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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

baby...mera res he kya..??

i will comment here 😊

Beautifully written OS baby...loved the way you started from his pov...how the day marks so much importance for him...how her presence matters to him...the beautiful confession ...her honest effort to make him feel special...loved the way she expressed her feelings...and how he stopped her from talking further by placing his lips on hers

."Am tired of running away from own my feelings Swayum...I always knew I like you...there is a very special place for you in my heart...I dreamt of you every single night... I don't know when ...why...how... I fell in love with you...but never had courage to face all this... today as it is a very special day...I thought to face ...and confess my feelings...and love for you ...yes I love you...I love you Swayum...she continued ...actually the fact is that...I always loved you...the thing is i never accepted it...and hurt you innumerous time...by the time tear started flowing from her eyes...m sorry...m sorry for all those time when i hurt you...when I..."

Loved the end...love after death is the purest form of love...loved the way he confessed that his life holds no meaning without her

Love the way you write baby..simple yet touching...it reflects ur pure heart...

love u my rockstar

Ur Di❤️

Edited by _Deepika_ - 11 years ago

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: _Deepika_
baby...mera res he kya..??

i will comment here 😊

haan haina...yaha nai...pm karna

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prateek

@prateek.007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Such a wonderfull ride..Seriously i just loved the way u started..The flow of emotion and their master execution was amazed me..It was honest read where u wrote swayam's part,His pain and his happiness,all of them was beautifully covered..Somehow i felt it was emotional heart wrenching read there..At the end Confession was also beautifully wrote,one can easily loved that..Ending was sad but i loved those words..So in whole n sole,Perfect Done..Keep writing..

Thanx for PM
Sorry for late

Prateek

Edited by prateek.007 - 11 years ago