Fan fic: Afsana pyaar ka - Page 19

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Posted: 19 years ago
hey i loved this part, please continue, i really loved it!!! yummmmmmmmmm 😳 😳 😳
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Kripa walks toward angad and is five steps away from angad when angad and another girl go to the dance floor and Kripa burns with jealousy. Angad is dancing with the girl very close and Kripa can't stand it, Angad notices this and smiles to himself.
A (in his mind): Main janta hoon Kripa ki tum mujhse pyaar karne lagi ho par main yeh tumse sun na chata hoon.
K (in her mind): yeh kya ho ra hai mujhe main kyun jal rahen hoon phele bhi to angad ko kitni ladkiyun ke saath dekh chuke hoon, to phir ajj kyun yeh ehsaas hoone laga
Kripa leaves the party and angad follows her, its snowing outside
A: Kripa, Kripa ruko to
Kripa dosen't stop and tears are running down her eyes
A (catchin up): Kripa ruko
Kripa finally stops, and is facing angad.
A: Kripa tum party se ase chaali kyun ayee
K(wiping her tears): bas mera maan nahin lag raha tha
A (holding her shoulders): sach
K: haan
A: to phir tum roon kyun rahe ho
K: ankhoon main kuch chale gaya tha
A: jhoot
K: nahin main sach keh rahin hoon
Angad and Kripa start walking towards their car, its really windy and snowing kripa puts her arms around her hugging herself and Kripa puts his jacket around her. Angad starts the car and they drive back to the hotel on their way to the hotel there is a complete silent in the car. In the hotel there is no power because of the storm so Kripa lights up candles everywhere in their room. While she is lighting the candles angad is just looking at Kripa. Kripa has lighted up all the candles. When the window opens the wind is blowing out all the candles there is only one candle left kripa picks up that candle and puts her hand around it so it doesn't blow out, the wind is making kripa's here fly everywhere and angad is just staring at her, he starts walking towards her, while kripa is looking at angad and also walking towards him, now angad and kripa are just two steps away from each other. Angad puts his hand on kripa's cheek, and kripa runs into his arms, dropping the candle on the floor.
A: I love you kripa, I love you
Kripa wants to reply back but she then remembers the letter she received the other day.
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Posted: 19 years ago
wonderful part, please reply soon! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
plz ...........................through that letter in dustbin..........................and le lovely couple together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!cute part.............
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow gr8888888888888888888 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
tt part was really good... forget abt the letter for a while plssssss... they are so sweet together...
Kayla~
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Posted: 19 years ago
loved it continue soon
its was a great part
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was awesome dude..plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome,fabulous,nice,amazing,remakable etc.... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow!!!! this is sooooooooooo amazing!!!!! i really cant wait to read more!!! plz plz plz continue soon!! 👏

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