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palaayan

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Pastellitesoulx

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Posted: 12 years ago

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awesome os.loved the way you wrote about the emotions of arshi through the song.beautifully written.want more stories :)

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@EchTee

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Caught u..;)

Awesme.os.. waiting for.more

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schwa

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Such a lovely story!

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Japonica

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Bring it on, girl! So looking forward to the story!😊

Finally got round to commenting!

What an exquisite little story you have woven around the exquisite lyrics of the song. The story was so beautiful, M. Your stories are like the cherry blossom that drift off the cherry trees at beginning of spring in March! Loved the way you captured the intimate moments of their life.

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-UnknownSoul-

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Loved the OS..

loved their emotions..

how they had arranged marriage and he said he can never love her

but she won and he fell for her..

everything was beautifully written 👏

awesome 😳

Edited by kidrauhlforever - 12 years ago

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Yipee another story from you

And series one too

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dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 12 years ago

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That was stye most intimate thing I have read yet. Brilliantly written and the character's backgrounds were brilliantly sketched

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

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And you do it again

How you do it I don't know

But thank you for writing this

Ahhh the song woven in so beautifully with their emotions

That was just magical

The way he loves her

And the way she held him together

Poor arnav he had gotten love from his parents

It was his nani who gave his life stability and love

Took right decision to marry him to khushi

And with her he again believed in love

And was able to come out of his grief after his nani death

Wow just loved it

Hope there shall be more

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Kaay

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hayyee... Manreet. This song is just so beautiful <3 The deep meaning just makes it so beautiful!

I just love the way you write and describe everything! It's just so beautiful!

Just loved it!

-- Kiret (:

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