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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

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Episode 191
Anokhi Shaadi

Translation:
They belong to one another
It was hinted before
When the fast was broken with water
When the dupatta was dropped on the head
An auspicious time, it was an auspicious moment
When the engagement took place in Ma's temple
Sangeet, shagun, mehendi, haldi
All rituals were followed
Now has arrived that moment
When their link will be made
With a procession of emotions
A unique wedding night
The wind blew the conch
The bells matched the beat
In the presence of the Mother and Fire God
Carried out an unwanted marriage
There was no witness for the rituals
No witness for this marriage
But present are the parents
Who are part of the flow of stars
Not a bond for a few months
This union is for eternity
It is complete, not partly
The unique wedding of Arnav and Khushi


Lovely poem. 👏
Love the collage which hold every ritual they did unknown to the fact that are meant to be together.
Devimayyah herself brought them together in her unique way.
Very true, they did every pre marriage ritual and there no one was with them to blessed them except their parents and devimayah. Even her phagphera ritual was too held in front of devimayah.
Above underline lines are my favorite.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Durga ,😊

Lovely array of al the rituals which they had done in their private moments under Devi Maya's supervision and under the stars .Orphans found each other in this whole wide world where no one sees them or hears them except this wind and fire which are their witness and protectors.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

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Episode 189
Amidst the heartbreak and ensuing chaos that was unknown to almost everyone, there was a celebration taking place, dreams finally being fulfilled, a happy occasion bringing cheer and joy to everyone around. The marriage of Payal and Akash. Even ASR couldn't help smiling looking at his delighted young brother, perhaps the only time he smiled that night while his heart battled a storm. Khushi who was dazed with the sudden turn of events didn't notice that smile, else she would have known that ASR didn't really mean to carry out his threats.
Here's a happy one amongst this series of painful poems.
Payal Akash Marriage
A demure bride bedecked in wedding attire
A bashful groom anxious to fulfil his desire
A verbal confession of love on lover's day
This special day chosen to be their marriage day
The wedding rituals begin with cheers and gaiety
Teasing the shy couple with talks quite naughty
Surrounded by loved ones and well wishers
While some eyes well up with happy tears
A long cherished dream is now being realised
Buaji, Amma, Babuji bless their cherished pride
Overwhelming are these moments for the bride's family
Payaliya, the loving daughter is married finally
A brother is happy, while a sister is lost
The families rejoice except Mami who's crossed
Akash carries his Payal whose cheeks turn red hot
And promise to help each other by removing life's knots


Beautiful Durga ,👏

Indeed Payesh Wedding was the best one and besides all the odds their life was setting it's own boundaries and limits.In the parallel of all the hidden sorrows , they are ready to sail the ship of their love .

A demure bride bedecked in wedding attire
A bashful groom anxious to fulfil his desire
A verbal confession of love on lover's day
This special day chosen to be their marriage day
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episode 191
Anokhi Shaadi
Ek dooje ke hain ye dono,
Pehle se jatlaayi thi
Paani se jab vrat toda tha,
Sar par jab chunari giraayi thi
Shubh Mahurat, thi shubh ghadi
Jab Ma ke mandir mein huyi thi sagaai
Sangeet, shagun, mehendi, haldi
Saari rasmein thi nibhaayi
Ab aa chuki wo ghadi
Jab judegi inki kadi
Lekar jazbaaton ki baraat
Ek anokhi shaadi ki raat
Hawa ne shankh bajaayi
Ghantiyon ne taal milaayi
Mata aur Agni ke samaksh mein
Avaanchit byaah rachayi
Na rasmon ka koi gawah tha
Na gawah hai koi iss vivaah ka
Par sakshi hain mata pita
Jo hissa hain taaron ke pravah ka
Chand mahinon ka nahin bandhan
Hamesha ke liye hai ye sangam
Sampoorna hai, nahin ye aadhi
Arnav Khushi ki anokhi shaadi
Translation:
They belong to one another
It was hinted before
When the fast was broken with water
When the dupatta was dropped on the head
An auspicious time, it was an auspicious moment
When the engagement took place in Ma's temple
Sangeet, shagun, mehendi, haldi
All rituals were followed
Now has arrived that moment
When their link will be made
With a procession of emotions
A unique wedding night
The wind blew the conch
The bells matched the beat
In the presence of the Mother and Fire God
Carried out an unwanted marriage
There was no witness for the rituals
No witness for this marriage
But present are the parents
Who are part of the flow of stars
Not a bond for a few months
This union is for eternity
It is complete, not partly
The unique wedding of Arnav and Khushi


