SWARON SS:Swayam and Me(Current Track)UPDTD PART5 - Page 8

Awesome update.. 👏
Swayam and sharon part was so adroble 😊 & emotionaly.. 😭
Next part plz update soon.. 😊

sorry galti se ho gaya!

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli

omg tis was one hell of a update !!! sachi

first of all i need to say how splendid n amazingg ur update was

it was emotional n heart-touching

tis update made me reach out for ur sharon who

is thr weaker physically but

mentally she can feel her swayam's defeat

his pain n tat small portion whr

swayam begs her to return was

beautifully writen 😭

i also loved tat portion whr swayam's father

was talking to sharon

as a writer you definitely progressed

i can see so much maturity in ur material

take a bow girl

all in all a very well formed update

Originally posted by: Tan.vish.K

Sachi!! Sachi!! Sachi!!

I'm really very very Impressed girl 😃

There has been such a remarkable improvement in you as writer 👏

You have caught the right emotions and put them across beautifully with your words

I liked your idea of writing the entire SS from Sharon's POV 👍🏼

The way you are progressing with the story is marvellous 👏

But 1 complain..

Give longer Chapters ya!!! 😭

The 3rd Chapter was so freaking emotional

The realisation and each persons emotions were beautifully penned down

And yeah also 1 question

WHERE IS SWAYAM??? 😲

Update soon dear..

Really eager to read ahead 😉

And Sharon ko jaldi theek kar do

P.S Sorry for the late comment was really caught up with hell lot of things

Love

Tanvish 😃

Originally posted by: sachi123

Ohho,itnii taarif😆😛! I am soo soo happy! Thanx a lot Rosy for making my Day sorry Night :P! You take a bow for understanding my characters so well and thinking such a big thing about them. I lloved it when u said "Ur Sharon"😃! (Blue line)..I promise next time i will write longest update ever,u can sleep while reading it though, :P!

superb update... plz update soon... 😊

Itne chotu sa update mere chotu se heart KO bahut bhaari kar diya...pain or any emotion can b felt tru ur words...lyk kasam se yaar...hats off to u

Liked da way u penned it down...
From very beginning of da update till da end ...just tab...
Glad swayam finally was present der in dis update +5 days bk too...n ufff yaar da way u hv written his 5th day visit...baap re made me senti...
Very sweet n meaningful convo between da father n daughter in law...


Ur updates r short bt to da point n very Impactful...loveddd it...
Hoping Sharon all well in ur nxt update...

Thnks for da tremendously beautiful update,...n thanks for da pm dear...

finally swayan dad to came to meet sharon... bur finally sharon had heard swayan
and that why she got back and i thing it the whole gang... interest...
do continue soon and pm me

m amazed by ur creativity...
such an awsum way to express the story...
u actully peeped into the mind of a patient...comma patient...and pen dwn their thoughts...
so beautifully written...
loved it thoroughly..😊
grt job dear...keep it up..😊

😒 😭 etna chotu update ??