fought for ur soul (virman..) DISCONTINUED - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago
Unres..
Finally you updated after a long time...
And still i loveee your story...
Wow what a awesome chapter...
Finally Virat truth came out...
They were husband and wife...
The flashback was just too good...
This story is really getting intersting...
Hope you will update soon...
Thank you the PM...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow dil supereb
actually i m very excited to read more nd more
this is awesome dil
supernatural powers nd especially the first meeting of virat nd manvi
really beautifully u potrayed it dil
update soon dil.
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Posted: 10 years ago
u soo much for ur like..

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n ur lovely coments.

@swathin. thank u dear..!!!😊

@sandhYA_123
thank u dear..
thats my fav song..
i will be updateing soonnn... stay tuned...😊

@chandiniebinda
thank u soo much dear...!!
im glad u liked it...😊

@halima_zaka
thank u dear..

@panamaa
aww thank u aannuuu baby.. ill be updating soonnn⭐️

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Posted: 10 years ago

PART ~ 12

next morning..

jevi : gud morning Manvi... get ready fast.. tanya is planing to spend wkend together...

Manvi : gud morning di.. Ok ill be in hall soon..


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Living rum..

Jevi : maine use bol dia hai.. She wil be cuming soon.. Tumhare dimag main chal kya raha hai.. Mujhe btaoge..?
(i told as u said.. She is cuming down.. Now will i guys tel me wat are u upto..??)

Tanya : relax di.. Abhi pta chal jayega... Kanu vo dvd milgayi..??
(realx dii.. Just wait for few mins...kanu u got the cd..??)

Kanu :.yup..!! Here u go..

Jevi : which dvd.. ???

Kanu shows her dvd...

Jevi : alu chat..?? (with schocked expresions..)

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After some time... All four of them were seated on sofa's in front of tv

Tanya : popcons.. Snacks.. Coke sab ready hai.. Bt movie konsi dekhen.. Vivah..
(snacks popcon coke.. All set.. Wich movie we soufh watch.. Vivah..??)

Kanu : no ways hum vo movie dekhenge jis ki dvd main laya hn..
(no ways v will watch movie of my choise..)

Tanya : ur choice no ways..

Kanu : tri vivah bhi nahi...
(nt even ur vivah..)

Tanya : tri lai hue movie toh no chance..
(zero chances of the movie u got stupid..)

Jevi : enough guys.. Kanu.. Tanya tumhare ps kon kon si movies hai..
(enough... Wich all dvds fo u both have..)

Kanu : tanya ke ps bs uski vivah.. N i jst have this one..
(tanya has her vivah.. N i jave only this one..)

Manvi : kanu tu plz apni wali dvd lga.. tani ki vivah torcher se btr hi hogi..!!
(kanu play the movie that u have.. Atlest it would be beter than tanya's vivah tourcher)

Kanu played the movie allu chat..

Manvi was least interested in the movie she was lost in her own thoughts..
10 mins were left for the song kala doria..

Tanya : kanu.. Kitni bekar choise hai tri.. Bnd kr ise.. Dekhe jevi di or manvi so bhi gye..
( yukk kanu u have such a bad taste.. Look jevi di n manvi are sleeping..)

Kanu : oye its such a mst movie.. Atleast tri vivah se btr...
(oh plz ots far btr than ur vivah..)

Kanu n tanya were fighting like tom n jerry..

Jevi n Manvi were trying their level best to stop these idiots..

Song starts in the movie.. With each n every line Manvi 's heart starts beating at a faster rate...

Tanya snatches remote from kanu's hand and was about to stop the movie..

Manvi : stop.. Dont change..

Manvi quietly listens to that song n was lost in her past.. Her dance starts moving in front of her eyes.. ( with the line.. Ek mera ranjhan aya..) Manvi blushes n give her cutesest smile...

The song ends n soo does her thoughts... She rushes to rum hiding her tears...

Jevi : kanu ab btaoge y exaclty all this.. U dont even like this movie much..
(kanu now will u tel me y u chosed tgis movie as far as i know u are nt much interested..)

Kanu : logic is simple bumi.. Taki manvi ko apne n vimu ke hapy moments yaad aye...
(simple logic dii.. So that manvi could remeber some of her happy moments with vimu..)

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Manvi 's rum..

Manvi jumps on her bed crying.. Her dance performane was roaming in her head again n again...

Manvi : screams.. virattt...!!!
N cries her heart out...

Manvi takes out all the stuff from her cupboard n places on her bed..

Picks up her scrap book.. 1st page it was neatly writen " Manvi and her virat... Memories of life.."

2nd page had a pics of dance event.. Manvi moves her hand on the pictures...

N thinks about that event..!!

** flash back..

Back stage... After dance.. Muskan come runing n hugs virat n then Manvi..

