Rey knows about Kriyas past...

He wants to make her feel spcl...

Diya what was dat...Brother Sister bond...maar duu main tujee...??

She gone through sooo much...poor girl...

She needs Love...n Reys gonna give her that...

Do write soon...

Love Aditi...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Amazing update
Rey found out the truth
Can't wait for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: reyaditi

ausome update...

Loved it...

Finally Rey knows about Kriyas past...

He wants to make her feel spcl...

Diya what was dat...Brother Sister bond...maar duu main tujee...??

She gone through sooo much...poor girl...

She needs Love...n Reys gonna give her that...

Do write soon...

Love Aditi...

Arre Mujhe maardegi toh tujhe kr ss likhke kaun dega 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Meghna_kriyansh

awesum update bt small...

Really sorry about that..
Hope u enjoyed it anyways

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