fought for ur soul (virman..) DISCONTINUED

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heya guys im
with another story of mine..


I have already started it as an AR (armaan ridhima dil mil
gaye)


Now im gona
rewrite this story as virman story.. hope u guys enjoy reading it..

index..
intro page 1
part 1 page 1
NOTE
PART ~2
NOTE 2
PART ~3
PART ~4
PART 5
PART ~6
Part 7
FOR PMZ HIT LIKE ON PM POST..!!!
PART 8
PART ~9
PART ~ 10
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Intro..!!

Do you guys belive in magic... Evil spirits... Fight against evil spirts..!!

Wat if these are real..!!!

A normal fun loving girl becomes the soul mate of a person who has magical powers n he fights agaist evil spirits...!!!

1000 yrs ago ahem abdula vadhera.. Was beata (blesed ) with magical powers to fight against evil spirts... N his powers were inherited by his succesors...!!!

Two main characters of this story are
virat [ Kronprins(crown prince) of the beataians.. !!! ]
N
manvi ( fun loving normal girl.. Soul mate of virat..!! )

Other charaters will be introduded in the story itself..!!

Edited by little_angle - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 1

St joseph School
Auditorium was full n whole croud was chearing for the next perfofmance.
Croud.. : MM MM MM MM..

Lites go off n curtain opens..
Spot lite falls on two teenagers around 17-18..one is on drums n other holding a guitar..

Two girls start singing...!!
Ishq labon pe Ishq duaa mein
Jism mein, rooh mein Ishq rava, rava rawa ravaa

Ishq nazar mein Ishq bashar mein
Aks mein, raks mein Ishqe nishaan Nishan nishan nishan

Dum malang malang dum
Dum malang malang
Malang malang dum
Dum malang malang
Malang malang dum
Ishq ishq hai malang mera

Ishq hai, aawaara ;Ishq hai banjaara ; Ishq hai, angaara
Rehta hai, behta hai
Yeh ishq sharton mein
Ishq mein mit jaaun Ishq mein
bah jaaun Ishq mein ho jaau
Fana fana fanaa fanaaa..

Dum malang malang dum
Dum malang malang
Malang malang dum
Dum malang malang
Malang malang dum ishq ishq hai malang mera. !!

Whole croud is clapping n chering for the wonderful performance they gave...

Back stage..
Teacher : u girls did a gret job well done...!!
MM : thank u maam...
M : may.. we did it again...
maya : yes mani we both rock...
N both hugged each other...

( the girl on guitar was none other than our manvi(mani) n the one drums maya(may) manvi s best frnd cum band mate...)

MM are standing with there class mates...
Girl 1 : grt job girls...
Girl 2 : its time for celebration...
Wat say..
maya : hey u are absolutly rite wat say mani..
M : gry idea may... Party toh bnti hai... :-P
Boy 1 : wat about a frnds nite out at my place...
Boy 2 : ua guys i guess its a nice idea... Celebration for hit show n mani's bday... Wat say..
Grl 1: a perfect idea...
maya : done...!!! Wat about u mani..
M : wait let me ask di first... U know na may di dont like me going out for long alone..!!

manvi makes an excuse n moves to a corner...
Trin trin..
: hello
M : hiii di..
(jevika urf jevi.. manvi 's di..)
Jevi : how was ur performance..
M : it was rocking as always...
All my frnds are planning for a party to nite..
Jevi : no MANVI.. No nite party today . U are cuming back home now...
M : plz di its our sucess cum my bday party... Tom its my 18th bday.. Plz di...
Jevi ( angrily ) : no means no... Im sending the driver n u are cuming back home now itself..
M : bt di..
Anjali cuts the call without listening to manvi...

maya : mani di se baat hue..
Kya hua itni sad kyu.. Di ne mna krdia na...

M ( to her frnds) : soory guys.. I cant come for party di has already planned a family party for me...!! Sorry..
Grl 1: not a problem.. I hope u are giving a party tom..
M : yes ofcurce... Invites will be sent to u guys soon... Now i have to leave di ia waiting for me..

maya : mani yaar y u always listen to her... She is ruling ur life who can u live with such person..
M : may plz dont say anything about my di..
maya : but mani.. Vo hamesha apni mrzi chalti hai tum pr.. U are her sister.. Nt any slave...
M : enough maya.. I dont wanna listen a word agaisnt my di... She is my god my life.. She has all rites on me...
U know wat.. She is is nt my blod sister... Di n jiju adopted me from an orphanage.. Wen i was 5...
She has given me wat ever i want.. Cant i do thus much for... She is juat over protective.. N after jijus death... Her posiveness increased... I respect this feling of her... She loves me alot.. N dont wann lose me..

