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Aashifa

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: binimoti
it was really nice, waiting for next now.

Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: IronButterfly
Niceee

Thank you :D

Originally posted by: -DobByDoDgeR-
Aww amazingly written
However i do wish they were longer or atleast that you update like often cause its really difficult to wait for the next drabble
But anazing as usual anyway

Thank you, I can't write out longer ones. Whenever I try to I always ruin the feel of the chapter or what I want to portray because there is so much going on! Thank you none the less, I will try to make them a wee bit longer 😆😃

Originally posted by: shagun-rocks
just went through your note...i am glad to know that you have an idea well laid out...i also loved your previous installments..can't wait to read more...

Aw thank you ^_^ Yes hopefully this one will weave its way better, I hope you like the next one just as much if not more 😳

Originally posted by: lourel24
interesting

Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: ipkknd-fan
That was great!
Plz pm me the updates :)

Thank you, ^_^ I will do my best too :D

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Thank you once again everyone who liked and commented! Update coming up 😃

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Aashifa

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Posted: 11 years ago

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javeria

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awesome update

I love the diary entries part, it's written perfectly and wonderfully describing describing the grief of Rudra losing his mother from sadness to anguish which later turned into hate. Poor Rudra I feel sad for him.

Laila, one of the Rudra's distraction from the pain of his wounded heart. She is in love with this arrogant soldier, though she knows that it's very harmful for his profession. She wants Rudra to give her his every pain but she isn't the lucky girl. She is ready to fade any pain, humiliation even at the cost of losing her self respect but still she won't get what she want. She is failing in her attempts for eight years. Love the way you describe Laila's intense feeling and her madness cum obsession for Rudra.

Update next part soon

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Meena

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Very, very well done. I loved the way you explored their relationship- his bruising of her self respect, how it hurt "that time"- wonderful job. I love the way you put everything into such a small space- it's hard to write long chapters, but it really does take talent to write short ones as well.

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binimoti

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Posted: 11 years ago

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it was awesome, how you do it, with less words you say more, I am eagerly waiting for next update.

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..Jyoti..

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Fabulous update

Feel sad for Rudra

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SherryGS

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Mesmerizing! Will update more later.

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Aashifa

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Posted: 11 years ago

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GAH! Thank you guys ^_^ your comments excite me so muc they make me want to update sooner, but no no cannot do that 😆

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goguma

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Posted: 11 years ago

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have read the first three, and enjoyed it too ... 👍🏼

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ICanDoThis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Hiya

Wah ji wah!!

Wat a powerful dramatic piece of fiction.

It grabbed full attention from outset

Its stunning,
Im dying to read loads more of it.

Samina

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