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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
part 3

nice update
loved it.. The surprise is nice
someone is trying to kill manvi ... But I think its not Tanya but its Maya
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
part 4

so that's the plan of jeevika and Tanya to trap Maya
nice both of them saved manvi from Maya
but where is virat ... Waiting for his entry
so virat ,,, jeevika and Tanya are from same clan
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: little_angle



ill be waitning for ur coments...!!!



done
sorry for the late
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Love this story..
Pleasee update this story soon..
Waiting..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
THANKUU SOOO MUCH PEOPLE FOR UR COMENTS...
THESE ENCOURAGE ME LOT..

IM UNABLE TO RPLY ON EACH N EVRY COMENT...




N ALSO SOORY FOR SUCH LONG DELAY..
HAD EXAMZZ...

HOPE U WILL LIKE THIS PART...!!!

Edited by little_angle - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
part 5

Recap.. Jevi found out the actual culprit who wanted to harm manvi... Maya..

Next morning manvi woke up with a head ache..
Jevi :.gud morning manvi ab kaisa fel kr rahi ho..
( gud morning manvi.. How are u feling now..)

MANVI: di hm party se ghar kb aye.. Mujhe kuch yaad nahi araha..
( di wen did v came back from party.. I dont remember anything..)

Jevi : are chil manvi vo jo kl juice pia tha use tujhe alergy hogi n u fainted.. Fir main or tanya tujhe ghar laye...
( chil manvi.. U fainted coz of alegy due to drink u had.. Me n tani got u back home..)

MANVI : ok..!!

Jevi : chal tu fta ft ready hoja ill prepare breakfast..
( now u go n get fresh up.. Ill prepare breakfast..)

MANVI : ok di..!!

Jevi leaves to prepare breakfast.. Before going to fresh n up manvi cheks her phone..

MANVI : omg maya ke itni sari mis cals n msg... Mujhe pta hi nahi chala.. Ill cal her up..
God y she is not picking up...

( omg soo many mis cals n msg of maya.. N i did not even came to know.. Ill cal her up.. God y she is not picking up...
)

After 3-4 tries still no response..
Manvi opens msg box..

Maya 's msg...

Mani sorry aise bina mile jarahi hn.. Bt i have no other option dad ka phone aya n mom is not well she is really very critical Mujhe apne ghar vapis Germany jna hoga.. N vo bhi hamesha ke lie.. Ab humari schooling khatam hogi hai n dad want me ki main apni graduation vahin se krun + sath main humara family busines..

( soiry mani.. I m going even without meeting u.. Bt i have no other option.. Dad caled me n mom is not wel.. She is very critical.. Im going back to my parents my home germany.. N that to forever.. Our schooling is over n now dad wants me to to do my graduation from there n also help him in family busness..)

Manvi was shocked reading the msg..!!

MANVI : diii... Taniii...
Jevi n tanya : kya hua kyu chila rahi hai...
( wat happen y are u shouting..??)

(both said together )

Manvi ran runing to jevi.. Sobbing..
MANVI: dii.. Tanii...
Tanya :kya hua..
( wat hapen..??)

MANVI : tanii vooo ..
Tanya : mani..kya bhain bhain kr rahi hai bolegi bhi..
(y are u crying.. Wil u say something..)

MANVI : diii dekho ye mujhe dant rahi hai... Diii.. Apko pta hai vo na...
Uuaaiinn (sobing...)
( di.. Tani is sscolding me.. U know wat...)

Jevi : manvi rona bnd kr n bta..
( manvi stop crying.. Speek..)

MANVI : di may chali gye hamesha ke lie bina mile bs ye msg chod kr..
( di may went foe ever.. Without evwn meeting me.. She just left this msg..)

N shows her the msg...
After reading tje msg..

Jevi : manvi.. Tune pdha na emergency hai.. use jna pda..!!
( manvi calm down.. U read her msg careful.. It was an evergence tgats y she left lile this...)

Tanya ties to consoul her..
TANYA: mani dekh use jururi km ths islie hi gye hai na... U should be happy for her...!!
( mani it was urgent.. Only thats the reason she went.. )

MANVI : hmm u are rite... Pta toh tha hi she wil go one day..pr bina mile bina warning.. Ill mis her..
( u are rite.. We alredy knen one day she has to back.. Bt like this even without meeting... Ill mis her )

Jevi : chalo ab go n get ready tumhare clg admision ke lie jna hai...!!
( now go n get ready.. We have to go for ur clg admision..)
MANVI : ok di...

After breakfast 3 girls went for tanya n manvi 's clg admision..

Late at nite...!!!
Jevi on cal with some one..
Other side..: hello..
Jevi : i know ap preshan hai bt she is fine trust..

( i know u are in tension.. Bt she is fine trust..)

Other side.. : tum pr trust tha isle ye responsibilty di.. Acha ye btao koi progres hue..!!!
( i trusted u thats y gave u thos responsibility.. Leave this... Is there any progress .?)

jevi : nahi as usal us mtra ke bad faint.. Bt u dont worry im tring n v wil suceed some day..!!
( no.. As ussual she fainted afrer that mantra. Bt dont worry im trying n v will suceed soon..)

