fought for ur soul (virman..) DISCONTINUED - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. LOVED IT. MANVI IS MISSING MAYA SO MUCH SO THATS WHY SHE RUNS FROM STAGE. JEEVI NARRATED THE WHOLE STORY OF VIRAT ,VIREN AND MUSKI TO TANYA AND KANU AWESOME IT IS. WRITTEN VERY BEAUTIFULLY. MAYA IS REALLY VERY CLEVER WHO CONTROLLED MANVI BRAIN. BUT THANK GOD JEEVI REACHED AT TIME . NOW WHAT WILL MANVI DO AND EAGERLY WAITING FOR HERO ENTRY. SO PLZ UPDATE NEXT PART SOON. TAKE CARE DEAR.😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its awsm..
Wd each update its becoming more intrsting..
And m more curious for next wt happened ???
Hate maya...she will not leave that easily...
Love flashback part..
Musky n her possessive bro...haha..
Keep rocking
Thanks alot for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dil.
Loved it.
It was really nyc update.
As story progresses it becomes more and more interesting.
loves flashback part narrated by jeevi.
Really virat and viren r possessive for her sis muski.
Maya is so clever she will not leave manvi easily
What will manvi do now.
I am very curious to know about it.
Update next part soon dil.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 7
Nice update
Virat is pue soul
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 8
Nice update
Manvi having dreams of maya
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part
Now manvi got to know about maya
Now how will jeevs convince her
Continuer soon
Pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART ~10


Tani : di ab kya hoga manvi ko kaise smjhayen..
(now how will we make manvi understand..)

Jevi : oh shit..

Jevi moves to her rum..

Kanu : bumi..

Tani : ab inhe kya hua..
(now wat happened to her)

Kanu : chalo dekhte hai..

(come lets check)

Kanu n tanya moves towards jevi rum..

Jevi on a call

Jevi : yes im sure.. Pegle bhi ye same mntra use kia hai n every time it worked.. Maya ko jb pkda tga i had used the same.. Bt is bar uspr koi asar hi nahi hua..
She did not even faint.. N na hi kuch bhuli..

(yes im sure.. I have used this same mantrs many times n it has always worked.. last time wen maya's reality coane uo.. I have used the same.. bt this time nothing happened.. she sis not faint..!!)

Brunik : are u sure..

Jevi : im 100% sure..

Brunik : its time..

Jevi : are u sure..

Brunik.. : yes jevi.. Her soul is strong enough... She will handel it...

Jevi : bt im scared..

Brunik.. : kaise krna hai sab tumtk pahunch jayrga..kuch bhi hua use kaise handle krna hai Uska procedure bhi sath main bhejvadunga..
(I will send u all the nesary items for the procedure.. n in case something wrong happen I will send remidial items also..)

Jevi : hade..!!

Jevi cuts the call

Tani : kya kha brunik ne
(wat did brunik say)..

Jevi : its time
Its time ki manvi ko apna pst yaad ajaye..
Its time hmne uski vo bloked memory ko uske smne lna hoga..
Bachpan ke uske vo dreams.. Uski vo paintings.. Unka truth use btna hoga..
(its time.. Now manvi have to remeber past.. Ots time to unblock her memory.. All her childhood dreams.. Her paintings.. We need tel her the truth..!!)

Kanu : mtlb ab rimi ko sab yaad ajyega ...
(means now rimi will know everything..)

Jevi : haann kanu..

Tani : bt vo sab hm krenge kaise.??
(how we will do that..??)

Jevi : brunki sara procedure hume bhejva rahe hai...
Bt rember guys hume ye jld se jld krna pdega.. Is se pehle maya koi chal chale..!!
(brunik will provide us the complete procedure... Bt remeber we have to do it asap.. B4 maya plans sometging else..)

Jevi : abhi tum log jao n apni powers ko regulate kro..
(u guys go take test n regulate ur powers...!!)

Tani : ok di.. Gud nite..

Kanu : gud nite bumi..

Next morning..!!
The house in whuch each morning was ful of hapiness was now tensed..

Jevi : manvi bfeakfast..??

MANVI : im geting late clg main krlungi..
( geting late.. Ill eat something in clg..)

By saying this manvi also left..!!

Tani : di ill also leave.. Bye..

Anni : dhyaan rakhna..
(take care..)

Kanu : dont worry bumi.. Ap tnsn mt lo hm unka dhyan rakhenge..
(dont worry bumi.. we take care of manvi.. )

Jevi : take care guys...

Kanu n tanya also leaves for clg..

The whole day manvi ignores kanu n tanya..
Bt tgey both folow her without leting manvi know about it..!!

Late nite..

Jevi kanu n tanya preparing for some kind of puja to be performed as instruted by brunik..

Jevi : puja ke sare rituals hm sab ko mil kr perform krne honge.. N after that hume apni powers ko is stone main ek sath dalna hoga..
(we have to perform all the rituals together.. n after thar we have transefer our powera in this stone..)

Kanu : bumi.. Rimi ko pichla sab yaad ajeya isse.. Apna pichla jnm..
(buni.. now she will remeber everything after this..??)

Jevi : manvi ka soul bahut strong hai.. Use bachpan se hi flases dikhti thi.. Islie at the age of 8 jb hmne pta chala ki ridz ke dreams were of her past life.. We blocked her memory.. Bt now its time to unblock that part...
(manvi's soul is very strong...she had flasehes of her past life since child hood..wen we xame to know abhout her dreams.. she was 8.. we blocked that part of her memory..n now its time to unblock..)

