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Posted: 11 years ago

Part - 35

Maan turns mad at Geet's attitude...

Ye toh MSK ka haq haina?

He is not used to this dramebazi...

Usually he dictates others and this is the first time his call has been rejected by someone...

What the hell?

This is MSK...not any tom dick or harry...

Who are you to stop MSK from calling?

If MSK has decided that he wants to speak with you then no one can stop him, not even you...

OK then...it's time for Maan's Dhust Danav giri...if that's what would help him solve this problem then get ready Geet...here comes the MSK...

Maan comes home to meet Geet...

What's this? She is not attending his call and tomorrow they have to leave for Chandigarh for the match...

Maan has made arrangements for Geet to go with Dadi and Adi...

Adi had already called and confirmed that he had made all the arrangements...

Dadi is also happy to welcome Geet to their native place...

She wants to introduce her to the relatives as her would be bahu...

If Geet strikes at this time then what would Maan do?

Maan needs to talk to her...

What's the problem with her?

What's wrong that he accepted his fans appreciation and love...

She should be proud of his success...

This is not right...

Maan didn't expect Geet to be so jealous(?)...

Does she still feeling insecure?

Doesn't she have faith in him?

After all these days she had no conficence in their love?

This is ridiculous...and childish...

Everybody knows that Maan loves Geet and Geet only except this Geet?

What to do? Pyaar karna itna aasaani thodi nahi...

Jaise bat gomaoo, ek do chakka maro aur arthon raat Hero banjao, haina?

Vicky is watching the highlights...

Maan knocks...

Vicky is surprised to see him at their house at that time...

It's nearing 12 pm...

But poor Maan couldn't sleep and he needs to see his Geet...

So here he is...

Vicky: Maan?

He stands in the way just like Geet does...

Maan: andar nahi bhulaoge?

Ranno just comes out to see who it is?

Ranno: aayi aayi

Vicky moves and makes way for Maan...

Maan just walks to Geet's room...

Ranno keeps staring him...

Vicky: maa, tum jao, sojao

Ranno: kya?

Vicky: sab teek ho jayega, tum fikar mat karo

Ranno: mein tummare papa ko utathi hoon

Vicky: usski koi zaroorat nahi, ye unki aapas ki baat hai, unne akhele chodthe hai, chalo, hum chalthe hai

Vicky locks the door and goes to his room...

Ranno looks at Vicky and she also leaves reluctantly..."aajkal ke bache na?" babaji, aap hi inko0 thoda akhal dijiye...mabaap ko kaise kaise pareshaan karthe hai?"

Maan knocks the door...

Geet si still awake...kaise soyegi?

She is still thinking about why Maan did that?

Why did he behave like that in public?

Geet ke samne shirtless hona toh bantha hai...lekhin sab ke samne?

Woh bhi uss ladhki ke samne?

Nahi...ye toh hona hi nahi chahiye...

Geet tries hard to forget that but she can't...

How would she get out this when she is not ready to talk to Maan?

Geet: maa, mujhe bhook nahi hai, sone do

Geet thought it's ranno again...

So this girl has also not had her dinner...

Maan too skipped dinner tonight...

Maan: Geeet, darwaza kholo

Geet is surprised...

It sounds like Maan...

Maybe it's her imagination...

Shayad Vicky mimickery kar raha hoga?

Geet grabs and throws everything she could mug on the door...

Geet: tu nalayak, ullu ke patte, kutte de dum, mujhe tang mat kar, warna

Maan ko lagtha ki ye galiyan usske liye hi hai...

Maan gets very angry...

He breaks open the door...

Ranno and Handaji come out of their room...Vicky is already there...

Maan enters the room and locks trhe door behind...

The entire family freezes...

What's this? Apne hi ghar mein gundagiri? Aur apne hi beti ke saath baktameezi?

Handaji: Vicky, kya dekhthe ho, darwaza thodo, abhi

Vicky kya MSK hai?

Vicky: papa, woh baat karke chale jayega

Ranno: kya? Geet teri behen hai

Vicky: issiliye mujhe usski harkathon ki aadat pad gayi, lekhin Maan, uss ke liye toh ye sab naya haina? Dhere dhere woh bhi samaj jayega ki Geet handa kaun hai, aap log fikar mat karo, Geet toh sherni hai, apne raksha kar sakthi

Ranno: wah mere sher, tu toh chuhe ho chuhe, hatjao

Handaji stops Ranno...

