~ Mann Basiya ~ A Drabble-ish - ParvatiRudra ThankYou+NewDrabble Pg4 - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

33

Views

7.9k

Users

32

Likes

172

Frequent Posters

Hunnybunny3 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Wonderful Drabble. I've alway enjoyed reading your previous works from the show we shall not name. Hope to read many more from you on Parud.
Sofna thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#22
This is really good. I wud like to see this scene and a similar reaction and thought to his welfare. Plz cont
sairam03 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Short and sweet . Glad to see you writing on Parud. Read some of your earlier stories on arshi. You are one of the best writers on IF . Hope to read more stories on Parud.
shree10 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Welcome to RR forum Rae-sa!

The drabble was great! looking forward for more Parud stuff from you..
Now if only you would change the thought of not continuing this one.. sigh!
AngelTeen thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Thank You so much for such a warm welcome into the writing world of this forum.

I wrote this piece with much hesitation and posted it with even more, unsure as I am about my understanding of these characters but your lovely comments gave me much confidence! So thank you every one for that! :)
Your encouragement made me want to write more on Rang Rasiya and while writing a proper OS, I stumbled upon a 100 word drabble (my first ever, or at least so I think and remember!) which I decided to post here as a separate story, so here it is -


It is based on Rudra (his POV sort of). I hope you like it! Thank You again for the welcome and the encouragement! :)

AT
Edited by AngelTeen - 11 years ago
Minahil96 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Loved The Drabble 😃

I Am Glad You Are Even one Of Rang Rasiya Fan's 😆
Edited by minahil1996 - 11 years ago
goguma thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#27
thanks for writing one for RR... loved it..!


and now will continue with whisper ...


hope to see more of u here ..
mistyrains thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 11 years ago
#28
This is beautiful! I could picture every emotion flitting across her face, her disbelief, her contemplation , the concern in the end, amazing work! :)
YellowBoots thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Engager Level 3 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Aha! This is lovely. I like the idea of a 'drabble', so much to ponder over and chew on, but with such few words.
P4rveen12 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Welcome to the world of RR and congrats on writing your first piece on PaRud, I hope we get plenty more.

The Drabble was simply amazing and superb,

Love the way you wrote this from Paro's point of view, her emotions and thoughts were written and expressed beautifully.

I would loved to read a continuation especially with Paro applying the oil on him, it's okay I shall just imagine it in my head, lol.

Loved the Drabble, awesome writing.

Thanks for the PM xx

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".