fought for ur soul (virman..) DISCONTINUED - Page 10

Originally posted by: panamaa

awesome dil...

loved it

these story is a mystry nd i love mysteries

oh...so virat is a pure soul who can destroy every thing nd manvi can only bring fortune for him

that is amazing

update soon dil

Originally posted by: sandhYA_123

AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. LOVED IT. U UPDATED AFTER A LONG TIME. SORRY FOR LATE COMMENTING AS I DONT KNOW U UPDATED IT. AS USUAL UPDATE IS AWESOME. THIS STORY IS FULL OF MYSTERY. VIRAT IS PURE SOUL AND EVIL SOULS CAN TAKE ADVANTAGE OF HIM SO THATS WHY HIS FATHER DESTROYED THE WALLS.NOW THE GIRL WHO HE WILL GET MARRIED WILL CHANGE HIS FORTUNE. STORY IS TURNING INTERESTING DEAR. SO UPDATE NEXT PART SOON. TAKE CARE.😊😊😊

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

outstndng update dear...
So finally smthng abt our hero@@@
powerfull intro but also sad 4 him to not got normal life...
But lve the way stry prgrsd ...
Egrly waitng 4 virman frst meet:-q...
Thnx alot 4 pm
try to update soon
keep rocking dear

Originally posted by: pink1

Niice update

PART ~ 8

Next morning..

manvi : taniii... Get up we are geting late.
tanya : let me sleep yaar...
manvi : puri raat kya jagran kr rahi thi... Get up nahi toh main akeli chali jaungi...
( wat were u doing the whole nite.. Jagran.. Get up else i will leave alone..)

On hearing the word alone tanya gets up instantly..

tanya : tujhe hazar bar smjhaya hai maine n di ne bhi akele nahi.jna tune...
( how many times i n jevi di have told u not to go alone..)

manvi : (making a pupy like face ) aj mere presentation hai agar akele na jaun toh meri internal toh gyi na... Kudh ne toh 20 on 20 le lie...
( its my presentation today.. If my late.. Ill get a big zero in my internal.. U urself have take 20on 20..)
tanya : oye drama queen.. Ill be ready in 5.. No sory 10..

manvi : go now..
(giving towel to tanya..)
tanya moves towards the washrum..!!

On dining table..!!
manvi : ho kya hai sb ko.. Udhar tani ko itni mushkil uthake ayi n yahan di ab bhi late.. N kanu tum table pr betge bethe kyu so rahe ho...!! Kahim tum teno ne mujhe dump krke party toh nahi ki na..
(wats hapening today... Firstly i wake up tanya with dificulty.. Di is even late... N kanu y are u sleping on dining table...
Wait a min.. Did u guys had a party that too without me...)

kanu : nahi nahi aisa kuch nahi hai.. Vo new jagah gai na toh nend nahi ayi achese..
( hey.. Its nothing like that... Its a new place for me.. So couldn't sleep properly...)

jevi : or kya manvi tu bhi.. Btaya toh tha tujhe ek project pr kam krna hai..
( n manvi i had already told u.. I had to finish my project remember..)

manvi : o yeah bhul gyi thi sory.. Ap dono ka to valid hai pr vo heroine..
( oh ya.. Sorry i forgot.. U both have a valid reason.. Bt wat about that heroine..)

tanya : kisine yaad kia mujhe... Vo kya hai na kl raat ko mere hero my dream boy...
( somebody jst took my name... Actually manu..last nite.. My herooo my dream boy...)
N she blushes...

manvi : age bol kya.. Dont tel me kl raat fir tune vivah dekhi.. God kya hoga is ldki hai aisa kya hai vivah wale shahid main.. Mujhe toh us movie ke dialoges bhi rat gye hai... Pr main toh movie del krdi thi n cd bhi chupa do thi.. Tu new cd le ayi..??
( speak up now yr..dont tel me u agaun watched vivah last nite.. Oh god.. Tgis girl has gone crazy about vivah's shahid kapoor.. I dont like the film that much still i temember each n eavry dialoge bcoz of her.. U got a new cd.. I toh had deleted it from lapy n even thrown cd in bin..??)

tanya : wat it was u who deleted it... ???

manvi : shit.. Ye maine kya bol dia...!!!
(Shit wat i have said..)

tanya : how could u do this... Main fadun tre us dream boy pictures.. Jo bnati rehti hai...
(how could u.do this to manvi.. Wat i tore all the paintings of ur dream boy that u maje..)

manvi :.oye un pics ko hath toh lga ke dikha..!! Fir btaungi tujhe.. N vaise bhi vo pictures mere mind main hai i can make then jitni mar chahun...
( dont u dare touch those pics.. N more over tyey are printed in my mind.. I can make as many copies i want..)

