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I loved first part the most.It perfectly explains wat rudra has gone through.
Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Awesome update
I love the diary entries part, it's written perfectly and wonderfully describing describing the grief of Rudra losing his mother from sadness to anguish which later turned into hate. Poor Rudra I feel sad for him.Laila, one of the Rudra's distraction from the pain of his wounded heart. She is in love with this arrogant soldier, though she knows that it's very harmful for his profession. She wants Rudra to give her his every pain but she isn't the lucky girl. She is ready to fade any pain, humiliation even at the cost of losing her self respect but still she won't get what she want. She is failing in her attempts for eight years. Love the way you describe Laila's intense feeling and her madness cum obsession for Rudra.Update next part soon
Originally posted by: chotidesi
Very, very well done. I loved the way you explored their relationship- his bruising of her self respect, how it hurt "that time"- wonderful job. I love the way you put everything into such a small space- it's hard to write long chapters, but it really does take talent to write short ones as well.
Originally posted by: binimoti
it was awesome, how you do it, with less words you say more, I am eagerly waiting for next update.
have read the first three, and enjoyed it too ... 👍🏼
Originally posted by: LivesInHope
Hiya
Wah ji wah!!
Wat a powerful dramatic piece of fiction.
It grabbed full attention from outset
Its stunning,
Im dying to read loads more of it.
Samina
Originally posted by: lourel24
I loved first part the most.It perfectly explains wat rudra has gone through.
It's very good...
Originally posted by: Exprimere
Must you shoot at my Achilles' heel? I love Laila. "More" was about Rudra and much more so, about Laila. Past and present walking in tandem.
"Perfection" moved me. What it means to be a soldier, what it means to return, and how much more does getting something back mean?The variety displayed on this thread is stunning. Kaleidoscopic.I love the adequate shortness of these drabbles. Yes, they are a tease, and keep me parched for more. However, they are crisp, expressive and imbibe in themselves emotions that are ocean deep.
Originally posted by: shagun-rocks
first of all i'm extremely sorry for the late reply...the last few days have been extremely difficult for me especially on the work front...now that i have managed to get a breather for myself, i sat down to red the latest installment of your FF...and can i say, i loved it...the diary entries gave a perfect glimpse of rudra's inner turmoils..also this whole unfinished business with laila is quite interesting...
p.s.: i may not reply on time, so please don't be offended..it's just that my work hardly gives me any respite these days...you can stop PMing me if you want to..i'll get the notifications as and when you update...it's just that i feel extremely bad if i'm not able to post a reply on time owing to my hectic schedule...
Originally posted by: princessunara
wow this one is amazing! the 2nd one is heartbreaking! gosh...cannot wait for more!!
Originally posted by: rangprab
Omg... i just read the Drabble... it is out of the world... brilliantly written...
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