SWARON SS:Swayam and Me(Current Track)UPDTD PART5 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Such a beautiful and emotional chapter
loved Swayam's dad's conversation with his future Bahurani
and finally Swayam has made an entry, it was subtle yet painful how you penned SwaRon's feelings and not being to talk to each other
Only one complaint, the update was too small. a longer one next time
Thank you the PM😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Thank You for the encouraging comments ! Sorry for the small updates, this time it will be BIG than earlier! I hope you like it.Unfortunately or fortunately its the last part of the SS!

PART FIVE

As I opened my eyes, I could see everyone Happy. I never knew I could be so much important to all of them. I was happy to be the reason behind their Happiness. My thoughts were given a break by all of them.

Dad:- Are you alright, darling?

Rey:- How are you feeling Shar ?

Simmi:- Are you ok babes?

Kria:- Aap ko kaisa lag rha hai?

Rinni:- Thank God tum uth gayi Shar.

Vicky:- Main Doctor ko bulakar laata hu.

Nilesh:- Finally, you opened your eyes.

Bharat:- Sharon uth gayi, Party toh banti hai bhai.

Aashi:- Aap thik types toh hona?

Amar:- Main tumhale liye kuch khane k liye laata hu.

Papa(Swayam's Dad):- Sab chup ho jao, use thik se saans toh lene do. Sharon beta tum kuch bologi nahi?

Tears started flowing by seeing all of them so concerned for me. Kria came and hugged me tight.

Kria:- Sharon, do not cry dear. Hum sab aapke saath hai. Ab sab thik hai, koi problem nahi hai.

All this while I noticed Swayam , he did not speak, he was just looking down. I hope he is done with his Guilt trip.

Everyone was waiting for my reply but as soon as I opened my mouth to speak, words weren't coming out, I just couldn't speak. They all got tensed. Vicky entered with Doctor.

Dad:- Doctor, she is not able to speak. Whats wrong with her?

Doctor:- Often, when patient goes through such a big accident..they loose their voice for few days or weeks or may be forever. But Sharon seems to be alright according to her Reports. I guess its just a matter of few days. You need not worry Mr. Raiprakash. And until she gets her voice back, you all could play Dumb charades with her. Lets see who knows Sharon best?!

Gang together shouted "SWAYAM, He knows SHARON the best!"

I blushed as I heard them say his name. I remembered how he knew what I wanted, when I had got Throat Infection because of Asthma.

I wanted to speak to everyone so badly and especially Swayam but damn I am not even audible to anyone.

Doctor:- Ya ,Swayam please help your friend out. She needs you. And all of you (referring to Gang) go out, meet Sharon afterwards. Let her rest, Swayam you wait here. Mr.Raiprakash please come with me for the formalities.

Everyone hugged me and bid me Goodbye. They promised me to visit often.

Only I knew how I felt being away from Swayam all this while. I felt drowning in the pool of his Brown orbs. He helped me to sit properly on the bed. We both were crying. I let my arms out, towards him and initiated for a hug. He hugged me tightly.

Phir Le Aya Dil

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Phir le aaya dil majboor kya keeje
Raas na aaya rehna door kya keeje
Dil keh raha use maqammal kar bhi aao
Wo jo adhoori si baat baaki hai
Wo jo adhoori si yaad baaki hai
Wo jo adhoori si yaad baaki hai

Karte hain hum aaj qabool kya keeje
Ho gayi thi jo humse bhool kya keeje
Dil keh raha use mayassar kar bhi aao
Wo jo dabi si aas baaki hai
Wo jo dabi si aanch baaki hai
Wo jo dabi si aanch baaki hai
Wo jo dabi si... aanch baaki hai

Kismat ko hai yeh manzoor kya keeje
Milte rahe hum badastoor kya keeje
Dil keh raha hai use musalsal kar bhi aao
Wo jo ruki si raah baaki hai
Wo jo ruki si chaah baaki hai
Wo jo ruki si chaah baaki hai

We needed this badly. I knew how Swayam must be feeling all the while when I did not open my eyes. Even I have felt that pain, when Swayam was in Hospital. I am not upset with him, not even 0.1%. We both have suffered equally and its not his fault all the time. The Day I had decided I want my Swayam back, I knew it would be difficult. But I knew from the very first day that I won't quit. Atleast Swayam had given me less pain than I have. We parted from the hug after what felt like eternity. He wiped my tears and gave me a peck on my lips, even I reciprocated the same. I smiled seeing his 1000mm smile. I have always loved his smile. Swayam has many qualities which every girl would want in her partner, but his smile is cherry on the cake, which no one else can have. He has that amazing Charm, which makes my heart melt.

