fought for ur soul (virman..) DISCONTINUED - Page 2

awesome starting
thanx for.pm cont soon

niak sharma
sandhya_123
pink1
googlu
panamaa
syed695
swathin
manuthi
nature2
jesmy143virman
chandiniebinda
nidhiagarwal


thanku soo much guys guys for ur lovely comments ...!!!😊
these mean alot to me..

@likes thanku all
n for silent reader thanku soo much for all those who read it..!!!

Part 2

Manvis place.. 1150 pm night

Jevi : manvi manvi.. R : kya hua di.. Jevi : come down kuch baat krni hai.. R : di can v talk tom im sleepy..

Jevi : manvi abhi its urgent..

Manvi was in very bad mood bt she came down coz her wanted to talk something urgent... At this point of hr..

M : di kahan ho.. Lite toh on krlete..!!

Sudenly lites fall on grup of people with their back facing manvi... One by one each turn around...

Jevi & Girl 1 : Tum jiyo hajaro sal, sal ke din hon pachas hajar Suraj roj aata rahe roj gata rahe, leke kirano ke mele Palachhin kaliya gin gin teraa har din, tab tak rango se khele Rang jab tak bakee hai baharo me Tum jiyo hajaro sal, sal ke din ho pachas hajar Yaha vahansham ho chaahe jahan Yu hee jhume shama sunake tumharee baate Pyar liye chand kaa tika liye Yu hee juganu liye chamake tumharee raate Nur jab tak bakee hai sitaro me Tum jiyo hajaro sal, sal ke din ho pachas hajar...

Girl 2 & Boy 1 : haye ni tere happy birhday te haye ni tennu happy birthday ni haye ni tere happy birhday te haye ni tennu happy birthday ni keh ke denna .denna denna... suit tennu patiala shahi sohniye leke dena suit tennu patiala shahi sohniye leke dena

Boy 2 & MAYA : Listen babe, I'll dedicate this song for you. A really happy you, who is next to me I waited for today, your birthday Your smile that looks at me oh It's really, really bright I want to pick those stars for you Happy birthday to you My beautiful love Baby, only for you Because you're here, I'm happy Happy birthday to you Just like today, forever Baby, only for you We're going to be together

T : Badhaai ho badhaai janamdin ki tumko Janamdin tumhara milenge laddoo humko Badhaai ho badhaai janamdin ki tumko Naa i have chocolates.. Ladsoo are nt my type..!! Doge na ridz !!

( T --manvis another frnd 'TANYA' she lives with jevi and manvi as a paying guest..)

All of them form a circle around manvi n move in circle + sing. : Happy Birthday To You -2 Happy Birthday To You, manvi..!! Happy Birthday To You Baar Baar Din Ye Aaye, Baar Baar Dil Ye Gaaye Tu Jiye Hazaaron Saal, Ye Meri Hai Aarzoo Happy Birthday To You - 2

(JEVIKA invited some of manvi 's frnds to have a small surprise get together )

**flash back 9 pm..

Jevi : helo MAYA..

MAYA : hey di...

Jevi : manvi is really upset coz maine party pr nahi jne dia.. So i was planing to arange a small surpise toning.. N i want ur help..

MAYA : sure di ap bs btao kya krna hai ill do that...

** end of flash back..

Manvi was surpised cum shocked to see her frnds n di wishing her like this at sharp 12 am...

M : di ye sab..

Jevi : ek rockstar ko wish krne ja isse beter option kya ho sakta kyu guys wat se..

MAYA : ofcouse di..!!

M : TANI tu kb ayi.. Omg tu toh 3 bad ane wali thi..

T : maine kaha n tumne mnlia..!! How can i miss my MANU's bday..

M : taniii ( n higed her..) i mised u..

T : i mised u tooo...

M : thanku soo much guys.. Dii.. I love u u r the best..

Manvi then cuts the cake n feds every one.. All of them are sitting n chit chating...

Boy : i hope di kl party hogi.. Ye uski replacement nahi hai..

Jevi : ofcouse tom v gonna have a blast party.. I hope invites sab ko milgye hai..

