Saving Her From Hell ||KR OS||

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Saving Her From Hell

In the fast track life of Mumbaikars , he was running through crowds , looking everywhere possible , yelling her name . With every step he took , the fear in his spine was growing. He didn't know where to find her! He just didn't.

He sat on a bench. Everything in front of him , seemed to go in slow motion. Like God had slowed down the time , and every second was like a slow poison being injected into his heart.

"Where did you go kria?"

He held his head.

--

Everything had been so perfect until this morning. When he read her goodbye letter. His phone was ringing , but he didn't want to glance at it.

He looked at the phone , hoping it was Kria calling. He looked at the contact name. It was his friend calling. He wanted to throw his phone. But the hope that kria would call stopped him.

He remembered what had happened in these few days.

---

"Rey!"

Rey looked up from his phone. Kria was in his room , speaking about her ambitions.

"Are you even listening to me?"

"Sorry sweet heart!"

Kria pouts , she took his phone and put it aside . Rey held her hand , and pulled her to him. She removed his hand and cuddled to him.

"Rey , I want to be a dancer!"

"I know that Jaan."

"But dad.."

Kria stated with a sad pout.

"Uncle just wants you to have a secure future Kria. That industry is extremely big! He is just being protective towards you."

"Rey , I am a grown up girl!"

"Yeah you are. But , sweetie you'll remain a kid for your dad right?"

"That does not mean , he stops me from achieving my ambitions rey!"

"Kria , you have to prove to him that you are capable of achieving them. I am sure he would support you , if you prove him that you're ready for it."

"Hmm. Anyways , we are going clubbing today , aren't we?"

"Of course sweetheart , we are going."

Kria smiled.

"Then , I'll go home."

"Abhi toh aayi ho na!"

"Rey!"

Rey sighed. Kria gave him a kiss and went. Rey smiled. Only if he knew the night at club would make him lose his kria.

---

"Why! Why did we go to the club!"

He said holding his head. He remembered what had happened.

---

Kria had just set the dance floor on fire , by her dazzling moves . Rey was speaking to Vicky. Kria came to the counter. She saw rey speaking , and sighed and went to order a drink. She was ordering when.

"Excuse me!"

Kria turned and saw a guy.

"Yes?"

"Actually I saw you dancing , and I must admit your dance moves are ah-mazing!"

"Thanks."

Kria smiled and then turned. He forwarded a card. Kria looked at the card and then at him , she raised her eye.

"I work for a production house. And we need an amazing lead dancer , so can you come for the audition?"

"Do I look like a fool to you? How am I supposed to believe you?"

"Because I am saying the truth. Look at the card."

"Cards can be made anywhere!"

Rey saw her speaking to the guy. He came to them , and heard the guy speaking.

"Okay , you don't believe me? Come here and give you're audition! "

"What's going on?"

Rey spoke , putting his hand possessively around her. Kria told him.

"Hmm. You may leave!"

Rey said. The guy narrowed his eyes , and then went.

"That was mean rey."

"He was making you a fool."

"I didn't fall in his trap."

Rey puts his hands around her , her hands on his chest.

"Issliye , you were planning to go to the audition?"

Kria sighed.

"Why do you know me?"

"Because I love you!"

They laughed.

---

Rey came out of his thoughts , and sat in his car. He tried to remember any possible place which Kria had mentioned she would be going. But he failed. He closed his eyes , and replayed whatever had happened after the audition.

---

Kria had given the audition , and she had even seen the guy there. She and rey had come out for a coffee date , when her phone rang.

"Hello."

"Hey , it's me Yuvraaj."

"Yes?"

"You have been selected for the role!"

"Are you serious?"

"Yup!"

Kria looked at rey , her eyes wide in shock. Rey raised his eye.

"You have to come to Pune but."

"Pune?"

Kria looked at Rey.

--

Bam! Pune! She was in pune. He reversed his car , and texted kria's dad , that he is going to Pune. He drove to the Mumbai-Pune highway . His mind was playing her images her smile.

How would she be now? Was she fine?

It had been 12 hours since she had left her house. Was she okay?

"Why the hell didn't you inform me kria!"

And he knew why she didn't.

---

"Rey , I want to go , don't you get it?"

"Kria Ghai! You are not going anywhere alone!"

"I am not a small kid Reyaansh Singhaania , I can go there alone! Do you get it?"

"No , I don't get it! Kria , try to understand..."

But he was cut by Kria.

"Don't! You just don't want me to fulfil my dream!"

And she had gone away.

---

Rey hit the steering wheel , he groaned in anger. Why! Why did he let her go? He could have explained it to her with love rather than pushing his decision upon on her. Why didn't he do that!

He reached the first toll plaza. He sighed remembering the time , when they both were going to lonavla. Everything had been so perfect!

"Come back jaan! Please."

---

He finally reached pune , and checked in a hotel. He then immediately went out , and looked at every corner , ever hotel , every building . He reached a park , and finally sat on the bench , tired and exhausted , yet desperate to find her.

