TINKERING LAUGHTER...AY ONE SHOT - Page 3

Originally posted by: xMarauderx

Ohk...actually smriti...even I never got that the skating thing was supposed to be a dream!!! I think you should have put the dream part in italics and you should have shown ashi waking up from her dream/nightmare cuz then we would have understood that it was a dream!

But I loved the fic and esp the way you ended it...I loved ashi's bitter laughter. I loved how ashi's turning bitter towards yuvi and at the same time yuvi's falling for her! What an irony...or paradox?? Sorry I don't really understand both these figures of speech and I bet neither do you😉

lol its all your and only your fault devilzz since u hav stopped editing my fics tab se al dis messy messy is happening😭😡hw do u expect me to knw ki dream hai to italics main likhna chahiye and maine ashi ko wake up karte hue dikhaya..her pillows all covered wid tears n all....neways next time se u better get bac to ur editing job😛and yaa obliged daat d grt devilz finally thot of barsofying her precious typed ink in dis fic😉thaankuu meanooo😃and i loved d ending loads loads loads i think i personaly did a good job so heres one for the ending👏👏...lol modestys gone out of stock in my blood so sowiee for boasting...😉

hey well me too din understand it was a dream......n here i was debating wid harshu how cud yuvi smash her down this 😆 u dunno we had a maha debate on ur one shot 😉 bt now i knw the plot n i am relieved 😛 n i am sry i really din understand it was all a dream of ashi .....so i found it a lil weird.....i mean yuvis behaviour n all.....hope u 4giv me 4 nt understanding it 😳 ......luv ya dear 🤗

Originally posted by: ~Tia_ranveer

It's amazin.... 👏

oyee dear thaanx sooo much glaad to see a comment after soo long in dis long lost ficcy u made my day wid it thaanx🤗🤗it realy means a lot☺️