Love the title😊 and the edit👏 where all of their rituals were done unintentionally and even their Pagphera after that happened from Khushi's natural mother's home ...Mandir of DeviMaiya where he married her in the dark night under her reign and then take her his home with DeviMaiya's permission in front of whole world .

But what a ray of hope they always have from Teej to all the way Payesh Mehndi where they both share their own mehndi and that night their union was destines to be .Patni ho will change into patti jo hoon.

Beautiful👏
Edited by ArshiHamesha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Lovely poem. 👏

Love the collage which hold every ritual they did unknown to the fact that are meant to be together.
Devimayyah herself brought them together in her unique way.
Very true, they did every pre marriage ritual and there no one was with them to blessed them except their parents and devimayah. Even her phagphera ritual was too held in front of devimayah.
Above underline lines are my favorite.

Thanks Javeria. Yes, this was a marriage held completely by Devi Maiyya. That's why Pag phere too was held at her abode. Thanks for marking your favourite lines. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MehreenB

Durga ,😊


Lovely array of al the rituals which they had done in their private moments under Devi Maya's supervision and under the stars .Orphans found each other in this whole wide world where no one sees them or hears them except this wind and fire which are their witness and protectors.

Thanks Mehr. That's right, the elements were witness to all their rituals and not a single person knew of all this. Even A & K realise it only during the remarriage that they had already gone through the rituals and that their marriage was meant to be.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha


Beautiful Durga ,👏

Indeed Payesh Wedding was the best one and besides all the odds their life was setting it's own boundaries and limits.In the parallel of all the hidden sorrows , they are ready to sail the ship of their love .

A demure bride bedecked in wedding attire
A bashful groom anxious to fulfil his desire
A verbal confession of love on lover's day
This special day chosen to be their marriage day

Thanks Faiqa. Loved what you wrote above. Yes, they are creating their own beautiful world.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

Love the title😊 and the edit👏 where all of their rituals were done unintentionally and even their Pagphera after that happened from Khushi's natural mother's home ...Mandir of DeviMaiya where he married her in the dark night under her reign and then take her his home with DeviMaiya's permission in front of whole world .


But what a ray of hope they always have from Teej to all the way Payesh Mehndi where they both share their own mehndi and that night their union was destines to be .Patni ho will change into patti jo hoon.

Beautiful👏

Thanks Faiqa. Happy you liked the edit and title. 😃 Ya, pagphera had to be from Devi Maiyya's temple as all the other rituals were held with Her blessings.
Oh, he doesn't waste time before playing the pati patni card. He says the relation is only namesake, but the minute he married her, he accepted her whole heartedly, only he didn't know.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Durga you are on a role here! And the way you are zeroing in on the main emotion in each of your poems is fantastic. Lovely thought.. It was not a conventional but absolutely real marriage. My favourite lines below...
Shubh Mahurat, thi shubh ghadi
Jab Ma ke mandir mein huyi thi sagaai
Sangeet, shagun, mehendi, haldi
Saari rasmein thi nibhaayi
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aarwen

Durga you are on a role here! And the way you are zeroing in on the main emotion in each of your poems is fantastic. Lovely thought.. It was not a conventional but absolutely real marriage. My favourite lines below...

Shubh Mahurat, thi shubh ghadi
Jab Ma ke mandir mein huyi thi sagaai
Sangeet, shagun, mehendi, haldi
Saari rasmein thi nibhaayi

Thank you so much Rhea. Ya, I am going with the flow, the scenes one after another are so emotional and impactful. I am happy you find the poems effective. I will take a break for now, next one probably next week. These heavy duty ones are quite draining. Should cool down a bit.
Thanks for pointing out your favourite lines. 😳

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