---

They had decided to go out today , and rey had come early to pick her up. He saw smriti crying , and Rajeev (kria's dad) was looking tensed. Rey had asked them when he saw the letter. He took it and read it.

Kria had gone away , saying that she would return after grabbing that role. Rey had known the guy was fake through his sources and had told her to stop. But kria being kria had not listened to him.

And rey had immediately left to search for her.

---

Kria opened her eyes , she was in a hotel room. Her head felt heavy. She tried to remember what bought her here.

She remembered reaching Pune , and meeting yuvraj , and after that she remembered , someone putting a cloth on her mouth.

Fear struck her bad , as well as realization. She was trapped! She looked around scared. What were they going to do?

The door opened. Yuvraaj came in.

"Wh-why have you bought me here?"

He smirked at her , and then sat in front of her.

"You wanted to dance right? You will."

"I want to go back! You lied to me!"

"Oh , did i?"

He laughed. Kria wanted to cry , beat the shit out of the guy , but she couldn't , she just couldn't gather the power to hit him.

"Kria , kria. Don't worry! You are going to have a carrier in dance , but just a bit different!"

"Excuse me?"

"You are going to strip dance for people , at parties!"

Kria looked at him horrified , and she slapped him hard on his face.

"How dare you! You bloody ass!"

He pulled her by her hair , she winced in pain.

"You can't go anywhere no"

"Rey will come to take me!"

He laughed out loud.

"In your dreams! Now where this!"

"I won't!"

She felt a pain on her arm , as he cut it with a blade. She cried.

"You will!"

He went. Tears fell from kria's eyes. She remembered what rey had told her.

"Why! Why didn't I listen to you Rey. Just why!"

She cried.

---

Rey reached the hotel. He looked at the event board.

"Private party at the banquet hall , at 9."

Rey rolled his eyes , and was going to go , when his eyes fell on Yuvraaj coming out of the lift. Kria was here! And he was looking everywhere.

He heard him speaking to a man.

"Voh andar hain. Kapde badal rahi hain. Zyaada nakhre kare , to maar dena , chup hojaayegi! Usse lekar aa jaana party mein."

"Okay sir!"

Rey's blood boiled. He spoke in his mind.

"Tu use marega! Mein tera bharta bana dunga saale!"

Rey knew he had to do something. Kria was bought , she was wearing a long coat , she looked scared. He looked at his baatcutter , she had been crying he knew. What were they doing!

She looked at his direction suddenly.

"Rey?"

She said slowly. Rey immediately hid.

"Nahi aane wala tera aashiq! Ab chal! Aur kissi ko shaq nahi hona chahiye."

Kria controlled her tears , and walked.

---

Kria looked at the men present there , she could recognize few to be her dad's clients. She loathed it! She needed help.

They all looked at her with lustful eyes. Did her dad attend these parties? She felt disgusted and wanted to puke. But these guys were unmarried , and did not deserve to get married! Jerks!

Kria knew rey would come and save her. But she was scared , what if he was just an imagination. She was taken to the centre.

"Let the show began!"

Kria was helpless. She looked around . The music started. Kria looked around. She wanted to run , but saw yuvraaj holding a blade , and if she moved she knew he would hit her with it. Kria closed her eyes , and removed the coat.

She remembered every moment of her life , which was going to end today. That's when the door opened.

Kria opened her eyes , she saw her rey , with the police. Kria saw yuvraaj's fear struck face. Kria smiled. The police got hold of him , it was a raid!

Rey came to her , and she hugged him tight.

"I knew you would save me from this hell Rey!"

"Ssh. We are going back kria."

"I love you."

"I love you too."

---

The next morning , Rey woke up in the hotel room , (a different hotel) , and turned to find her sleeping cuddled to him. Rey smiled and kissed her forehead.

"I won't ever let you go away from me Kria."

He then again fell asleep , while kria opened her eyes.

"I won't go away from you Rey. Not again. I love you."

Saying this she hugged him more tight , and fell asleep.

***

I know! I know this sucked. Am sorry! But I didn't know why the hell did I even write it. Sorry for boring you guys.

Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
its a very nyc os...just loved it
amazingly written and m the first one to comment😊
Plzzz keep writing more and more..😃
Keep it up😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice os...
Love kriyaansh. ...
Kriya is so stubborn. . But rey is there to handle her..
Keep writing...
Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing os
Really loved it
It showed the dangerous world out there while we are thinking of a rosy and different world
Keep it up
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsom os
loved it
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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AMAZNG os...it ws really gud..👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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How dare you say it sucked!

It roaked! That's too in Arsha style!

It was brilliant and I'm going to save this to my favourite list!

Don't you date say it sucked! 😡
Edited by FrozenTeardrops - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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good one dear bt lil filmy bt chalega update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb OS.. beautifully written.. well done 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was amazing
the entire story was mind boggling
loved it

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