He took my palm in his , caressed it lovingly.

Swayam:- Sharon

I just love the way he says my name. LOVE is what I feel after hearing my name from Swayam.

Swayam:- How are you feeling now?

I nodded him to say that I am fine.

Swayam:- You know na that I love you.

I made a heart with my fingers and gave him a flying kiss , reciprocating I love you.

He smiled seeing my gesture.

Swayam:- I am sorry for all the happenings, I should have trusted you. I am such a bad guy. I say that I know you in and out, and I have failed in it. I am sorry Sharon. Please mujhe maaf kardo.

I kept my palm on his mouth and nodded negatively. All the accusations were false. And I don't care if there was even 0.1% truth in it. All I know is We love each other madly,deeply and only that matters.

Swayam:- Sharon, hum aagese ye galtiya kabhi nahi krege. I won't judge you ever. We will talk to each other and sort the problem together.

I nodded positively.

Swayam:- Mene kabhi sapne me bhi nahi socha tha ki Ruhi aisa kar sakti hai. Voh toh tumhare accident k baad jab Kria aayi U.S.A se usne Ruhi par shak kia, and eventually we got to know about her plans of destroying you. Tumhare phone pe uske Doctor ka call aaya tha, jo mene receive kia . Fortunately, everything started falling in place and with the help of Kria, Rey and Gang and Sach ka pata chala. I am so ashamed of myself for believing someone like Ruhi instead of my love.

I looked at him and tried to ask that Where is Ruhi now?

Swayam:- Two days back VP sir sent Ruhi to Mental Hospital at Agra. You know what, Kria wanted you to see her going there, she was adamant that Sharon hi Ruhi ko sabak sikhyegi..But Ruhi was getting worse day by day. So, finally we had to send her. Kria had even clicked pictures of Ruhi sitting in the Ambulance.

And I chuckled thinking of Kria .

Swayam:- Keep this apart. Lets start everything afresh. Will you give me the second chance to Love you forever? Will you be my Fiance ?

I:- YES! YES!! YES!!! I got my voice back!

Swayam:- Was it for my proposal or for the happiness of getting your voice back?

I:- Dumbo, it was for proposal. Now, come on lets get engaged.

He slid a beautiful Diamond ring on my pale hand, which reminded me that I am still on Hospital Bed.

I:- I do not have a ring for you Swayam.

Swayam:- I have got one for me, wait.

And with that I am Engaged with Mr.Swayam Shekhawat.

GANG:- Congratualtions!!!! Congratulations and Celebrations ! SWARON are BACK!

We were shocked , but than we continued grinning ! Everyone started Dancing in Hospital only.

Swayam took a chance and murmured,

Swayam:- I LOVE YOU!

I:- I LOVE YOU!!

Swayam:- Why didn't you say "I LOVE YOU TOO"?

I:- Because saying I love you too is like replying back compulsorily but I LOVE YOU so I LOVE YOU!

Swayam:- Ohh, so that's the case haa.

And he kissed on my forehead.

TOGETHER AND FOREVER TILL ETERNITY

-SWARON-

The End

I hope you all enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it! PLS Comment and hit the Like tab,if you liked it even a bit!

Cheers,

Sachi.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Aamzing..its a small word to describe ur writting... 👏
Nicely penned... 😊 awesome..well done
Sawron parts..was juz.. 👏 👏
Hands off to u... 😊 😊
Waitting fr mr ss frm u... 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
happy ending... nice update... keep writing... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Waooohhooo gal...u like out of dis world...mein ne last update toh usi din padi thi BT I really wanted to read all da 5 updates all together n den comment...n here I m speechless...omg seriously...salutes to u...happii hppi ending...BT tell me how to react on dis line
Swayam:- Was it for my proposal or for the happiness of getting your voice back?

Omg omg...purely swaronish...n worth reading...n i love u wala part toh super duper cute hai yaaretermly thankful for keeping me in here...eagerly waiting for ur more wirteups...


Lastly gal ur marvelous... 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
wonderful ending...

nd engangemet part was nic...

keep writting more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Lovely ending!
Beutiful update!
Awesome story!

Keep writing more.
Love,
Sakshi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
perfect ending dear...
swaron are engaged... 😃
ruhi in hospital...relieved...
keep writing..
thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Beautiful ending
Loved the convo n proposal
Her voice got back
Do write more on Swaron
Waiting for more works
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Awww such a cute update
Romantic and loving
The perfect engagement any one could have

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