Muskan : U both did a great job.. Superb.. Bhai dekha i told u.. Ap aise hi dr rahe the... N Manvi.. Tune toh kmal hi krdia...
(u both were rocking.. Bhai i told u.. U were sacred without any reason.. N Manvi.. U were stunung..)

Jevi n viren came there..

Jevi ( huged virat ) : virat u were amazing...

Virat : thanks jevi..

viren : bhai u were really gud...

Virat : thanks bro..

Muskan : kro sab bhai ko congratulate kro.. Mera kya.. Sara kam maine kia.. Inhe mnaya main stage pr dhaka maime dia..
(nt fair evry one is congratulating bhai.. It was me how made him agre n pushed on stage..)

Virat : arreee.. Yes ye sab meri muski ki vja se hua hai.. Toh aj show hit hone ki kushi main muskan ke lie party...
(aree.. It was all posible coz of muski.. Soo for the suces of event party for muskan..!!)

Muskan : party.. Sach..
(party really ...)

Virat : much..
(yes...)

Muskan : are main apko manvi se milvana toh bhul gyi... Bhai maine apko btya tha about my frnd jisse maine apko milvana tha.. Here is she.. manvi chaudhary.. My 1st n very gud frnd here.. N mavu ye hai mere bhai virat n viren.. N she is like my sister our childhood frnd jevika..
(uppss i forgot to introduse manvi.. Bhai i have told u about my best frnd..here she is manvi chaudhary.. My firts n very good frnd here n ridz they are bro virat n viren.. N she is like my sis our childhood frnd anjali...)

manvi : hii..

Jevi : hey.. Plz come to the party.

Muskam : ye toh ayi gi hi meri frnd hai na..
(she Will surely come afterall she is my frind..

Viren : ab chalen.. Hume bahut preparations krni hai..
(comon lets go.. V have to do alot of preparation)

Muskan : haan aplog jao main sabko invite krle ati hn...
(u guys goo ill go n invite everyone)

** end of flash back..

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Other side

Jevi : nahi tanya rukja.. Use kudh hi apne ap ko smbhalna hoga..
(noo tanya dont goo.. Let manvi handle her felings aline..)

Tanya : bt di manvi ki condition i cant see her like this...
( bt i.cant see manvi like this .)

Jevi : main bhi use is tarah rote hue nahi dekh sakti.. Bt we dont have any other option.. Ise ye ldai kudh ldni hogi.. Apna past yaad krke..
(even i cant see her like this.. Bt we have no other option.. Let her remember her past..)

Kanu : age btao na story..

Jevi : dance event was huge sucsess.. Toh iske lie we all planed for a party..

** flashback..

Party hall..

Muskan : bhai u are best..

Virat : u liked it..

Muskan : i loved it.. All decoration is just super gud...

Jevi : psnd kaise na ata after all virat ne kudh apni princes ke lie sari preprarions kri hai...
(virat has personally supervised all the prep.. There is no chance that u will nt like it..!!)

Muskan hugs virat.. : love u bhai...

Viren : me n jevi also helped.. ( with a pout..)

Muskan : i love u all..!!

Four of them.shares a grp hug..!!

Party was going on a ful swing.. Muskan with manvi n other frnds were on the dance flor.. Virat was siting in a corner and observing manvi.. He had a diferent feling watching manvi.. His face fel seeing manvi dancing with other boys.. Anware of his true felings.. Just to divert his mind virat.. Went to viren an jevi.. N they three also joined the dance floor..!!!

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Days pased...

Muskan-manvi's friendship grew deper... N even now manvi was very much comfortable with viren jevi n virat.. As they never muskan alone..

Jevi : virat kya hua.. Kuch dino se dekh rahi hn u are behaving wired.. Every thing ok.. Tum thik ho na..
(wat hapen virat.. Im observing u from last few daya.. U are behaving a bit wired.. Is everyvthing ok.. U are fine na..??)

Virat : haan jevi im fine.. Tum jao enjoy kro.. Aj utne dino bad hm sab beach pr aye hai.. mujhe kuch der yahin bethna hai..
(jevii im perfectly fine.. u also go n enjoy.. its has ben long since we came here to he beach..i want to sit here)

Jevi : virat u cant hide things from me.. N u know that..now tel me wats the mater

Virat : i found her..

Jevi :(confused) found who.virat..??

Virat : jevi yaar how to tell u... Ok.. Listen.. I found my love..

Jevi : oh my god virat who is she.. Im soo hapy.. Finaly.. U got ur soul mate.. Tumne use btaya..

Virat : u are the first one jise btaya..

Jevi : tel me who is she...

Virat : mann...manvi.. ( m closed hid eyes..)

Jevi jumped in excitement.. N huged virat..

Jevi : oh my god.. Um sooo hapy virat.. Finaly.. U realised ur felings..!! dekha i told u kuch toh baat hai u cant hide anything from me..

Virat : hmmm.. thats y i love u... u are the best..