Ranno: chodoji, aaj mein ussko nahi chodoongi

Handaji: aap shanth ho jayiye, Vicky sahi kehtha hai, ye hummare zamaana nahi, waqt ke saath saath humme bhi badalna hai

They keep waiting in the hall...

Ranno coudn't control herself...

She looks at her husband and son and is mad at their strange behavior...

Zamaana badal gaya toh kya hua? Beti toh meri hi haina? Babaji, aap meri Geet ki madat karo...

Maan looks at Geet...

She is fuming...

Maan: Geet, ye sab kya hai?

Geet: wahi toh? Ye sab kya hai?

Maan: mein tumme kuch pooch raha hoon? Tum aaise kyun kar rahi ho?

Geet: ha ha ha? Ab toh mein hi galat hoon, babaji, aap sun rahe haina? Ye kabhi nahi sudrenge

Maan gets closer...

Maan: sudarna bhi nahi chahatha

Geet moves back and hits the wall...

Maan corners her...

Maan: tummare samne mera gussa chaltha nahi, aaisa kyun hai Geet?

Geet: par mera gussa hamesha chaltha

Maan: tum toh ab aur bhi khoobsurat lagthi ho

Maan locks her in his arms...

Geet: ab yahan kyun aaye ho?

Maan: ye kaise sawaal hai? apne Mishti se milne

Geet: Mishti?

Geet pushes him off...

Geet: haath mat lagao

Maan: what?

Geet: ye mera kamra hai, aap chale jao yahan se, warna

Maan: warna?

Maan looks at her trembling lips...

Geet :mein chilakke sabko bhulaoongi

Maan: are you kidding?

Geet: no, I'm serious

Maan: tum kal aathi haina? Chandigarh

Geet: nahi, mujhe koi shok nahi hai aapko nanke panke dekhne ki, jisco shok hai ussko lekhe jao

Maan: Geet, tum pagal ho gayi ho kya?

Geet: nahi, aap pagal ho gaye ho

Maan: mein yahan behas karne ke liye nahi aaya hoon, kal Dadi tere intrezaar karthe honge

Geet: kyun?

Maan: kal tumme dadi ke saath haina?

Geet: mujhe kahin nahi jaana

Maan: Geeet

Maan can't tolerate this anymore...

Geet: aap bhi mujhse milne yahan nahi aana

Geet shows the door...

Maan ka gussa nafrat banjaatha...

He just pushes her off...

Geet falls on the bed...

Maan: that's it, ab toh tum mere peeche aaoge, mein nahi, MSK ke peeche log aathe hai, MSK kissi ke peeche nahi bhaagtha, samji tum

Maan leaves ...

Maan is angry that she didn't trust him...

She had no faith in their love...

She is still having her doubts?

What? Can't she realize that it's all just part of the game and nothing more...

Why doesn't she understand that Maan loves her and her only...

Just like drinking is Maan's weakness suspicion is Geet's weakness...

she always suspects him...

That day at the adbba too she didn't have the faith that Maan has quit drinking now...

And when he told about Sameera she was feeling insecure...

What to do with this girl?

This is ridiculous...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Fight between maaneet now what will happen ???
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 34
awesome dear...
excellent...
oh this is what happened and Geet didnt like this at all...
well Maan is not at fault...
poor him...
and Vicky too didnt like it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 35
awesome dear...
nice...
oh ho Maan is here...
and the elders were quite funny...
and Geet u should have tell him talk...
oh ho Maan gussa hogaya hai...
and what is this Maan...
aisa bhi koi kehta hai kya...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb darling.. good job👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part - 36

Geet is also not going to budge...

Kyunki galthi toh MSK ki hai...

Lekhin woh aaya tha Geet ko manane...

Geet toh ussko maaf bhi karthi par kal woh Chandigarh jaake dubara koi tamasha nahi karna chahathi, kyunki Geet ko toh ab MSK ke itni aadat padgayi ki woh ab maanne lagi ki Maan ab sirf Geet ka hai, wahan toh sameera hogi, aur Geet iss mood mein jaathi toh zaroor ussko bardasht nahi kar sakthi, issiliye Geet Dadi ke saath nahi jaana chahathi, Geet ko patha hai ki Geet hi galat hai, par kya karein? Ussko bhi thoda waqt chahiye ki MSK ki celebrity status aur usske public life ko accept karne ki, haina babaji?

Geet nahi jaathi toh kya hua?