It was dark rum.. Filed with candle lites n a sweet fragrance of candles n flowers.. Kanu jevi n tanya were siting on floor in a circle holding their hands n chanting some mantras..!!
All three are unware of their suroundings.. N completely engrosed in the matra...

After half an hour.. They open their eyes n concentrte on the stone kept in the centre..

(imagine a kind of light emerges out from thier eyes n hits the stone.. N the stone turns into a shiny crystal..)

There was complete scilence in the rum.. Only sound that could be heard was of their breath..!!

Jevi breaks this silence that was in the rum from the past hr..

Jevi : lets go.. Hume ab ye crystal jldi se jldi manvi ki body pr touch krna hoga..
(lets go.. we need to touch this crystal with mznvi's body..)

Jevi pics up the crystal n the three moves towards manvi' rum..

On entring ridgima's rum they were schoked to see the empty bed..

Jevi : kanu tanya jldi manvi ko dhundo.. We dont have much time...
(kani tanya.. go search for manvo.. we dont have much time..)

Jevi cheked in bathrum.. N balacony adjoing manvi's rum..
Kanu went to terace.. As manvi loved watching starts..
Tanya cheked other ares inside the house...

Tani : di manvi kahin nahi hai..
(di i vouldnt find manvi...)

Kanu : kahi vo..
(may be she..??)

Jevi : oh no...

All of them ran towards the rum where maya was kept..
As expected manvi was there. in this time she has succesful untide maya..

Manvi being a beatian could easly entre the invisible wall was created by jevi..

Jevi : manvi ye tune kya kia..
(manvi what have u done..??)

Manvi was standing there huging maya..

Manvi : vahi jo mujhe krma chahie tha..
Chal may.. Maim hn na tujhe koi kuch nahi kahega...
(only that wat im suposed to do..!!
comon may.. no one will say anything to u..!!)

Maya : nahi manvi tu ja plz..
(no manvi u go..)

MANVI : dont wory may..

Manvi holds maya's hand n moves away from the chair...

The insident that took place while walking gave manvi another shock..
Maya was unable to move.. It felt something stoping her.. Manvi tried to pull her out.. Bt all her effort in vain..

Jevi : manvi plz chal yahan se..
(manvi plz lets go from here..)

N jevi moved towards manvi..
before jevi could hold manvi
Maya puled manvi towards herself.. Now manvi was again in that invisible wall..

Maya : manvi plz mujhe chod kr mt jna plz...
(manvi plz dint leave me..!!)

MANVI : may tu tnsn mt ke jb tk main tre sath hn ye log tujhe kuch ni kahenge.. Trust me..
(may u dont worry.. til the time im with u.. trust me .)

Maya : u are the only one whom i trust...

Maya hugs ridgima n gives an evil smile to jevi...
While huging manvi maya starts chanting mantra in order to capture manvi' s mind again..

Jevi moves rowards manvi n puls her apart from the hug

Jevi : kanu hold manvi n take this... ( thows the crystal .. Which kanu easily catches..)

Maya : u cant do this i will nt let u do...

Tani : we will see.. Kanu tu apna kam kr.. Main dekhti hn kon rokta hai aj manvi ko sab yaad ane se..
(we will se.. kanu u do ir work.. i'll see who will stop us..manvi wiol remeber evry thing now..)

MANVI : kanu chodo mujhe.. Ye kya kr rahe ho ap sab..
(leave me... wat are u doing..??)

Jevi n tanya were strugling hard to get maya in their hands...

MANVI : di tani..kya kr rahe ho.. Ap may ke sath aisa kyu kr rahe ho...
(di tani.. wat are u guys doing... y are u doing this with her..??)

In the mean while kanu places that crystal on manvi's forehead..

Maya was fully injured n so does jevi...
Tanya gave a tight push to maya which made maya lost her balance n fal on floor.. due to which she gets a deep wound on her head n it leads to her death..!!

Jevi's condion was nt les.. While fighting with maya she threw the iron chair on jevi.. N jevi falls unconcios on floor...

MANVI : jeviii...!!!

Edited by little_angle - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
its getting interesting
the update was really nice
i want virat to come soon
when will you introduce him?
i so wanted to read virman parts
thnk u so much for pms
update soon
Edited by VIRMANVIAN - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE DEAR.LOVED IT. WITH EVERY UPDATE MYSTERY INCREASES AND I LOVED THIS. STORY IS BECOMING INTERESTING AND INTERESTING. AGAIN MAYA PLAYED A PLAN TO CAPTURE MANVI MIND AND TO GET HER IN CONFIDENCE . BUT AGAIN JEEVIKA TANYA AND KANU SAVED MANVI .LOVES THEIR BONDING. FINALLY MAYA DIED BUT IN THIS PROCESS JEEVIKA GET INJURED . HOPE SHE WILL BE SOON F9. NOW WAITING FOR VIRAT ENTRY SO THAT WE CAN GET MORE VIRMAN SCENES. UPDATE SOON DEAR. TAKE CARE.😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dil.
Loved it.
It was awesome and awesome.
Full of mystery is there and i loved it.
These maya is really very clever but finally she died thank god.
It is becoming interesting with every update.
Now waiting for our hero entry.
Want virmans meeting and their scenes.
So update soon dil.
Edited by panamaa - 10 years ago

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