RagNa ff~my savior NEW UPDATE PART 4 PG 6 JUNE 24

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Posted: 11 years ago
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My savior
Part 1:

Kalpi was sitting in raghav's lap resting her head in his chest sobbing inconsolably.
Raghav: chup ho jao kalpi..bhool jao us hadse ko..
Kalpi: agar uss raat aap nahi aate to mein-
Raghav: chup! Bilkul chup!
Flashback: 5 years ago..
A man was on top of kalpi forcing him into her. Kalpi was crying, screaming, yelling, and trying to push him off. The man ripped kalpi's shirt off, got off from her and started to whip her naked body with a belt. She was crying very hard. He pulled her up pushed her against the wall and caressed her nude body. She cried and yelled for help. The man kissed her breasts and then whipped it. Kalpi cried due to extreme pain. The man pushed her on the bed with extreme roughness. He shoved himself into her..kalpi knew at that moment it was all over. She lost her virginity. She had been...raped. The man got off and whipped her some more her body was bleeding badly. The man bent down and grabbed her jaw very hard. Kalpi winced.
Man: I hope you enjoyed. You may leave now.
Kalpi laid naked in shock.
After a few hours she came to her senses and got dressed. She had a maxi skirt and a shirt in her purse handy since she always carried extra clothes. Kalpi was still bleeding but walked not knowing where she was headed..suddenly a truck was coming at her full speed. The truck honked but had no affect on kalpi. Suddenly a young man pushes her out of the way. Both fall on the road.

How was it guys?
Should I continue?
I know it's not the greatest but still hit like and comment.
Thanks! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yes.. U should continue... It's nice story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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My savior part 2:

Kalpi: aah!
Raghav: r u okay?
Kalpi: get off me!
Raghav: oh hello! Mein nein tumhari jaan bachayi hai! No thank u no nothing!
Kalpi: mar jane dete mujhe! Nahi jina mujha!
Raghav: kyun nahi! Itni hot ho tum. Kyun nahi jina? By the way I am raghav, and single.. ;)
Kalpi: shut up! Now get off of me!
Raghav: acha acha miss nakrili.
Raghav gets off of kalpi and helps her up.
Kalpi starts walking aimlessly. She trips on a rock and falls backward..when raghav catches her.
Raghav: phir se?
Kalpi just glares at raghav holding her.
Kalpi: let me down! ;(
Raghav: okay.
Raghav let's kalpi down and kalpi falls on the floor.
Kalpi: aaah!!
Kalpi screams due to internal injuries.
Raghav notices all the bruises, cuts, and marks of struggling on her body. He knew something had happened with kalpi.
Without letting kalpi protest he lifted her up and walked to his car. Kalpi was in too much pain to struggle. Raghav laid her in the back seat. He covered her body with his coat so she wouldn't feel cold. Raghav drove to the nearby hospital. Kalpi fell asleep in the car. When they arrived at the hospital raghav got out of the car and carried kalpi into the hospital.
Raghav: doctor, can you please check her? She is in a lot of pain.
Doc: sure. Nurse.
Nurse: yes?
Doc: take this patient into room number 4.
Nurse: okay.
The nurse went and brought a gurney. Raghav was still carrying kalpi. Kalpi was cuddled into raghav's chest. He tried to put her on the gurney but she wouldn't let go of him. Raghav managed to put her on the gurney.
The nurse went and did a check up on kalpi. Raghav stood outside the hospital room.
Nurse: excuse me sir?
Raghav: yes?
Nurse: aap patient ke kaun hain?
Raghav: uh...mein...mein uska...husband hoon.
Nurse: oh! Great. Kuch formalities jo puri karni hai.
Raghav: okay.
Raghav completed all the formalities and went to see kalpi in the room.
The doctor came in as well.
Raghav: what was wrong with her?
Doctor: see, I'm a doctor. And no patients condition can be hidden from me.
Raghav: i don't understand.
Doctor: Mr. Singhania, kalpana was raped.
Raghav's eyes widened.

Precap:
Raghav drops kalpi home.
Abhas is kalpi older brother.
Kalpi's parents died when she was 13.
Abhas slaps kalpi.
Abhas: kaha gayi thi tu?
Kalpi: bhai..
Abhas: kaha izzat udda ke ayi hai?
Kalpi's eyes tear up.

Hope you guys liked.
Don't forget to like and comment.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aryagr

Awesm. Plz update soon.


Thank you! Will soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow..this is hyper...want to know more..
update soon...!!!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Autumm

wow..this is hyper...want to know more..

update soon...!!!😉


Thanks sweetheart!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mihika

nice update dear😊


Thanks mihika! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nyc part
new concept...
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its very nice.. I like it.. Do PM me the next chapter...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its awesum...
Plzz continue soon... 😊

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