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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

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Episode 188
Jhooth
Bankar baarish ki thandi phuhaar
Mere dil pe jab dastak de gayi
Ansuna kiya tha dil ki pukaar
Par harpal tum kareeb aati gayi
Tumse door rehne ki karta raha koshish
Magar badhta hi raha tumhare liye kashish
Nazar na hata saka, bhanwar mein jaise kho gaya
Tumhari muskaan ne rachayi thi saazish
Aankhon ne aisa jadoo kiya
Aansuon ki baadh mein dil beh gaya
Haar chuka tha dil ki zid par
Tumse kehne ko bhi raazi ho gaya
Dil cheerta hua dekha ek nazara
Phir laut aaya waqt ka wo ishaara
Jhootha hai dil aur dil ki baatein
Kisi apne ne dhokha diya dobara
Masoomsi wo muskaan jhooth thi
Aankhon ki kahi saari baatein jhooth thi
Jhoothi thi fikar jo tumne jataayi
Behlaane wali saari adaayein jhooth thi
Fareb ya dhokha, kya doon isko naam?
Iss dagabaazi ka tumhe kya doon inaam?
Socha bhi na hoga tumne kabhi
Tumhare jhooth ko aisa doonga anjaam
Translation:
Turning into a cool sprinkle of rain
When you knocked on my heart
I let the call of the heart unheard
But you kept coming closer
I tried to remain far away from you
But kept increasing, the attraction towards you
Couldn't take off my eyes, got lost like in a twister
Your smile had devised a conspiracy
The eyes created such a magic
My heart got carried away in the flood of tears
I lost at the tenacity of my heart
I even acceded to tell you
Saw a sight that tore away my heart
The sign of a time returned
The heart is a lie and so are its words
Once again someone dear betrayed
That innocent smile was a lie
The words that your eyes spoke were all lies
The worry that you displayed was a lie
The soothing flairs were all lies
Deceit or betrayal, what should I name it?
What reward should I give for this treachery?
Never would you have thought
The conclusion I would give for your lies


beautiful Durga.
How you captured in your words, ASR's pain, his turbulence after misunderstanding Khushi was so perfect.
Felt a pang of pain for ASR, not only because khushi was proved jhoothi in his eyes, but because he misunderstood such an angel, who loved him immensely.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sohara

beautiful Durga.

How you captured in your words, ASR's pain, his turbulence after misunderstanding Khushi was so perfect.
Felt a pang of pain for ASR, not only because khushi was proved jhoothi in his eyes, but because he misunderstood such an angel, who loved him immensely.

Thanks Sohara. 😊 It is a difficult time for both of them. But perhaps this aag ka dariya is necessary for them to go through to come out with a love so strong and pure that nothing can overpower it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Episode 189
Amidst the heartbreak and ensuing chaos that was unknown to almost everyone, there was a celebration taking place, dreams finally being fulfilled, a happy occasion bringing cheer and joy to everyone around. The marriage of Payal and Akash. Even ASR couldn't help smiling looking at his delighted young brother, perhaps the only time he smiled that night while his heart battled a storm. Khushi who was dazed with the sudden turn of events didn't notice that smile, else she would have known that ASR didn't really mean to carry out his threats.
Here's a happy one amongst this series of painful poems.
Payal Akash Marriage
A demure bride bedecked in wedding attire
A bashful groom anxious to fulfil his desire
A verbal confession of love on lover's day
This special day chosen to be their marriage day
The wedding rituals begin with cheers and gaiety
Teasing the shy couple with talks quite naughty
Surrounded by loved ones and well wishers
While some eyes well up with happy tears
A long cherished dream is now being realised
Buaji, Amma, Babuji bless their cherished pride
Overwhelming are these moments for the bride's family
Payaliya, the loving daughter is married finally
A brother is happy, while a sister is lost
The families rejoice except Mami who's crossed
Akash carries his Payal whose cheeks turn red hot
And promise to help each other by removing life's knots
Edited by DurgaS - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episode 189
Amidst the heartbreak and ensuing chaos that was unknown to almost everyone, there was a celebration taking place, dreams finally being fulfilled, a happy occasion bringing cheer and joy to everyone around. The marriage of Payal and Akash. Even ASR couldn't help smiling looking at his delighted young brother, perhaps the only time he smiled that night while his heart battled a storm. Khushi who was dazed with the sudden turn of events didn't notice that smile, else she would have known that ASR didn't really mean to carry out his threats.
Here's a happy one amongst this series of painful poems.
Payal Akash Marriage
A demure bride bedecked in wedding attire
A bashful groom anxious to fulfil his desire
A verbal confession of love on lover's day
This special day chosen to be their marriage day
The wedding rituals begin with cheers and gaiety
Teasing the shy couple with talks quite naughty
Surrounded by loved ones and well wishers
While some eyes well up with happy tears
A long cherished dream is now being realised
Buaji, Amma, Babuji bless their cherished pride
Overwhelming are these moments for the bride's family
Payaliya, the loving daughter is married finally
A brother is happy, while a sister is lost
The families rejoice except Mami who's crossed
Akash carries his Payal whose cheeks turn red hot
And promise to help each other by removing life's knots


