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Aashifa

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Posted: 11 years ago

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javeria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Awesome Drabble.

Love the way you deeply describe the hard lie of soldiers and of Rudra. A weak scared human is hidden behind proud, determinant and strong facade of a soldier. I wonder how he have spent such a painful life all alone without sharing it with other. he has been ignoring it by concentrating on his other life, his job towards the country but now it's impossible for him to avoid the wounds of his broken heart and it seems he has finally find someone to cure him.

Continue and update soon.

I am loving this fantastic series of Drabble.

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Meena

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Posted: 11 years ago

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This line: They were not allowed to return in urns of gold to be disbursed in the pure waters of India, neither were they allowed to return draped in the colour white for burial

Enough said. You've turned me over to the dark side as a fangirl of your work. I believe it will be very difficult for me to leave 😆

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SherryGS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

I am loving the way you and other brilliant writers in this forum have given Rudra this biography that makes him the man we think we know.

Edited by SherryGS - 11 years ago

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..Jyoti..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Well written..loved it..

Thanks for the pm

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binimoti

@binimoti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

it was really nice, waiting for next now.

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Aww amazingly written
However i do wish they were longer or atleast that you update like often cause its really difficult to wait for the next drabble
But anazing as usual anyway

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shagun-rocks

@shagun-rocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

just went through your note...i am glad to know that you have an idea well laid out...i also loved your previous installments..can't wait to read more...

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ipkknd-fan

@ipkknd-fan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

That was great!
Plz pm me the updates :)

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Aashifa

@curledup

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: saarah96
cant wait to read more=]

Well I hope I can satisfy you with the next update :D Thank you ^_^

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Awesome Drabble.
Love the way you deeply describe the hard lie of soldiers and of Rudra. A weak scared human is hidden behind proud, determinant and strong facade of a soldier. I wonder how he have spent such a painful life all alone without sharing it with other. he has been ignoring it by concentrating on his other life, his job towards the country but now it's impossible for him to avoid the wounds of his broken heart and it seems he has finally find someone to cure him.
Continue and update soon.
I am loving this fantastic series of Drabble.

Thank you thank you ^_^ I honestly have no words when people say nice stuff about my work which is so contradictory considering I do have words 😆 but yes the aim is to show that he isn't all what they would think him to be. Thank you ^_^

Originally posted by: chotidesi
This line: They were not allowed to return in urns of gold to be disbursed in the pure waters of India, neither were they allowed to return draped in the colour white for burial

Enough said. You've turned me over to the dark side as a fangirl of your work. I believe it will be very difficult for me to leave 😆

D'aww thank you ^_^ I hope you like the following updates as much as you liked this one ^_^

Originally posted by: SherryGS
I am loving the way you and other brilliant writers in this forum have given Rudra this biography that makes him the man we think we know.

Thank you ^_^ Yes Rudra is a favourite to write about 😆

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