fought for ur soul (virman..) DISCONTINUED - Page 11

Originally posted by: nidhiagarwal

plz pm me

Originally posted by: sandhYA_123

AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. LOVED IT. LOVED THE FIRST SCENE OF MANVI WITH TANYA. WOW TANYA IS CRAZY OF SHAHID KAPOOR. MANVI HAS ALSO PICS OF HER DREAM BOY AWESOME. LAST PART WAS ALSO GUD WHERE MANVI USED TO MISS MAYA AND ALSO LOVED FLASHBACK PART. WHAT HAPPENED TO MANVI .LOT OF MYSTERY IN THIS STORY WHICH I LIKED THE MOST. UPDATE NEXT PART SOON AND UR OTHER STORIES TOO. TAKE CARE DEAR.😊😊😊

Originally posted by: panamaa

Awesome dil..

It was really nyc update .

Loved it.

Loved the bonding of tanya and manvi.

Jeevika is really very caring and protective sis.

So manvi has also dream boy paintings and i think he will be virat.

Loved flashback part also. At the end again mystery what happened to manvi.

Update next part soon dil.

Originally posted by: halima_zaka

Awsm

Originally posted by: pink1

Nice update she getting dream that Maya
Asking her help update soon

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

awsm update dear ... Loved it ..
Specially love all giris bond..,
flashback part was fbls.,
manvi's intro on stage...loved it*****
where is our hero???
missing him **#**#**
outstanding Wrk dear
keep it up ***
thnx alot for pm dea..
Try to update soon...

Originally posted by: jeharshu

It's awesome update dear

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Awesome update...
Loved it...
It was really nice..
Loveee the girls bonding...
The flashback was really good...
Where is our Hero???
When will he make his entry??
What happend with Manvi in the end???
Pleaseee update soon...

PART ~ 9

jevi : manvi wat hapen bacha y did u run away... this was ur dream since child hood...!!!

manvi : i know di.. Bt kb main perform kr rahi thi.. Aisa fel hua jaise may is caling me.. Vahi dark rum vo ek vhair pr.. Mera dream jo pichle 2-3 dqys se araha tha mere eyes ke age flash hone lggya n i could not.concentrate on my song.. Islie main vahan se chali gyi.. Main bilkul blank hogi thi us waqt thi di..
(i know di.. bt wen i was performing.. i felt as if may is caling me.. she was in dark rum teid to chair.. the dream that i was having from past two days strated flashing infront of my eyes.. i could not concentrate on the song.. i was totally blank thats y i left,,)

By saying this manvi had tears in her eyes..

jevi : ok ok relax.. Hojata hai kabhi kabhi.. Jb ap kisi ko itna mis krte ho tb.. Ab ye rona dhona bnd kr n take rest.. Tre examz start hone wale hai..
(ok ok relax.. it hapens sometimes.. wen ever u miss some alot.. now stop crying.. ur examz are starting soon..)

Late at nite..
jevi's rum

kanu : kya hua bumi ap itna upset kyu ho.. N chipkali tujhe kya hua..
(wat happen bumi y are too upset.. n lizi wats wrong with u..??)

tanya : bt di usko exact same kaise nzar a sakta hai..
(bt di how can it be.. exactly the same..)

kanu : kya kisko nzar koi mujhe kuch btayega..
(wat is hapening..?)

jevi narates about the todays incident..

kanu : ye co invidence bhi toh ho sakta hai na..
(it can even be a coincident)

jevi : nahi kanu.. Ye zarur koi plan hai kuch toh chal raha hai un logon le dimag main.. maya ko itna bhi leniant nahi lena chahie tha.. Pehle bhi itne sal vo humare sath rahi hm gues nahi kr paye.. N ab vo itni asani se nahi manegi..
( no kanu im sure its a plan... we should not have taken maya too linently.. she was with us for so many yrs bt we could not recognize her.. n im sure she will not accept her defeat easily...)

