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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123



then enjoy... updating...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part-10

As they got up in the morning, they were in the middle of the sea...

Their boat had changed direction with the flow of water...Shlok...Astha spoke...

Humm...he too asked...

Where are we? Island is not visible in any direction...she asked looking in all sides...

Shlok too looked in all directions trying to guess right direction for island...but it was just water in all directions upto they could see...

Shlok got tensed on their situation ...more than that was on island...

Astha...I think... I think, we are lost...he spoke holding her hand...

A tear rolled over her eyes... Seeing Shlok lowered his face leaving her hand...

I am sorry... Astha, it was my idea to make a boat and go upto cruise...but now I lose...even...both mobiles are switched off due to discharge of battery now...he spoke slowly...

Astha wiped her eyes and held his hand in her own hands...no Shlok, you should not be...you tried your best to save us...it's not at all your fault...aur koshishein kabhi bhi waste nahi hoti...God must have better plans for us taking us out of that island...

But now we are in nowhere having limited food...if something happens...Shlok spoke...

No Shlok... we are in better situation now...she smiled...when we had lost from cruise, we had nothing just a bag...but now we have enough food to survive for one day...and I am sure Agar hamein marna hi hota to maybe we could not have survived from that storm in sea that day...if we are safe God must have thought something better for us...

Getting positive? Shlok smiled...

Ya...Astha too smiled...got positive energy from you... Remember, on our first day of island, how much I was crying...and you were making me understand... but now, I am positive...i trust you completely ... Agar hum yhan tak phunche hain then we will move ahead too...

Humm...Shlok smiled...i was worried for you more dear... but if you are positive ... then let's see what god has planned for us? So what's the plan?

Plan? First I am feeling hungry... breakfast krenge..fir sochte hain...she smiled taking fruit from boat and giving to Shlok too...

They both were talking while eating trying to show relaxed to each other but worried from inside...

As they finished eating...Shlok and Astha decided to move in one direction and slowly they started boating but sun was in the sky above their head and heated water was making it difficult for them to move ahead...luckily Astha had kept some big leaves in the boat and they had covered themselves with those while boating...

Shlok was sailing the boat since morning and sun was about to set still they had no idea where they were...

The day had finished and their fireflies were glowing again giving them hope that every darkness can be won with the light of God...

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It had gotten dark in the middle of the water when they were eating something...

Shlok asked for some more...

Shlok...it was the last one...Astha spoke hesitatingly...

Shlok broke down from inside (subah astha ko kya khilaunga main....) but he spoke controlling himself...don't worry sweetie, by tomorrow morning, we will be at shore... tum so jao, I will continue sailing boat...

Shlok...Astha smiled...bachi nahi hun main jisse behla rhe ho... We both understand the situation...I will sail with you...if we sail together, we may reach somewhere upto some boat, some cruise...

Shlok sighed as well as smiled at Astha...he took Astha into his arms and kissed on her forehead...Thanks Astha...for making me strong...for trusting me...even more than Swati...

Astha smiled... As you are my strength here...a reason for me to survive... now don't talk more, we don't have enough water too...she laughed ...Let's start sailing...

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They were sailing in the middle of sea talking with each other ... when suddenly they listened the voice of a helicopter taking rounds in the sky...

Astha, look above...Shlok looked at her and took bottle with fireflies waving them in hand shouting for help...

Astha too took a leaf , folded it in roll and started shouting in it loudly to control her voice...help, help...when helicopter's light fell on them...

The helicopter had targeted them and a rope ladder fell below...they looked at each other happily and looked above found a person in uniform was coming from the ladder to take them...

Shlok...we...got help...saying Astha hugged Shlok tightly...

Yes Astha, you were right...god helped us finally...he too hugged her with teary eyes...when the man in uniform signaled them to hold his hands. First Shlok sent Astha and then he himself went inside and they both were shocked to see...Niranjan and Avdhoot both were in the helicopter who hugged them tightly and all four of them were crying hard...

