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BSRaizada

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice one Rae,
Ya it was so caring n at d same time sensuous too!

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shr1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

Rae,

This is fantastic. With your writing, you beautifully portrayed the rugged character of Rudra Pratap Ranawat, yet him taking care of her. Her own conflict when it comes to his harsh ways or caring mind, her urgency to look after his safety. It's so vivid, I could visualise each moment you described.

For me, it was the characters you sketched in here as I am not much acquainted with them as shown on the screen. You built them so very well! I really enjoyed it despite having minimal idea of RR :)

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dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

loved that she remembered even to he was burned loved the os i am late i know beautifully done

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1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

Loved the emotions displayed in such few words.

Though I don't watch the show, your writing brought me here.

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