Other side.. : in know ab tumhe apni powers bdhani honing im sending him..
( i know .. Bt now we have increase our powers.. N im sending him...)

Jevi : how can he.. He is still young..

Other side.. : v have no other option.. Kl raat ke maya insisent ke bad uske clan ke log or jda try krenge to ...
According to our sources.. Maya ek powerful member thi unki clan ka.. Unhe bahut bda los hua hai n vo log shant nahi bethenge...

(V have no other option..after maya 's incident that clan will try more to harm manvi...

acc to sources maya was an imp member n its a huge loss to them.. they will surely take an action...)
Jevi : i know i agre bt uska yahan ana safe hoga..
( i agree bt will it be safe for him..)

OTHER SIDE : this wil be his practicql test ab time agya hai vo fight kre apne parents ki tarah .. Dont forget he has triple powers..
( this is hos practical training.. Now its time he waill have to fight jst like his parents.. Dont forget he has triple powers..)

Jevi : thik hai jaisa apko sahi lge.
Hade..

( ok as i say...
Hade..)

N cuts the call...!!

Few days pased smothly.. Now manvi has came out of shocking news of maya left like this...!!!

Manvi n tanya started their clg...
From their scul frnds none of them were their clas it was only tanya n manvi...
Bt coz of their friendly nature they made lot of new frnds & were enjoying new clg life..!!

A wk later..!!!
Near clg gate..!!

A boy entered gate on a sports bike with ful speed.. N coz of which bokks fall dawn from manvis hand...

Sh : who the hel.. Biklul tamez nahi hai ise..
( maner less creature..)

Manvi bent down to pick up the boks..!

TANYA :ise toh main sabk sikhati hn..
( ill teach him a lesson..)

MANVI :.relax tani..

TANUA : aise kaise relax..!!
( how can i relaz..)

N drags manvi to bike paking..
that boy was standing with his back towards manvi n tanya..
Tanya holds his arm makes him face them...

Boy : excuse me..

TANYA : tamez nahi hai tumnhe.. Itni fast bike chalete...
( dont u have maners.. How to ride a bike..)

That boy was lost in his thoughts.. Watching the two girls standing in front..

TANYA : oye hello tumse baat kr rahi hn..
( excuse me im talking to u..!!)

Boy : im sorry..

Tanya was about say something manvi stops her..

MANVI :.its all rite...
Chal tanii...

( its all rit Lets go tani..)

Boy :.excuse me actualy im new here can u plz guide me...

TANYA : do u really think il do that.

MAVNI : tani..

tanya : wat..

manvui : chup.. im sorry from her behalf... Go strait then 1st rite.. Vahan pl Reception n library jo info chahie vaham se mil jayegi...
( im sory from her behaf.. Go straight n then rite.. Respetion n library is there.u eill get onfo from there...)

Boy : thanks ( with a smile..)

TANYA : tu pgal hai use sorry kyu bola..
(are u mad mani y did u aplogize from him..)
MANVI : tu cls main chal..
( lets go in class..)

Evening at home..!!

MANVI : tani relax..

TANYA : wat relax he is dam iritating.. godd..!!! N more over he is in our cls n asinment partner..

( in cls teacher informed that for this wks asinment cls will be divided into grps of 3 .. Manvi tanya n that new admision boy..)

MANVI : itna bhi nura nahi hai vo...
(he's not that bad..)
Jevi : kya hua..
( wat hapen..)

Manvi was teling the clg incindebt

Ting tong..

tanya : main dekhti hn..
( il chek..)

Tummm...!!!
(youuu...!!!)


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Posted: 12 years ago
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nic upadate dear n yapii i m 1stt n tx 4 pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update..
Loved it..
Maya left...
That new guy is that Virat???
With how was Jeevika talking???
Loved how Tanya was angry..
Update soon..
Thanks for the PM...
And how was your exames??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. WELCOME BACK. LIKED THE UPDATE. SO MAYA LEFT. AND TO WHOM JEEVI IS TALKING REALLY A SUSPENCE. MANVI IS SO NYC THAT SHE HELPS NEW ENTRY IN COLLEGE. I THINK IT IS VIRAT. SO WAITING 4 THE NEXT SO THAT SUSPENSE CAN BE REVELED. SO UPDATE SOON NEXT PART. TAKE CARE.😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really its after long time..
But u have ur own reasons. ...
We understand that. ..hope u also rock in exam...
Abt update. ..As always outstanding. ...
Poor manvi. ...she crying fr that evil maya. ...but we know she is unaware abt her motive...
Once again jeeman rock...they are best..
Love tanya bonding wd manvi. ...
And who is new guy ?????
Is he virat????
Egrly waiting for our hero 's entry...
And who is on door ?????
So much questions na ???
Plzzz Update soon. ..
Egrly waiting for next chapter. ...
Thanks alot for pm dea. ..
Keep rocking dear.
Tc

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