SWARON SS:Swayam and Me(Current Track)UPDTD PART5

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Prachi

@Prachijainn

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

DI!!!!!!!!!!!!

😊😊😊

Fabulous update!!!👏👏👏

The SWARON talk at the end was just PERFECT!!!👏

Everyones concern towards Sharon was sho sweet and very YOU!!!😊👏

The engagement of swaron in hospital WAAH!!!WAAH!!!👏

Swayam gives a diamond ring to Sharon (Very cute)

OH WOW!!!⭐️

The song PHIR LE AAYA DIL was the cherry on cake😊

Everything was just perfect!!!😃

-IN HOPE TO HAVE MORE STORIES FROM YOU

-WITH LOADS OF LOVE

-PRACHI

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

finally !!!! sachi

firstly i m really sad ki itna accha story came to an end 😭

but sachi seriously tis was a perfect end to such a epic begining

coming to ur chapter

i loved it when the gang said together swayam

even the world knows

swayam se jaada sharon ko koi nahi jaantah

moreova it had a swayamish feel to it

the confession was emotional

n the epic i love you scene wud

always hold a spl place in my heart

it was magical

all in all a very well formed pleasing read 🤗

do write more

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sanchiswaron

@sanchiswaron

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

awww that was so cute reading 5 updates all together literally made me cry

thank you for this

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

perfect and beautiful ending... loved it...

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964103

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Sorry for the late comments

Both the chapters were totally amazing!!

Very beautifully written...

Loved the ending..

Swayam's emotions, his dad!! Sharon's reaction... Lovely!!

That "I Love YOU" was the cutest!!😊

Keep writing!! All the best!!😃

Edited by acceptng_lyf - 11 years ago

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apy_swaron

@apy_swaron

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Such a beautiful piece of writing... Ohh just can't get over it...

Wow... Sharon monologue was penned so beautifully..

And the "did i just say papa"...was soo cute...

I have sent u a buddy req...so plzz pm me wen u write something next...

Loved this one...

Continue writing..😊

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JensenVruShan

@JensenVruShan

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

OMG such a perfect and beautiful ending

The whole OS was wonderful

great writing and waiting for more of your work

Thanks for the PM😊

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Sachi! After reading your OS, I feel that each author whose book(s) you have read and who have inspired you to take up writing must be intuitively very proud today because what you have written is ethereal! Sorry, couldn't comment on the former parts because of NMAT prep but I'm so glad that I read this story! The entire flow was incredible! Kudos, roomie! That last part about I Love YOU was just. I can't even! Can I just assume that it was a sort-of mini dedication? xP

Just kidding! Waiting to read more of what your awesome brain has to write! Lots of love! :D :*