Beautiful Thoughts👏 for these two who were getting into new phase of life without the turbulence of the tremor what Arnav and Khushi were taking on their shoulders.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episode 189
Amidst the heartbreak and ensuing chaos that was unknown to almost everyone, there was a celebration taking place, dreams finally being fulfilled, a happy occasion bringing cheer and joy to everyone around. The marriage of Payal and Akash. Even ASR couldn't help smiling looking at his delighted young brother, perhaps the only time he smiled that night while his heart battled a storm. Khushi who was dazed with the sudden turn of events didn't notice that smile, else she would have known that ASR didn't really mean to carry out his threats.
Here's a happy one amongst this series of painful poems.
Payal Akash Marriage
A demure bride bedecked in wedding attire
A bashful groom anxious to fulfil his desire
A verbal confession of love on lover's day
This special day chosen to be their marriage day
The wedding rituals begin with cheers and gaiety
Teasing the shy couple with talks quite naughty
Surrounded by loved ones and well wishers
While some eyes well up with happy tears
A long cherished dream is now being realised
Buaji, Amma, Babuji bless their cherished pride
Overwhelming are these moments for the bride's family
Payaliya, the loving daughter is married finally
A brother is happy, while a sister is lost
The families rejoice except Mami who's crossed
Akash carries his Payal whose cheeks turn red hot
And promise to help each other by removing life's knots

great ode to the only happy moment of that day Durga. Sea of difference between what their respective siblings going through that moment. Wonderful edit on the top with the Knot.. and the collage with all the wedding colors profusing.. Akash and Payal just made for each other, both shy and demure.. like khuhsi teased payalji.. akashji..
Yes, khushi would have truly realized asr didn't mean to annul his brother's marriage.. wonder what he would have done had khushi refused to budge.. he might have found another means to tie her to himself..
Wonderful pieced durga.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episode 188
Jhooth
Bankar baarish ki thandi phuhaar
Mere dil pe jab dastak de gayi
Ansuna kiya tha dil ki pukaar
Par harpal tum kareeb aati gayi
Tumse door rehne ki karta raha koshish
Magar badhta hi raha tumhare liye kashish
Nazar na hata saka, bhanwar mein jaise kho gaya
Tumhari muskaan ne rachayi thi saazish
Aankhon ne aisa jadoo kiya
Aansuon ki baadh mein dil beh gaya
Haar chuka tha dil ki zid par
Tumse kehne ko bhi raazi ho gaya
Dil cheerta hua dekha ek nazara
Phir laut aaya waqt ka wo ishaara
Jhootha hai dil aur dil ki baatein
Kisi apne ne dhokha diya dobara
Masoomsi wo muskaan jhooth thi
Aankhon ki kahi saari baatein jhooth thi
Jhoothi thi fikar jo tumne jataayi
Behlaane wali saari adaayein jhooth thi
Fareb ya dhokha, kya doon isko naam?
Iss dagabaazi ka tumhe kya doon inaam?
Socha bhi na hoga tumne kabhi
Tumhare jhooth ko aisa doonga anjaam
Translation:

Durga heart wrenching beautiful.. beautiful piece.. awesome...one of your best I must say..
every word.. every emotion every bit of pain aptly captured.. loved in the entirety.. felt that heart break all over again.. truly powerful piece.. amazing job Durga...👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Episode 189
Amidst the heartbreak and ensuing chaos that was unknown to almost everyone, there was a celebration taking place, dreams finally being fulfilled, a happy occasion bringing cheer and joy to everyone around. The marriage of Payal and Akash. Even ASR couldn't help smiling looking at his delighted young brother, perhaps the only time he smiled that night while his heart battled a storm. Khushi who was dazed with the sudden turn of events didn't notice that smile, else she would have known that ASR didn't really mean to carry out his threats.
Here's a happy one amongst this series of painful poems.
Payal Akash Marriage
A demure bride bedecked in wedding attire
A bashful groom anxious to fulfil his desire


