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Manisha Bhardwaj

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: OceanicRockStar

thanks Manisha...
actually i wanted to write something sad...so come up wid this

okk bt you have to give a HAPPY ENDING to your next write-up...

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Himani

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Posted: 11 years ago

thanks Manisha...
actually i wanted to write something sad...so come up wid this okk bt you have to give a HAPPY ENDING to your next write-up...
well if i will write...then will surely try to give a happy ending

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GlamourousPearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

(Cry) (cry) (cry)...

Sharon's confession... B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L...
Very touchy line..."because he survived...he dies everyday"...

Keep writing...n pm too plzzz

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darshita

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Posted: 11 years ago

WHEN I READ THE START IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL AND WONDERFUL GO...
FINALLY REALIZE AND CONFESS UP THE LOVE WAS AWESOME...
BUT U MADE A SAD END... BUT WAS FANTASTIC ... LOVED IT

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

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Posted: 11 years ago

edited comment on pg1 :)

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Sakshi Shah

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: OceanicRockStar

Thanku Sakshi for dedicating such beautiful lines... 😊

You deserve this! 👏

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

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Posted: 11 years ago

res

unres

it was amazingg himani

a perfect blend of emotions

it had it all from romance to pain

i loved sharon's gesture, her confession

tat was one beautifully written section

the end though left me sad for swayam 😭

all in all a very well formed os 😛

do write more

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanku Sakshi for dedicating such beautiful lines... 😊

You deserve this!👏

hey thanks a lot dear...but really dont think i deserve this much

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JensenVruShan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Such a beautiful OS 👏. Swayam's emotions seemed so real and pure

Looking forward to other works 😊

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fanista

@fanista

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Posted: 11 years ago

oh god there is no 2nd part for this ?

gosh this was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G

loved it

i wanted 2 part 😔

but it's ok

OS was perfect

and painful indeed

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