All of them noded in +ve.

Jevi : manvi this is for u.. N gives her a beautuful pendent.. Every one was amesed by its beauty execpt one..

Maya : can v plz see it..

Jevi : sure maya. N gives her the pendent..

Girl 2 its really prity yaar... Wat say tanii..

T : yeah its gud.. ( in a low tone..)

M : kya hua tani..

T : kuch nahi just feling tired.. Ill go in my rum..

M : u need something ?? U are nt wel ill spel wth u

T : not a need mani... a long nap will help..

After some more chit chat..

Maya : now ill also leave its too late..

M : yahi ruk jao na..

maya : i came with driver.. Ill leave.

m : ok..

All others also bid gud bye n leave from her place..!!!

M : di.. Ye sab kb kaise plan kia apne...??

Jevi : ofo manvi.. Relax shanti.. Let me speek..

M : ok now wil nt say a word...

Jevi : aj sham se tra mood off tha so maine MAYA ke sath ye plan kia n baki sab ko mna kia tujhe na btaye...!! Ok.. Now go n sleep.. Its late...

M : bye di love u... Gud nite..

Jevi : gud nite love u too..!!

A dark rum some other place..

: i guess o have found her..

A man in ful black black over coat.. : are u sure..??

: yes i am.. Vo pendent ki chamak.. I can not forget it.. Usse hlka sa hath lgate hi a curent flowed down my body... Im sure ye vahi hai jiski hume pichle 18 salon aw talash thi..!!

Man : idiot sirf us pendent ke through tumne ye gues krlia.. Yaad hai ma pichli bar kya hua tha... Aisa hi same oendent jis ldke ke pas tga uska dur dur tk usse koi relation nahi tha..!!

: yes bt this time i cant be wrong..!!

Man : ye loo.. Ye potion kl uske drink main mila dena.. Agar uske nails green hue for some time.. Fir pta chalega kitni sahi hai tumhri baat...

: ok chief...

Man : a agar ye expreiment fail hua.. Pta hai na tumhe main kya kr sakta hn..

: yes chief... Man : this will be ur last experiment... Mind it.. Soch smj kr use krna ise.. Got it .!!

: yes chief...!!

Man : idiot mera muh kya dekh rahio jao ab yahan se..!!!

: sorry chief.. Hade (gud bye..) ( bows down n leaves from there.. )

Out side that rum..

: is bar main ye moka nahi jne dungi..!! Main pta lga krhi rahungi.. Chahe jo hijaye... Itni asani nahi chodungi.. Chief ne mujhe aj uski vja se dhamki di tu finish me off.. Ab ye ldai chief ya humare clan ki nahi balki meri exestance hai...!!!

Loved it...
Awesome update...
Awww Jeevika had a suprise Manvi...
What happend with Tanya???
I guess in the last part that was Virat???

Heeyy on some points you still had there ridz instead of Manvi...
But awesome update...
Update soon... Thanksss for the PM...

NYC UPDATE DEAR. LIKED BIRTHDAY SURPRIZE AND B'DAY SONGS . BUT NOW A TWIST OF PANDENT COMES. HOPES 4VIRAT ENTRY IN NEXT UPDATE. SO UPDATE SOON DEAR.

nice update jeevika surprise manvi calling
her friend for her birthday and whom tanya
talk update soon

Outstanding update dear. ..
Really happy to see ur Update. ..
Abt update. ...love jeeman bonding. ..
Love the way u described every songs..
Tanya n manvi 's frnd. ...2nd shocking surprise. .hahaha. .
But I think she is negative. ...
In last part ...she was tanya na ????
But wd whom???? I think he is not virat...

Again sometime u write ridz in place of manvi ndhow r in place of m..
But we know its obvious. ..
Continue soon. .
Thanks alot for pm dea.
Keep rocking

wat a philosophical dialogues dil
loved it
is that tanya dil who described about pendent
awesome dil
loved it
love u
wen virat will come dil?
loved jeevi-mannu bond
update soon

nice update... can u pls write in english...