** end of flashback..

jevi : virat ne kafi bar try kia manvi ko btane ka.. bt use moka hi ni mila.. Bt virat kaise har mn leta.. She was her soul mate..
(virat tried many a times to tel manvi his feelings.. Bt he never got a chance.. Bt virat did nt lose hopes.. After all she was her soul mate..)

Kanu : bumi ek baat btaoge plz.. Kaise pta chlata hai ki kon apka soul mate hai..??
(bumi who do we get to know who is ur soul mate..??)

Jevi : really kanu ur asking thia ques from me..??

Kanu : toh or kis ae puchun..
(them whom should i ask..)

Jevi : kanu mere smne aisa bhula mt bno.. I have been observing u n tanya from lst one wk.. Chal kya raha hai..
(kanu dont try n act inocent.. I have been oberving u both.. Wat is hapening b/w u two..??)

Tanya : di kya ap bhi.. Ye toh kuch bhi bkwas krta rehta hai.. Ao age btao na..!!
(dii.. He is mad.. He speaks all nonsence.. U continue the story na plz...)

Jevi : tanya dont try n act smart.. Dont forget.. I know u both very wel.. N kanu.. Dont u forget.. Im ur bumi.. Bua + mami.. Double relation..

Tanya : di kya ap bhi...
(dii plz...)

Jevi : i dont mind of u cal me bumi..!!!

Tanya blushes hearing this n hugs jevi...

Jevi : im realy happy for u both.. Bt guys u need to be really careful.. U guys need to hide ur relation..

Kanu : dont worry bumi.. Hm pura dhyan rakhnege..
(dont wory bumi.. We will take care..)

Tanya : bt di aisa kyu..
(bt y dii..??)

Kanu : tujhe kuch pta bhi hota hai chipkali..
(do u know anything.. U lizzyy..)

Tanya : proper training tujhe mili hai naki mujhe..
(u have got proper training nt me..)

Jevi : tum dono ldna bnd kro.. Beatins ki power is incomplete without his/her mate.. Tabhi koi proper fighter bn pta hai wen their soul mate is with them as their spouse.. Dono ki life apas main judi hue hoti hai.. They can easily conect to one another from diferent oarts of the world.. Rather universe..humara soul mate hume pura krta hai dono ek dusre ki sabse bdi takat or kamzori hoti hai... N agar dono main se jis ki bhi death pehle ho jaye.. Use tb tk mukti nahi milti jb tk dusre ki death na ho... A beatin lives only onces.. Life n death ka cycle baki sabhi humans ke lie chalta rehta hai.. Bt for a beatian.. Its not posible.. It is said once a beatian always a beatian... N rahi baat how u find ur soul mate.. Vo bs hojata hai.. Ander se fel ati hai yes this is the one for me..!!
(u both stop fighting.. beataians ki power is incomplete without his/her mate.. one becomes a proper fighter only if their soul mate is with them as his / her spouse.. both of their lives are connected with each others.. they can easily conent with each other from different parts of the world.. Rather universe.. our soul mate completes us.. if any one of them dies.. his soul does nt rest in peace until the other dies.. both enter the heven together.. a betain lives only once.. It is said once a beatian always a beatian.. the cycle of life n death is only for the humans..n ur q how do we get to know how is our soul mate... that's an unknown feeling that tells u.. its nt possible to describe in words..)

Tanya : dont worry di.. Hm dono kabhi bhi dushman ko ek dusre ki kamzori nahi bnene denge..
(dont wory di.. We will never let our love to be each otjer wknes..)

Jevi kanu n tanya shared a hug..

Jevi : abhi tum mujhe disturb mt kro.. Ofice ka kam hai..
(now dont disturb me.. Have to do ofice work..)

Kanu : age ki story..
(bumi continue the story..)

Jevi : raat ko promise..!!
(at night.. Primise..)

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Posted: 10 years ago
dil this is going awesome
beautifully written by u dil
i want to know the full story soon nd where is virat.
i want to see manvi nd virat together
update soon dil
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Posted: 10 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY VERY GUD AND SWEET UPDATE.
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN BY U WHOLE PART.
IT IS TURNING MORE AND MORE INTERESTING.
TANYA AND KANU PART IS SO CUTE FIGTHING ON MOVIE HA HA.
LOVED THE FLASHPART MOST. VERY WELL WRITTEN.
MANVI COMES TO KNOW ABOUT HER SOUL MATE VIRAT.
WANTS TO KNOW MORE AND MORE ABOUT VIRMAN AND THEIR MORE AND MORE SCENES.
UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE.😊😊😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
Unres...

Awesome update..
Loveeedd it...
You updated after soo a long time...
It was really a good ans a sweet update...
Tanya and Kanu part was sooo sweet...
The flashback was awesome...
Manvi come to know about Virat being her soulmate...
Cant wait for more and more Vimran...
Pleaseee update soon..
Awesome update...
Thanks for the PM...
Edited by chandiniebinda - 10 years ago

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