SwaRon Two Shot on Rose Day! ||Part Two: Page Six|| - Page 6

Fab update.
Such simple words yet u made it so blissfull.
Luvd d ts a lot. 👍🏼

Hey dear,

Seriously this one was epic,I was literally feeling same after that my previous read for part 1,And trully i got same..It was just amazing to the core where u showed ur such inner n outer skills of being writer..The way u narrated,pourify those emotions with ur writing power was perfect for ur readers..Actually in case of individual POV,I was feeling confused as i couldnt able to follow D3 since ages but it was like rose day scenario,Like a short lovely picture for me and i just loved it the way sharon the diva was back and did some great efforts to make ruhi understand what swaron love power is...At swayam ends,I loved his dialouge delivery,it was apt and perfect for this current picture..And yeah how can i forget slap incident,that one was main star from whole galaxy of this update..Moreover i just loved sharon's jealous and her infinite restlessness after seeing swayam and ruhi so close..Actually from begining i used to love such basic essence of sharon as a character..Specially i say it was balanced one having all emotions in such a perfect equlibrium..And trully it was well maintained at writer side..So in all,Awesome done..Keep writng..


And yeah Thanx for PM
N Sorry for this late..


Prateek

superb os dear