RagNa ff~my savior NEW UPDATE PART 4 PG 6 JUNE 24 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
nyc update ...
abhas is so angry...
cont soon...
n do pm me😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Story seems interesting however I find the violence factor too high! Sorry its just my personal opinion! Please dont get offended!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 4:

Kalpi was very scared as to what her brother might do but she went up to her room.
Abhas: hey you! I know how to deal with my little sister. And anyways! Who the hell are you?
Raghav: my name is raghav. Abhas, your little sister was about to die today if I didn't save her.
Abhas: what? What do you mean!
Raghav: firstly. Kalpana was...r-r-raped.
Abhas' eyes widened and he turned red with anger.
Raghav: And second. She would've died by that truck if I didn't push her out of the way-
Abhas didn't let raghav finish and rushed up to kalpi's room.
Abhas barged in when kalpi was playing with a snow globe.
Raghav also rushed up.
Abhas went and grabbed kalpi by the hair.
Kalpi: aah! Bhai! Aah! Please chodiye!
Abhas threw kalpi to the floor.
Kalpi started crying very hard. Her stomach still hurt from being forced upon.
Abhas: dard ho raha hai na?
Said abhas sitting on the floor next to kalpi holding her hair.
Kalpi: bhai. Please!
Abhas slapped kalpi.
Abhas: chup!
He was about to slap kalpi once more when a hand stopped his.
It was raghav.
Raghav: ladki pe haath nahi utathe.
Kalpi looked at raghav in astonishment.
Abhas threw kalpi and left.
Raghav picked up kalpi and layed her in the bed.
Kalpi is on her bed wincing in pain.
Raghav is tending to her injuries.
Raghav hushes kalpi and she falls asleep. Raghav kisses kalpi on the lip.
Raghav: I don't know how and I don't know when but I can't live without you anymore...
He is about to leave when kalpi grabs his hand. Raghav kisses her hand and leaves.
~Next morning.
Kalpi wakes up and has flashbacks of her rape.
She shivers in her bed.
And then a flashback of raghav comes in her mind and she sits there and smiles...
Kalpana in her mind: what's going on with me? Why am i smiling thinking about a man I just met...
She shakes her head to get the thoughts out of her head.
Kalpi goes and takes a long shower.
She comes out and picks out a pink floral knee length dress and her nude colored pumps. She topped it with a jean jacket.
Kalpi sat down and did light makeup as she is already very beautiful.
Kalpi looked at a heart locket.
She opened it to see a picture of her and her parents.
She put it on and smiled.
Kalpana headed downstairs to see abhas sitting on the couch angry.
She went and kneeled in front of him..
Kalpi: bhai.
Abhas hugged kalpi tight.
Abhas: I'm sorry...last night..I hit you a little too much.
Kalpi: bhai. You have the right over me. You're my older brother.
Abhas and kalpi went to eat breakfast.

Precap:
Raghav: I love you. kalpana
Kalpi's eyes widened.

Sorry for not updating for so long and the short update!
Enjoy!!
Goal: 10 comments 15 likes.
Edited by Ragnaislife - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Nice update..glad that Abhas understood Kalpi at last.
Pooor Kalpi though really.:(
Please continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Pookhi

Nice update..glad that Abhas understood Kalpi at last.
Pooor Kalpi though really.:(
Please continue soon!


Thanks! Will soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Wow! Awesome! I love it! Update soon ok!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Wonderful update
Raghav is already in love with Kalpi :)
I like that Kalpi brother finally comfort her
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Waitg for the precap..:D

Plz update soon..u make us wait fkr a ling time...huhu..dhende se marne pedege!!! :/ juz kidding...luv ur story...thk u...n dun frgt...update soon...dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Lovely story! Different and beautiful. Plz update. Tks.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
lovely update
plzz continue soon and pm me 😃

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