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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Navin

@napstermonster

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

AngelTeen!

Welcome to RR! I'm so happy to see you here!

Wonderful Drabble--now, could you perhaps bend that fine mind of yours to the task of imagining what Paro might be doing with that coconut oil in Rudras's room?

Shame, woman--control your giggles! I meant whether he'd let her apply it to his burning hands, their dialogue, their innocent, fully clothed interaction---- what did you think? Bilkul nahi badli, naa? You are SO VERY welcome, my besharam friend of the old IPK days!

On a serious note--I a SO happy to see you, to read this, to hopefully be able to read more of your beautiful, touching work--please continue with another Drabble, as always, your gift is sparkling and leaves us wanting more.

Napster

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asmi279

@asmi279

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome post..looking fwd to the updates :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: napstermonster
AngelTeen!

Wecome to RR! I'm so happy t see you here!

Napster

Hey Napster!

I have been around, just reading episode updates though, but I knew I would come here sooner or later with my so called writing skills toh dekho I am here!

Great to meet you again! Looking forward to your feedback on the above...hope you like it! :)

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-Saumya-

@-Saumya-

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

This was beautiful. Paro will definitely think about the incident after tge shock is worn out. Very well written, Rae and I hope to see some more from you. 😳

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kirti98

@kirti98

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

Well written. Looking forward for more. Noted to chek ur likhawat too 😊

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Anita

@neet2407

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Hi AngelTeen- so glad you are writing again and that too on Rangrasiya - I always enjoy your stories a nd this one is the same- wonderful capture of what Paro is going through and you HAVE to continue! Pretty please 😳

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win7

@win7

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome!

Wish it will be shown like this in episode too.

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Summer99

@Summer99

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Welcome ,liked your drabble, hope the cvs also use this type of scene in the the soap
Very well written, want to read more of your takes on RR

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Exprimere

@Exprimere

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

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You're here! Hello, again. 😊

I dunno if you know me, but I was your stalker in our old forum. Then your blogs got restricted, and I lost touch. I completely understand your plagiarism concerns, though. So it's fine.

I'm super glad that writers like you and napstermonster are here. I'm so looking forward to reading more of your quality work.

In this missing-moment drabble, I must say I had never thought of Rudra being hurt. But you did notice, and then you spun this silk yarn of a story. As of now, this "dichotomy" you mentioned, is beginning to rule Rudra-Paro relationship- which I find to be the most delicious part of the falling-in-love process.

I hope you keep exploring the characters more as the show progresses. I don't have an ounce of doubt that you'll succeed in chiseling them with finesse.

Waiting for more. 'Til next time, ciao!

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