After sometime, they wiped their tears when Shlok asked Niranjan...Dad, how did you know about us?

We had lost all hopes beta...last fifteen days...we had been searching for you everywhere...we had assumed now, maybe we had lost you...Niranjan spoke wiping his eyes... Last night when I received call from your cell, but before I could pick, phone was disconnected...but now we knew, you are safe anywhere ... as we went to police, they checked the location where your phone was turned on last time... it was at almost two hundred kilometers distance from the shore.

Two hundred Kilometers? They were shocked...

Yes beta...Avdhoot spoke, that night storm had taken you so much away...but all is well if end is well...you both are safe...that's enough for us...

Didn't know, when they had reached back to the beach of Goa, where their complete families' were waiting for them...

As they both came out of helicopter, Anjali, kalindi, Sojal hugged them tightly... hours had passed but still they were crying badly, they all cried more when Shlok and Astha had told how they had survived...

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Astha placed her head in Kalindi's lap...i am sorry Mom...I am really sorry for everything, every time, I hurt you, every time I hid the truth form you...

No beta..i am sorry...kalindi spoke...in last fifteen days, we have learnt, our biggest pleasure is our daughter not these traditions , money and status... if you are with us safely...everything is best for us...

I love you Mom...i missed you and dad so much...saying Astha hugged her tightly...while Avdhoot also wiped his tears seeing the duo crying, he too joined them...

Same was at shlok's end...he was crying keeping his head on shoulder of Anjali... Mom Dad...i was thinking, I will never be able to see you again...i am sorry...I was so irresponsible I never cared for you people's feelings...

No beta...Niranjan held his shoulders... When you were in trouble, the way you managed everything, the way you cared for Astha at such a place where nothing was there is much more important...you handled your most important responsibility there...Agar Astha ko kuch ho jata to shayad sab kuch khatam ho jata...but Now I can say, I am proud of you my son...saying he hugged Shlok...

OK OK..Sojal smiled..bhut ho gya rona dhona..in dono ki haalat to dekho...Let them get fresh and take some rest for now...they are with us forever now... Saying she took them to the room while Atsha had taken her bag to Sojal's room as they both needed long time to get fresh after days...

Sojal had informed Varad too...

Three hours had passed when they both had got fresh and joined their family for dinner...

As they saw the food, both smiled at each other...

Shlok...good food...after days...Astha smiled...

Ya... he too smiled...finally got rid of those uncleansed salty fish...but that was also too good experience yaar...

Acha, itna hi acha experience tha to hamein bhi leke jana kal us island pe...Sojal smiled...

Han han challenge...akhir hmari itni yaadein judi hain whan pe...they both smiled having their food...while complete family was happy seeing them happy...

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As the food finished and both Astha and Shlok were telling the family their experiences, how they got food, water and everything, Varad too had reached there with Swati...

They both got up seeing them...and they hugged varad tightly. While Swati was still looking at Shlok with teary eyes...

Swati...Shlok moved closer to her...

Swati punched him badly...

Swati. He spoke again...

But Swati had started already...khan the tum itne din, skele Atsha ke sath? How many times I had told you not to go on honeymoon...but tumhe to shaunk chda than a honeymoon ka...ek baar bhi mera khyal nahi aya? How could you do this to me Shlok? Fifteen days...were long enough and moreover you were alone with Astha for so long, khin tum dono mein kuch huya to nahi...

Shlok looked at Astha and lowered his eyes thinking about the night... Swati...Shlok was about to speak...when Astha interfered...enough Swati...

Swati looked at her in shock...

Yaar atleast let Shlok speak na? Astha spoke... tumhe to khush hone chahiye that he came back safe and you are doubting him? if he had the hope to survive there? Then it was just because of you...Astha spoke looking into shlok's eyes... every time, he was thinking just about you, if he will ever be able to see you again... and you are shouting at him?

