SanDhir FF..neva leavng you.(benaam ff)*pt19 last pt updtd pg22* - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Awesome...
Update next part ASAP..
ITna Chota update.. Not fair..
Next tym bada wala chahiye..
Lots of love
Shalini..:):)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
luvd thz story lyk anythng <3
PM me wenever u update :)
eagerly waitng fr nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
m back!..well I told I cant have long parts..😭...sholy!!!..😃

Part 11..


She reached the hospital...asked the receptionist about him...

Got the way and ran as fast as she could...

She reached and saw the man who had called her...

"Ohh so aap h..m ravi.."..said he with a small smile...

"M sanyukta uhmm... voh kaisa h..??.."she asked straight away. ...

"Doctor ne abhi tak juch kahaa nhe h.."..he said pointing at the operation theatre. ...

She went and saw him from the hole..

A tear dropped as she saw him..and only hiz name came out. ..."randhiir.."..it was more of a whisper...yet his name soothed her..,.her heart ,her soul..cuz still she ,her heart ,her soul could not take in what was being taken in by her eyes...

3 hrs went by...she informed everyone...but said only her bhai to come...

Finally the doctors came out with a short smile.."he has survived even after this terrible gun shot!!!!..he is indeed blessed!!!!..he out of danger completely. .!!.."..those all words were the best pleasures to her. ..she smiled in her tears...

"You can meet your husband. ."..he said looking at sanyu...

She ran but the doctor stopped her..."at least let him be shifted to the ward..."..she blushed and his bhai & the doc laughed...

Soon she was inside his room...she was worreid now...the doctor said someone had shot him tight aiming the heart but his luck was good so it passed from near to the heart...but who??..& why? ?...


#comnt & like!...😃😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
emotionall... yet nice... short yet worthy... its ok anya there maybe sme reasons.. we cn understand... tckr... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Awesome..
Thnq god he's out of danger..!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
i hope everything will be fine soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Omg! WHat an awesome ff!! Please update soon!
Eagerly waiting!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
thank you all for liking mah ff..😳😳

Part 12

She came near him and sat on the chair and held his hands in hers...warm tears were coming out from her eyes...


"mil rahee h khushi tumhe mujhe aisa dekh kar nhe naa!!.."..she said and kept her forehead on his palm..and then kissed his hands finges and kept her cheeks on his palm..."you love meh naa!?..then pls for god sake aisa dubaara mat karna..."...


"don't cry jaan.."..and wiped her tears away...she looked up to him..and cried a bit louder then hugged him some how to which he too responded...it was passionate one!!..their love was visible...her bhai could see their love!...


"don't ever do this randhir pls ever never!!...you know what??..I LOVE YOU!!..now I know I love you!!!...I love you more than my dreams my passion meh my family everyone everything!!..I love you more!!.."..


He smiled... "haha!!..finally m hearing this!!!..nd yeah I love you the most jaan!!.."..and rubbed their noses together..!!...


Suddenly something stabbed her mind and she placed herself back... "who did this?"..she said with a blank face...though eyebrows meeting making him realize how angry she was...


He turned his face away... "how-how can I know??...


"randh-..."..but the doc came in to check...it took him around 20 mins...then his bhai came in and they chatted for almost 2 hrs!!...


"doc said they will discharge you in a week jiju!!.."..n ankit winked at him..randhir blushed at jiju'...and sanyu too...


He saw her and was relieved she forgot only if he knew her mind still had that question going on...ankit said he would wait there...giving the reason of the face of sanyu which itself showed so much of tiredness...


After much of her bhai pleadings she left...and ankit turned to face randhir...


"I'm sure you too have questions I will tell you everything only if you promise not to say a word to sanyu.."...ankit nodded and sat beside him only to hear how brave his jiju' was!!...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Awesome update...
So emotional it was...
Update next part ASAP..!!:D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
aweeesome... part this one... awww luved their emotions... :)

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