kanu :ap usko mar kyu nahi dete...
(then y dont u kill her..??)

tanya : mar toh hm use usi din dete bt vo ek hi rasta hai humari manzil yk pahunchne ka..
(i would have killed her that day even.. bt she is the only source to reach our rivals..)

jevi : tum log tnsn mt lo.. Bs manvi ka dhayan rakhna main koi tareka nikalti hn n kl hi brunik se bhi baat krumgi..
(dont take tnsn.. we need to take extra care of manvi now... ill find out some way.. n talk to brunik brunik..)

kanu : acha chalo vo sab toh thik hai.. Story age continue kren.. jevi : of cource .. Lets go..
(ok leave that.. lets continue the story...)

jevi : of cource .. Lets go..

The three of them again goes to the same rum they went the other day..

jevi opens an album n shows it to tanya n kanu

Pics of litle virat n viren playing runing praning on other..

jevi : virat n viren dono ek no ke shaitan the n spl virat.. Pure palace ko sir pr uthake rakhte the dono.. Shaitan hone sath sath dono bahut thi sensitive n emotional bhi the.. It was their 4th bday kb main unse pehli baar mili.. Mere dad bili dad ke manager the.. It was a grand event aj bhi i still remember each n every detail..
(virat n viren were no one pransters.. n too naughty.. sply virat.. both used to run in whole palce.. bt the both were really sensitive n emotional,, it was thier 4th day.. wen i met them.. my dad was bili uncles manager..it was a grand event.. i still remenber each n every detail..)

jevi points to a pic n says..

jevi :wen i reached their with my dad.. it was a huge palace beatiful decorated.. With a very beatiful green garden.. There were many games for kids.. Many jokers performing various acts.. Magic trics were going on wen my dad introdused me to bili uncle n anaya mom..

Now some pics of viren virat n jevi

jevi : Me viren n virat were in same cls.. We 3 were bst frnds bt i shared a spl bond with viren.. A few months later after my mom's death anaya mom mujhe palace main le ayi anaya mom always wanted a daughter.. N she found her daughter in me... Din raat hm teno ekhte hote the.. Inseprable 3 kehte the sab hume..
(Me viren n virat were in same cls.. We 3 were bst frnds bt i shared a spl bond with viren.. A few months later after my mom's death anaya mom bought me to the palace..anaya mom always wanted a daughter.. N she found her daughter in me... day night we 3 were always together... Inseprable 3 kehte the sab hume..)

Points to pic where viren n virat are fighting n jevi is siting with a cute baby in jer laps..

jevi : After 2 yrs humari gang main ek new member ayi.. Muski Palace ki princes.. Sabhi ne use bahut pamper kia including the 3 of us.. Uski har demad ko pura kia uske 3 bodygaurds ne.. i.e. me viren n virat
( : After 2 yrs a new member came in our gang.. Muski princes of the palace.. every one pampered her alot kia including the 3 of us.. all her demands were fulfiled by 3 of her bodygaurds... i.e. me viren n virat)

Pics of grown up viren virat jevi n muskan..

jevi : Time jst flew like a wind.. It was muskan's 18th bday n she asked for gift jiske lie no one was ready.. Use abroad jna tha for study.. Bt uske two over posessive bhai.. Jinhe mnana was dam dificult.. Pure ten din tk maha yudh hua tha palace main.. Bt jb muski me hunger strike pr jnake ki dhamki di.. Bili uncle ko mnana pda.. Pr virat n viren were totaly agaist.. Bahut pleading ke nad decide hua hm sabhi jayenge with muski..

(time flew like a wind.. it was muskan's 18th bday.. n she asked for a gift that no body was ready to give.. she wanted to go abroad for further studies.. bt her 2 over possive brother were totaly against it n it was really difficult to convince them.. it took 10 days to convince them...muskan decided she will go on hungry strike if they do not allow her.. n finally it was decided that we all three will go with her..)

Me virat viren n muski came to australia..!!