Aur yahi jannna chahti ho na um dono mein whan kya huya aur kya nahi? She looked at shlok..then I must tell you whan esa kuch bhi nahi huya jiske liye shlok guilty hai...if you love him from years, then at least have trust in him...and about us , you wanna listen na? let's go, I will clear everything now...saying she held Swati's hand and dragged her to their parents followed by Shlok and Varad...

Dad, Mom...me and Shlok want to confess something...she spoke looking at agnihotri's and kirloskars...

Yes beta? They all asked looking at each other...

Actually...I never loved Shlok... we married just because you all know Shlok wanted to marry Swati and I wanted to start my event managing company...so we planned to marry each other and file divorce after one month, after that Shlok will marry Swati as you don't have any option...she spoke looking at Agnihotris and I will get money from Shlok to start my company...she spoke looking at kirloskars...she paused...while Shlok was looking with shock at her...

But why are you telling us now? Anjali sked...

Because one month is complete now...and I want divorce mom...she spoke collecting courage looking away...

What? They all were shocked as well as Shlok...

Astha...Shlok tried to speak...

No Shlok , not now...in last fifteen days we have known our parents importance in our life, so no more cheating...we are going to file mutual divorce tomorrow and I don't need money too...

Dad...she looked at Avdhoot kirloskar...I will do whatever you want but please allow me to stay with you after divorce...

Avdhoot looked at her crying face with folded hands...he immediately stood up and hugged Astha...no beta.no more tears in your eyes...you will do whatever you want...but think once more about divorce...

No dad.it was already decided...she moved away and folded hands in front of Niranjan and Anjali... I am sorry Mom dad...but I request you...please marry Shlok and Swati...

She moved away to go...When Shlok followed her...Astha...

She stopped midway hiding her tears... Hummm...happy now?

Why Astha? So suddenly? You could...i mean you could talk to me first...Shlok spoke not knowing what he wanted to say...

What's so suddenly Shlok? This was planned na? After one month form our marriage...she smiled...and see what's the date? Exact one month to our marriage...i just kept my promise...and why are you getting sad yaar? Tomorrow after reaching home , we will file divorce...now relax with Swati...i am very tired...she yawned artificially leaving from there...

Saying she ran away from there to her room...she closed the door and cried her heart out missing each and every moment spent with Shlok...

While Shlok was still standing still there trying to think why is he feeling sad if everything is going to be right as per wish...when Swati hugged him form back...i love I love I love you Shlok... ...finally we will be one soon... She placed a kiss on his shoulder.

Shlok hesitated a bit at her touch and yawned fakely...I am very much tired Swati...wanna take rest...see you tomorrow...saying he too left for his room... Swati was shocked while Sojal and Varad were standing behind trying to figure out the situation.


Enjoy now...ab koi chappal jutte nahi...šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰

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Posted: 12 years ago
Gr8 update jeeni...so finally they are back home...and i hate swati...she is tooo much possessive for shlok...and divorce thing was sad part but i know everything goody goody will happen now...as they both have started developing feelings for each other unknowingly...once again jeeni i loved ur surprise...so a big wala hug... šŸ˜›
Edited by meerab... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OK no chappal chutti...waisey I m also waiting for ur chappal chutti in my thread šŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
OK now I m going to read it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meerab...

OK no chappal chutti...waisey I m also waiting for ur chappal chutti in my thread šŸ˜†


yup i m also going there.checked inbox now since morning as my net was not working... you wrote os on weekend?

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Posted: 12 years ago
😭 oh no ashlok divorce
this is not fair yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123



yup i m also going there.checked inbox now since morning as my net was not working... you wrote os on weekend?

yeah I write one on weekend ''young love" but yesterday wanted to write another small one...so wrote "unnatural"... šŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
UNRESED PART 9... all done...😃
let me edit this post n make another resšŸ˜†
res😊
Edited by naina.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Back to civilisation. And all out in the open. Or is it? Loved the update. Double dose. Thanks.

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