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Posted: 11 years ago
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Each story is incredible.

Iv read them all a few times each!

I think u define;
Less is More

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello ji! I'm back- KJo ishtyle.

This piece starts with warmth, adoration, cheerfulness. And then switches to hate. I can't pinpoint the moment when that happened, but the transition was seamless. You take me for a ride of affections and emotions.

And yes, I do know what happens when you read your piece too many times. The insecurity monster terrifies you.

Between this, and "Disgust" there's unmatched difference. And that is the true test of a writer- the versatility. :)

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