Woh toh 24*7 Maan ke barein mein hi sochthi rehthi haina?

jaise uss din Maan Sanjeevani aake zabardasthi Geet ko bahar lekhe gaya tha...
Geet ko Man ki yahi bindaas attitude pasand hai...
Aur Geet ne pehle hi do din ki chute le liya hai toh sanjeevani bhi nahi jaathi...

Wahan jaake sabke saath batein karthi toh usska mood teek hoga...

Lekhin ye toh ghar beitkke kuch ulta seedha sochthi rehthi...

Ya phir MSK ka videos dekhthe rehthi...

Vicky asks Ranno not to distuirb her now...

Maan wapas aatha toh sab teek ho jayega...

But Vicky is surprised that Geet is so possessive...

She is not like that at all...

She happily shares her things with others...

Only Vicky is so selfish and possessive that he never lets Geet touch any of his things...

Btu what happened now?

she already knows that MSK is a star and people love him like crazy...

And now that he is the new hearthrobe of the girls this is very antural that the girls go crazy seeing him...

Vicky ko kya patha ki girl's can share anything but their love...

A girl is always choosy and they take a long time to accept their love but when they get into a relationship then they take things very seriously...

They want their partner's 100% love and attention for themselves...

They are not ready to share it with anyone even if it's their Mother-in laws, that's why there's always a tug of war between the two...

So being a would be babu Geet is already ready for it...though she has no MIL she has to tackle the fandom of MSK...

Maan forgets about everything and just concentrates on his game...

He knows Geet would want him to do well more so b'coz if he didn't do well then she will think she is the cause for his failure...and she will get upset and start a fight again...

Maan knows that Geet would be praying for him and wishing him to repeat his last performance...

Maan will have to win this match atleast for Geet...

She would be proud of him then and forget everything...she will be the first one to wish him...

That way she will have to call him first...

So Maan is very determined this time...

And this is his homeground and the crowd his behind him...

They are so excited that their boy is playing so well...

They are here to see him in action live...

And Sam has also come to cheer him...

He had do it for them this time...

Maan takes a look at his Mishti on his mobile and is energized...

Now her smile is enough to turn him on...

To see that smile back on her face he had to perform well on the field...

Geet would be watching him...

Maan can't disappoint her now...she is already angry with him...

He takes it as a challenge and he wacks a quick fire half century to guide India to victory...

Dhoni praises that Maan has just started to use his talent wisely and has a long way to go...he is sure that he is one of the future talents that team india can rely upon...

Maan si so happy to hear such praise from his captain...

Our captain is always encouraging...

But Maan has got his reward already...Geet had messaged him congradulating him for the success...

But still she has not spoken with him...

Maan knows that she would call him soon...maybe that night...

At Chandigarh...

Maan had planned so much to do when Geet is here for the forst time...

Now that she is not here Maan turns mad...

What's this girl doing?

She has ruined all his plans...

His romantic date, their special dinner...

Their jungle camping...

Geet loves nature and Maan wanted to surprise her this weekend with his camping treat...

Maan had been waiting to treat Geet and show his cooking skills too...

He had even learnt to make Gol gappe for Geet...that's what she loves the most...

All that remains a dream still...

But Maan knows that sooner or later his dreams would be fulfilled...

And now he has other company...this is his hometown and his friends have invited him...

He is busy...and he is not alone...

Only Geet had to regret what she missed...

Maan decides to leave her alone so that she realizes her mistake...

And later he would let her know what she missed...

After the match Maan heads to celebrate his success with his local friends who had been waiting for him all these days...

Actually he is coming to Chandigarh for the first time after he had been selected for the team...

He was very busy and kept promisisng them that he would come soon...

Now they won't leave him easily...

For these are the true friends who really want him to win...

These are his Ranji teammates with whom he had struggled day in and day out just for the Indian cap...

And he is very lucky to be noted earlier as he is a Khurana...

But he had stayed in the team out of his own talent and hardwork...

That his friends also know very well...

They know he is selected on his own merit...

Sam's brother is the captain now...

He had come to watch the match along with sam...

Maan promised him that he would not miss the party this time...

Maan goes to the famous Pub where they had arranged that party...

They knew that Maan likes his drinks and they didn't know that he had quit drinking...

Maan had not expected this...

At Delhi...

Geet had been watching Maan's game repeatedly...

Though she has missed out going with him, she had been watching him on TV...

And she si watching it again and again...

Vicky himself is fed up with her attitude...

Itna zidd bhi teek nahi hai...