Some pics in ausrailia..!!

jevi : N yahan akar shuru hue the real jurney..
(and from here begun the real jusry of our lives..)

Hmsb palace main hi bde hue.. Bt now was the time jb hum sab ko ek new place main is world ko apne ap explore krna tha.. No doubt we had lots of facilities n servants.. Bt it was a difernt atmosphere from the palace.. N our clan

We all joined the same clg.. Muski for her graduation n me viren n virat for post graduation.. V 3 were nt at all interested in studies bt that was just for muskan.. Usko koi akela nahi chodta tha.. Vo humse bhi bdi prankster thi..
(we all gew up in the palace.. bt now it was time wen all steped out of palace to expolre the real world.. no doubt we had many facilites there in australia.. bt the atmosephere was totally difernt from our palace... we all joined the same clg.. Muski for her graduation n me viren n virat for post graduation.. V 3 were nt at all interested in studies bt that was just for muskan.. we could not leave her alone.. she was a big prankster.. more than us..!!!)

Trin trin...

jevi's phone bused n it flased manvi's name.. So they all came out of that sectet rum..

jevi : kya hua manvi..
(wat happen manvi..)

manvi : di ap teno kahan the kabse dhund rahi thi..
(dii where were u all.. I was finding u..)

kanu : vo actualy we all were on terace..

manvi : oh.. Okie.. Raat ko tum sab sote nahi ho then brrakfast table pr u all are slepy heads...
(okie.. I guys dont sleep at nite n then sleep on breakfast table..)

tanya : lets go n sleep.. Gud nite..

Al of them wished gud nite n moved to their respected rums..

Lste at night aprox 3 am.. manvi's rum

She is sleping on her bed.. Her forehead is wet with sweat.. Their are tensed expresion pn her face..

manvi : may kahan hai tu.. Mujhe bta main ajaunhi.. Kuch nahi hpga tujhe .. Tre best frnd hai main hn tre sath.. Main kuch nahi jone dungi tujhe..
(may where are u.. Tell me..ill come.. I wont let anything hapen to u.. Ur best frnd is with u.. )

manvi gets up from her bed n moves towards the store rum on 1 st flor in her house..

Voise : manvi dhayan se dekho left side pr.. Ek door hai.. manvi bacha lo apni may ko..
(manvi.. Look carefuly.. There is door on left.. Save ur may manvi..)

manvi : arahi hn main tu tnsn mt le..
(im cuming.. Dont wory..)

( maya has hypnotised manvi with her powers..)

manvi moves towards left side n starts banging the wal.. n after around 5 mins she founds the door.. manvi opens the door with a jerk n the things which were kept around falls down making a loud sound sound..

other sidee of house..

jevi tanya n kanu wake up eith this sound n all the 3 came out kanue their respected rooms runing..

jevi : ye kaisi awaz thi..
( wat kind of noise wa it..)

tanya : manvi kahan hai.. ill go n chek her..
(where is manvi.. Ill go n chek her..)

kanu : main bahar chek krta hn awaz kahan se ayi..
(ill go n chek outside..)

tanya runs to manvi's rum.. jevi n kanu were finding the source of noise...

tanya : jevi dii.. kanu..

kanu n jevi run towards tanya..

kanu : kya hua.. is manvi all rite..
( wat happen.. Is manvi alrite..)

jevi : kya hua tanya.. bolo .
(wat happy tanya.. Speek up..)

tanya : di manvi is not in her rum.. n jb main uske rum ki taraf ja rahi thi store rum se lite arahi thi..
( di.. Manvi is nt in her room.. Wen i was cuming here store rum's lite was on..)

jevi : shit jiska dar tha vahi hua..
(shit.. My fear has come true..)

kanu : u mean..

tanya : maya ne manvi ka mind caputer krlia hai..!?
(has maya captured manvi's mind..??)