Such a stark contrast between the two couples. Yet quite similar since both the brothers love and would do anything for both the sisters. Only one pair has an easier happier path for now. Such pretty words you used Durga. And a lovely light feel expressing the serene happiness these two quiet lovers have. Wonderful poem, the lines you wrote above and the edit!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episode 189
Amidst the heartbreak and ensuing chaos that was unknown to almost everyone, there was a celebration taking place, dreams finally being fulfilled, a happy occasion bringing cheer and joy to everyone around. The marriage of Payal and Akash. Even ASR couldn't help smiling looking at his delighted young brother, perhaps the only time he smiled that night while his heart battled a storm. Khushi who was dazed with the sudden turn of events didn't notice that smile, else she would have known that ASR didn't really mean to carry out his threats.
Here's a happy one amongst this series of painful poems.
Payal Akash Marriage
A demure bride bedecked in wedding attire
A bashful groom anxious to fulfil his desire
A verbal confession of love on lover's day
This special day chosen to be their marriage day
The wedding rituals begin with cheers and gaiety
Teasing the shy couple with talks quite naughty
Surrounded by loved ones and well wishers
While some eyes well up with happy tears
A long cherished dream is now being realised
Buaji, Amma, Babuji bless their cherished pride
Overwhelming are these moments for the bride's family
Payaliya, the loving daughter is married finally
A brother is happy, while a sister is lost
The families rejoice except Mami who's crossed
Akash carries his Payal whose cheeks turn red hot
And promise to help each other by removing life's knots


Another brilliant piece of you.
You expressed the happy moment of Payal and Akash perfectly how you expressed the sad moment in this series of your poetry.
Payal and Akash are two very innocuous endearing person and they are perfect together.
Loved what you said in introduction.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Payal Akash marriage poem ...magnificent Durgey!⭐️👏 ⭐️The bride and bridegroom were made for each other. It was a beautiful conclusion of the first episode of ipk that started with the setting of Payal's mariage which was later Cancelled! Girls with broken marriages are generally blamed for it. but the guptas stood by Payal all throughout! Hats off to them for not bowing down to societal presure and giving Payal space. I loved your edit which shows the happy faces of Shashi and Garima Gupta! They were relieved and happy Payal had found a man she loved and who loved her. I feel your feel for akash and payal through your apt verse and edit suffused with the colour of Valentine's day! The day a couple united in love and another in hate!
Thank you D!, thank you very much! 🤗Your poems always inspire me!⭐️

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy

Payal Akash marriage poem ...magnificent Durgey!⭐️👏 ⭐️The bride and bridegroom were made for each other. It was a beautiful conclusion of the first episode of ipk that started with the setting of Payal's mariage which was later Cancelled! Girls with broken marriages are generally blamed for it. but the guptas stood by Payal all throughout! Hats off to them for not bowing down to societal presure and giving Payal space. I loved your edit which shows the happy faces of Shashi and Garima Gupta! They were relieved and happy Payal had found a man she loved and who loved her. I feel your feel for akash and payal through your apt verse and edit suffused with the colour of Valentine's day! The day a couple united in love and another in hate!

Thank you D!, thank you very much! 🤗Your poems always inspire me!⭐️

IPK has been very progressive on all those terms Wiwy.. guptas, esp Shashi Gupta led by example.. he brought up both his daughters, one biological and the other not, on equal grounds.. could have been a total dysfunctional family.. but they maintained that core.. like boys look for their mother in their respective wives, girls look for their fathers.. their original hero.. that way Khushi certainly found one like her father in her husband and she could proudly proclaim " ek businessman ki patni and ek businessman ki beti".. bred entrepreneur she is..
And loved that in red, or may be one with a visible love and the other with a masked..
Feels like ages since I read you..
And, durga I sincerely forgot to mention in my comment, when I read ur line "Akash carries his Payal whose cheeks turn red hot".. I remembered that riddle about Payal..asr clinging to Payal.. 😆 sacchi me even before I read our riddler here..😃.. how we missed it..
Edited by Horizon - 11 years ago

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