Jevi : bs kro ab tum dono ye kya faltu behas kr rahe ho..!! Hazar bar mna kia hai... N manvi kyu ki del tumne
( stop it u two.. How many times i have told u not to fight like kids.. N manvi y did u del the movie..)

tanya.& manvi : sorry...

jevi : chup chap ab brealfast kro n leave for colge..
( have ur breakfast.. N leave for colge..)

In evening..!!

tanya : rmanu yaar vo sirf tre vehem tha aisa kuch nahi hua.. Its just tune 1st time akele kia.. Thats y..
(its nothing like that u are just feling it coz u did it for the first time alone..)

manvi : no yaar.. Aisa kuch nahi hai.. Pichle 3 dino mujhe aisa fel ho raha hai...
(no yaar its nt coz of that im feling it from past 3 days..)

jevi.: kya fel ho raha hai..??
(wat are u feling manvi..??)

manvi : vo di actualy..

tanya :kuch nahi di.. Isko lgta hai maya ise help ke lie bulari hai.. Pgl hogyi hai ye...!! Is chakar main isne apni performace bhi bech main chod di..!!
(actually di she fels maya is caling her for help her life is in dangour.. n coz of this she even left her performence in between..)

jevi : kya.. Pr kyu manvi..?? mujhe detail main btao kya hua hai...
(watt..?? y manvi.. tel me in detail every thing)

manvi : di vo...

jevi : manvi kya hua bacha btao mujhe...(gentle creasing her hairs n makes her sit on couch..)
(manvi wat happen baby tel me..)

manvi : pivhle 3-4 dino se raat ko dreams main mujhe maya dikha deti hai... Bahut hi kharab condition main.. Ek chair pr bethi hue hsi.. Kisi dark se rum main... Ekdm wk.. Or bar bar mujhe bulati hai...
(di from past 3-4 days im having bad dreams about maya she is in very bad condition she is tied to a chair in a dark rum.. she is very wk n caling me for help..)

n today in clg.!!

**Flash back begins..!!!

tanya : al the best manvi.. today is ur first stage performance in clg...

manvi : thanks tani...

tanya : kya hua.. Tune aj se pehle kabhi otna low sound nahi kia performace se pehle..
(wat happen manvi.. before today u have never sound too low before ur performance..)

manvi : kuch nahi yaar jst mising may.. Kash vo bhi hoti.. Aj meri use bina pehle performance hai..
( nothing yar im jst missing may.. its 1st time im performing without her.. i wish she ws here)

tanya : are yaar mavi..

Anouncement...

Put ur hands together boys n girls.. Now its time for our clg bnd..
manvi...from 1st year as lead singer... N for the 1st time its girls band..!!

tanya : jda mt soch go n rock the stage...
( dont think too much jst go n rock the show..)

curtain opens n spot light falls on a group of four girls wearing a perfect rock band kind of dress... Twp of them holding drum sticks in their hands n both of them moves towards two diferent corners where drums are kept... other two move towards the keyboard kept right next to the drums... n lastly another girl enter wearing a jeans n top dark n bright clr with a design of a girl singing on her top.. with a guitar in her hand... n she is none other than our manvi...!!!

with slow drumbeats the start their performance n the beats kep on going fast n the tune of keyboard n guitar accompany the beats perfectly making a perfect sound track..

1 2 3 4 Chocolate Boxes,
Men On Horses Valentine's Day,
Party Is On Saturday Teenage Popstars,
Filmy Filmstars Gulaab Ke Phool,
People Think These Are Cool

Ye Sab To Hai 4 On 10
Aaj Luck Hai Now And Then
Mere Jaisa Koi Kahan 10 On 10
Kaise Main Kisi Ko De Doon 10 On 10
Mere Jaisa Koi Kahan 10 On 10
Kaise Main Kisi Ko De Doon 10 On 10
Mere Jaisa Koi Kahan Ten On Ten

1 2 3 4

Meri Se Bhi Aadatein Bhi,
Meri Baatein Attitude Bhi,
10 On 10, 10 On 10 Main Jo Bhi Hoon,
Jaisi Bhi Hoon...

n manvi runs from the stage without caring about any one.. every body is shocked to see such kind of behaviour...

** end of flash back..