SWARON SS:Swayam and Me(Current Track)UPDTD PART5

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Itna chotu sa update😭

But beautifully penned

Loved the words of Rishi

Swayam's state well described

Finally Sharon is awake coz of Swayam

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

loved it... swayam's father is really a nice person... it's true that swayam is an emotional person... finally shar responded... hope she get well soon.. thanks 4 d pm

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

awesome part..

loved d swayam's dad's convo with sharon.. that was so cute n awesome..

finally swayam made sharon react n she opened her eyes.. waiting for next part..

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Sakshi Shah

@sakshibshah

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Swayam ki entry finally hui !
You showed it beautifully !
By god...It was too awrsome.

Update next ssooon!!!!! n bit long plz!

Sakshi.

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shaaz23

@shaaz23

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Nice update
Sharon's duncle was too sweet
Swayam the lover made the entry
Update soon and plz long one

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sumana.shesha

@sumana.shesha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Wow :)

Beautiful SS :)

Very well written :)

Loved it :)

Awesome :)

Update soon :)

PM me :)

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Prachi

@Prachijainn

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

SOOO AWESOME DI !!!👏👏👏

BOHOT ACHHA THA 👏👏

PAR ITNE BHI CHHOTE UPDATE NAHI

ABHI JALDI SE SHARON KO PURI TARAH SE THIK KARO

UPDATE SOOON

LOVE YOU DI

PRACHI

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Yaar itna small chapter not done at all. .
Ab comment bhi chotu sa hee milega. .
Superb. . Finally swayam is here. .
Emotional one again very well written. .
I wanna see swayam taking care of sharon. .
Yaar as soon as start reading it gets over pls give a little longer chapter cos till i read n dat feel comes it gets over so woh effect n essence Nahi reta. .
Ur writing brilliantly n am enjoying it but a little longer chapter would be better. .