** FLASH BACK...
Orphange..

Many kids were playing their.. Bt a girl was sitting in an corner n busy in her drawing book...
A boy came running to the girl in corner.. :give this pensil to me.. Its mine... N snatches her pensil..

Poor girl runs behind that boy crying... N sudenly her foot twists n she fals down...
N started crying even more louder...
A couple enters the orpnage gate.. Seeing the girl crying they pick her up n tries to make her cam..
Lady : stop crying baby kya hua...??
M : didi.. Vo meri pencil legya ab main drawing kaise krungi...
Lady : ap drawing krte ho... Mujhe dikhao ge..??
M : jst nods her head..
Lady : gud girl.. Apka name kya hai..
M : manvi...!!!
The three of them moves towards the corner n MANVI shows them her drawing book...
Lady : are wah.. Kitni beautiful drawing hai...
M : pr main ise comolete kaise krun..??

Woden comes...
W : excuse me.. Ap log.
Lady : maam im JEvika kapoor. N he is my husband viren kapoor...
W : oh ya mrs kapoor... How are u.. Kl baat hua tha apse on phone.. About adoption.. U go n wait in our ofice ill call all the kids...
Jevi : no maam no need.. We would like to adopt manvi..

W : sure mrs kapoor.. Come to my cabin ill explain u all the rules...
Viren : jevi u stay with her ill go..
Jevi : ok..

Jevi : manvi ye lo.. N gives her pensip colors...
M : itni sari color wali pensil.. Thank you didi...
N starts her drawing...
Jevi.. : manvi apko ache lge ye clrs..
M : yes didi.. Thank u..!!
Jevi : kya ap humare sath chaloge humare ghar..
M mqkes a sad face...
Jevi : kya hua apko main achi nahi lgi..
M : ap ache ho... Pr agar main apke sath chali gye toh meri drawings...

Jevi : hum inhe bhi sath lejayenge...
Hum apko or bhi jda ache wale colours or drawing bks denge..
M : sachi...
Jevi : muchi...

Manvi hugs her...

Woden comes with viren..
W : u can take her mrs n mr KAPPOR.. Ill get her stuff packed..
Bt yes plz rember wat ever i told u..
Viren : dont worry maam we will take her care as our own child.. U need not worry...
W just nodes her head...
W : chalo manvi lets say bye to all yrs frnds...

W takes manvi with her..
W : manvi listen to me very carefully... Abse tum mrs n mr joshi ke sath rahogi .. Unki sab baat mna n unhe kabhi tang mt krna.. They are going to give u new life...
M : ok maam...

**end of flash back...

MAYA : im sorry mani i did not have any clue..
M : its ok may.. U know wat i was just 5 that time.. Bt i still rember the ful incident... jevi di n viren jij never made me realised this... They love me more than their life.. N i love them too...

MAYA : omg mani.. I never knew is rock star ke piche ek aise ladki bhi hai... Goshh...(n starts ticling her)
M : stop it may.. I got to go... See u at party tom...!!!

N manvi goes from their in her car...


Edited by little_angle - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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SO NYC STORY OT IS. NYC STARTING.LOVES MANVI RELATION WITH MAYA AND JEEVI. INTERESTING CONCEPT BASED ON MAGICAL POWERS.SO WAITING FOR THE NEXT.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice story virika adopt manvi but
how viren death update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsm start dear...loved it..
Thanks alot for pm and rewrite this story in virman version. ..
Now I can fully enjoy this...hahaha Fabulous. .
Love mm intro..
Maya n manvi friends. ...hahaha something different. ...
Love virika's concern n love for manvi. ..
Egrly waiting for our heto entry. ...
Continue soon dear. .
Keep rocking
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wat a concept dil
u rock it dil
loved the update
nd manvi's love for her di nd vice versa
loved to the core
um dil waiting without patience
update soon
waiting for virman's meeting nd
jeevi-manvi bond
viren's death
i m so sad becoz of viren's death dil
but i think a surprice is coming

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start!!!
Interestin n thanks for the PM!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update...
sad u killed viren first only
bt no worries as long it is virman
maya n manvi bbf ...interesting
waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update...
Loved it...
You killed Viren... :(
Love Jeevika-Manvi bonding...
Manvi is the soulmate of Armaan or Virat???
Because in the sketch its write Manvi the soulmate of Armaan...
But update soon..
Thanks for the PM..

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