jevi : jo tum log soch rahe ho mujhe bhi vaisa lgta hai..
(wat ever u are thinking .. Im lso feling the same..)

lets go n chek..

the three runs towards the store rum..!!

other sidee ( manvi )
with that sound manvi comes back into her senses..

manvi : main is waqt store rum main kya kr rahi hn.. manvi lgta hai tu pgal ho gyi hai ab nend main bhi chalne lgi hai.. chalo yaar vapis apne rum main..
(wat am i doing in store rum.. That too at this hr.. Manvi u have gone crazy.. Now u have started walking in ur sleep.. Lets go back to rum..)

manvi was about to turn.. her eyes fell on the secret door..

manvi : store rum main ek or door.. let me chek..

manvi moves insise the door n was shoced to see the scene infornt.. Ye stairs... N sudenly the flashes of her dream starts runing in font of her eyes..

She moves down the stairs..

Each n eavry thing was exactly the same as her dream about maya..

N the most shocking thing she saw maya in the same position as in hwr dreams..

maya : manvi .. I knew it tum zarir aogi.. Aoni may ko bachane u are my true frnd..
( manvi.. I knew it.. U will come.. To save me.. U are my true frnd..!!)

manvi : tum yahan kya kr rahi ho.. Mere ghar ke store rum main.. Or tumhara ye hal kisne kia..
(may.. Wat are u doing here in store rum.. N who did this condition of urs..??)

maya : or kon kr sakta hai jevi di n tani..
( who else manvi.. Jevi di n tanya..)

manvi : nahi ye nahi ho sakta..
(no this cant be posible..)

may : aisa hi hai.mavi.. Tum hi socho tumhare ghar main mujhe or kon rakhe ga.. N is rum ka tumhe toh pta bhi nahi hai..
(this is true manvi.. Who else will tie me in ur house.. That too in a secret rum like this one..)

manvi moves forward to untie the rope that bounds maya to the chair..

jevi : manvi stop..

manvi : di ye sab apne kia na.. Btao mujhe..
( di.. Did u do all this.. Tell me di..)

jevi kept mum..

maya : btao na jevi di kyu kia apne aisa..
(plz di.. Y did u do this to me..)

tanya : maya jist shut up..

jevi : manvi bacha plz chalo yahan se.. Main sab explain krungi..
(manvi plz... Lets go from here.. Ill explain u every thing...)

manvi : no.di main may ki bina kahin nahi jaungi..
( no di.. I will not go without may..)

manvi unties the nots.. maya was about to get up.. tanya catch holds of maya... manvi tries to push tanya bt jevi holds her n puts her thumb on manvi's forehead n chants some kind of mantra..
( jst like in part of manvi's bday nite.. where manvi faints after such matra.. N when she wakes up she does not rember that fight incident..)

Bt to thier surprise manvi does not faint bt instead becomes numb..

jevi : kanu u plz take her out.. We will take handle maya..!!

kanu moves out with manvi.. N jevi n tanya again ties her with the rope..

jevi draws ka circle around maya..
tanya : di kyu..??

jevi : tanya it wil creat an invisible wall around her.. Jis se she wil not be able to do such trils again..
(it will creat an invisible wall around her.. N she will nt able so such triks again..)

Saying this jevi n tanya moves towardd the living rum where kanu was waiting with manvi full of many ques..

jevi : manvi

No responce..

jevi shakes manvi

jevi : manvi plz ek bar meri baat toh sunlo..
(manvi plz listen to me once..!!)

manvi :( shouts) apne maya ke sath aisa kyu kia di.. Kya bigda tha usne apka..
(y did u do tgis with maya di.. Wat has she done..??)

jevi : manvi plz..

manvi : no di aj apka koi excuse kam nahi krega.. Main may ko vahan se nikal kr rahungi..
( no di.. None of ur excuse will work today.. I wil save may..)

jevi : tum aisa kuch nahi krogi..
(u will not do any such thing..)

manvi : i will...

Saying this manvi moves to her rum