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anshika

@Kiarawinget16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

aha cute and nice one

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glmorous_diva

@glmorous_diva

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

amzing os
kriya sunti kyu nhi baat rey ki...agar sun leti toh acha hota...
thnkgod rey shi time pr aagya ...nhi toh pta nhi kya ho jata

loved it

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PseudoWriter

@..Evanescent..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

It wasn't boring at all!!

It was quite good actually!

Do keep writing ^_^

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Vrutanshi

@kreya204

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Wow!!!
Kriya makes a fool out of herself in d run for making it big in dancing as her career!!!
With all d protests by her loved ones she lets hersepf believe it for der protectiveness!!!
Den she gets sm senses kicked in her head by an eventful n dangerous dituation!!!
Its a nyc story actually!!!! 😃

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-Monika-

@-Monika-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Lovely...

literally loved it..

its a treat to read your work always..

do write more..

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Sanchita Naha

@Sanchita_14

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

👏 👏 very nice
Loved it gud work

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Ayesha

@Ayesha_Kreya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

so amazing yr! 👏

loved it! 2 da core 😃

hate dt jerk yuvraaj! 😡

but thank god rey saved her 😳

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Sridipta

@sri_crazlacious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

A big WOW!! 👏👏
Amazing concept..wonderful writing and a beautiful story.. 😊😊

I really loved the the way you started your story..it was amazing!!I badly wanted rey to beat utht yuvraj guy balck and blue..how dare he did or evn thnk of doing such thngs with kriya..😡😡But then again..rey was there for kriya with his heroic entry..😳
the end ws absolutely lovely..suprb! 😊😊

thnx for the PM..😊