Poor Maan he came home to manofy her...

But this Geet and her attitude...

Vicky gets irritaded...

He snatches the remote and swtiches off the TV...

Geet gets angry...

Geet: kay kar rahe ho?

Vicky: tum kya kar rahi ho?

Geet:mein match dekh rahi hoon, hum jeetgaye

Geet is happy...amd also proud...

Maan has helped India win...

Vicky: Maan jeet gaya

Geet: what?

Vicky: haan, ab toh tum har gayi ho

Geet: tum kehna kya chahathe ho?

Vicky: bas Geet, Maan ko aur tang mat karo, usse baat karo aur ussko bathayi do

Geet: kyun?

Vicky: Geeet, tum toh sach mein pagal hi ho

Vicky gets angry...

Vicky: hmmm, tum toh kabhi nahi sudgroge

He throws the remote and leaves...

Geet had never seen him so angry...and that hatred...

She is scared...

Vicky ko bhi itna bhura lagtha toh Maan ko kitna bhura lagega...

Geet ko apni galthi ki ehsaas hothi...

She goes to her room and starts thinking about what went wrong with her...

She realizes that she has been behaving like a child, over possessive...

And Maan did what the best he could in that situation...

She feels very bad that she was so stupid to behave like that...

Maan teek hi kehtha, ye toh pagal hi hai...

Geet wants to apologise...

Geet looks at the clock and it's almost mid night...

Maan so raha hoga...

Par Geet ko abhi baat karni hai...she is desperate to talk with Maan...

Geet calls him that night, but Maan is not able to answer her calls...

She is so pissed off for Maan keeps ignoring her calls...

Then he switches off his mobile itself...

Geet can't bear his neglect...

Geet thinks that he is still angry with her...

She had only called to apologise...

But this Maan and his attitude...

Then Geet is reminded of his Gandhi habit...

And Chandigarh is his native and most of his school friends who have been the reason for that bad habit would be there surrounding him, haina?

This is not good...

Geet realizes her mistake...she should have gone with Dadi...

Geet calls Dadi and Dadi had also cancelled her trip...

Maan wahan akhela gaya hai...

Aur series katam hogayi...

Ab team ke saath bhi nahi rahega...

Ye toh bahut gadbad ho gayi...

Geet is scared...this is very bad...

She shoudn't have done this...

Why did she get angry?

And Maan is also upset...he has a reason to drink...

Yes, these men find any reason to get themselves drunk...

Love failure, india won the match...india lost the match...match wash out ho gaya...anything...just anything can start them drinking...

Maan loves partying and that's where the trouble begins...haina babaji?

When Geet is around then his hands are tied and he just keeps away from it...

He can't escape Geet's hawk eyes...

She keeps following him like a shadow...

Though he says that he has quit drinking and she need not worry she won't believe his words...

This annoys him often but he loves the fact that she cares for him and she is really worried about his getting back to drinking...

And she had successfully helped him get out that habit once for all...

He has no intentions to braek his promise...

MSK ek bar vada kartha toh ussko kabhi nahi bhooltha...haina?

Par ab toh Geet saath nahi hai, MSK ko sambalne ki!

Now Maan wouldn't have any problem at all...

No one to check him...

He is on his own...

Had Geet been talking to him he wouldn't think about that ...

But now he is angry with her and would go back to that gandi habit just to irrirate her...

Geet couldn't sleep all night for Maan's mobile is switched off and she doesn't know what he is doing?

Next morning...

Geet gets the answer...

And yes, she is right...Maan has got himself into trouble again...

And this time the media had caught him in action...

Vicky is watching the flash news...

He raises the volume so that Geet could hear...

Geet comes out running...

Her worst nightmare has come true...

Babaji...ab kya hoga?

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Posted: 11 years ago




tum harr baar tension kyun badha deti ho yaar😒...ab kya kiya Maan ne...😲

geet ko apni galati ka ehasaas hua...aur Maan ne doosri galati kardi...yeh silsila kab chalega...😕

Nice updates...


aur mujhe tension se jaldhi chutkara chahiye...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update did maan drink again ???
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 36
awesome...
both are stubborn...
sigh...
and Maan well he wants to win so that Geet wont be angry even more...
and Geet is happy he won the match...
oh ho Maan is gonna be in trouble...
did he drink or not?
and Geet is so worried for him...
Vicky us angry?
why?
cont soon dear...
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yeh kya hogaya baar baar mu

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