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Chapter Two:
*Later the next day*
Aliya was busy in their room cleaning up as Zain took a shower in the bathroom. She was cleaning the dress table when her phone began to ring. She went over to the bedside and picked it up. "Hello?"
*7 Minutes later*
Zain came out of the shower with his wet hair touching his forhead. He went to put his towel away when he saw Aliya with her eyes huge looking down at her phone.
"Zain." Aliya's voice sounded quiet serious and mono tone. "I know, everything." Zain walked up to her confused.
"Everything? What are you talking about."
"I'm talking about Ayaat and Rocky and how she came to Mumbai for a different reason. I know that you helped her and you didn't do to Dehli, but Bhopal to drop her off safely."
"Look Aliya, I was going to tell you but I didn't want you to worry."
"That's not why I am telling you why I know everything. In fact I should be saying thank you for saving my sisters life, but that's not really not what's bothering me the most. What is that Ayaat sent me video. A video that you may not know anything of, and you may not want to, but it has to do with your safety. Would you like to see the video." Zain hesitated. What type of video would Zain not want to see?
"Yeah sure. " He took a deep breath in as she passed him her phone. He pressed play. It started off with Rocky face on.
"Ayaat. You think you can hide from me. You never will. If you don't come back to mumbai yourself, I will start hurting your family. Your utterly annoying Jiju, Zain Abdullah. And don't think it's hard for me to do that. You think I'm the only one who wants to hurt him. Half of his family is in it with me. You know your jiju's accident? That was because of us. I was the one in the car. *laughs* He thinks he is all that? He knows nothing. How do you think I knew that he would be there on that street, his mom told me herself. It is true that she only wanted Zain hurt to blame Aliya, but that doesn't mean that she didn't want pain for her own son. She gave me this plan herself. She knew I wanted revenge, so she gave me the opportunity. *Laughs again* Ayaat, you and you're family will suffer if you don't come to Mumbai. It's your choice; let your family suffer because of your selfishness or come here and no one will get hurt." The video cut. Zain looked numb, he had no words. His mother, his own mother, almost killed him. All for what? Because he doesn't like his wife, because she's jealous? Disgusting.
"Zain?" Aliya put her hand on his shoulder. "Are you okay?" Zain went and sat on their bed. Aliya followed and sat right next to him.
"Aliya. I don't know what to do. What should I do? My own mother."
"Firstly, you need to calm down Zain. Don't make any decisions in anger or angst."
"I have made my decision Aliya." He took her hand and stood up. "Let's go." He pulled her arm behind him as they walked out of their room, down to living room and Zain stopped. "MOM! DAD! BHAI!"
"Zain, what are you doing? Stop!" His grip only got tighter. "Ow. Zain stop."
"Aliya. You support the truth right? Then why can't you support me now?"
"Because you're still weak Zain. You shouldn't be walking around or yelling. This could cause anything to you right now. It's too much pressure. Just calm down. We can think of something else to do."
"No Aliya. The truth is better being opened now than later." The whole family came to join Zain and Aliya to see what the whole chaos was about.
"Zain beta, what are you doing. You should be resting." Zain's ammi came in front of him and put her hand on his shoulder. "Is everything okay?" She turned and looked at Aliya. "Aliya, I though you said you were going to take care of Zain. What is this?" Zain's eyes filled with anger. He let go of Aliya's hand to remove his moms hand off of his shoulder.
"Really mom? Are you really worried about me?"
"Of course I am Zain."
"LIES." The whole room went silent.
"Zain! Do not talk to your mother like that!" Zain's abbu cut through the silence.
"But that is how you talk to a liar dad. An actress and mastermind of her own game."
"Zain. Are you calling me a liar. How dare you?"
"How dare I what? How dare I call you by what you actually are. A liar."
"Zain. Why in the world are you calling your mother a liar?"
"Look for yourself." His dad came up to Zain, next to his wife, and took the phone and played the video.
*After the Video*
Everyone fell silent. "Believe me now? She tried to hurt me! She got a guy to try to hurt me because he is jealous of my BIWI." Biwi.. the word ran through Aliya's head again and again. Was he really mad because his mother lied, or because she wanted to ruin Aliya?
"Is this true?" Zain's father asked his wife. She looked confused, lost, afraid and exposed.
"No. I don't know. How can you believe this. This is probaly all Aliya's doing. She just wants to ruin me, ruin us,"
"ENOUUGH!" Zains voice roared like a lion. "I have decided that if mom has such a problem with Aliya and I, then we will leave. From this mansion and from you all." Zain grabbed on to Aliya's hand and began to walk out the door.
"Wait Zain. We can't leave our family."
"They are not our family anymore. We are our own family now."
"But Zain. Where will we go?" They were now at the car. He handed her the keys so she can drive.
"Farm house..."


Thank you all for continuing to the next chapter! Once again. I ask for some feedback. Please help me write better! Tell me anything I can change! Thanks once again.

Edited by IIdewaaneII - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb update
I sent you buddy request pls accept and send me pm of your stories.
Finally zain knows the truth and loved the way he supported aliya
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg!!!! It would be so wonderful if Zain could find out the truth about his mom in the show too.. Again I really loveee it.. Can't wait for the next chapter.. Please update soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update.suraiya did the accident and zain get to know all about that.now zaya going to stay in farm house.waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update.loved it updtae the next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You guys are all sweet! Thank you so much!
Once again I will be updating soon, and will PM anyone who asked for it! Thanks once again! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb very nice. I loved the way Zain took aliya and went leaving everyone there behind.
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Nice! PM me when you continue :)
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Awesome update !!! do PM me , continue soon love it
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Chapter Three:
Aliya helped Zain get into the car. "Are you sure you want to do this Zain. We still can go back and -"
"No. I've had enough. We're going to the Farmhouse. If you want to stay go ahead. I wouldn't expect you to take my side or help." Aliya felt a bit hurt from his words. Did he not trust her at all? Does he really think that she won't help him at all.
"Shut up Zain. Of course I will come with you." Zain looked at her with affection. He was lucky to at least someone on his side when the world seemed to be against him. Aliya shut his door and walked over to the driver seat. She got in and started her car.
"Where are you going? I haven't even given the directions to the farm house yet." Aliya drove out of the driveway and on to the road. "Aliya."
"You need to learn how to stay quiet. And before we go to the farm house, we have get your medication, again; Because you were in such a rush that you ran without taking anything. Nor did you let me take anything."
"Okay, okay. Fine."
After 2 hours of driving Aliya had gotten the mediation Zain needed and a bit of food for dinner. They were now only 5 minutes away from the house. "Zain, when we get inside, you take your medicine and rest while I cook dinner okay?"
"Okay." They reached the Farm house. It was a big sized home with a cute little garden in the back with a bench. Once she parked the car, Aliya got out and helped Zain go inside. He took out his keys and in the keychain was the only key to the farmhouse. He opened it up and took the key back out. It was a bit dusty inside but had a lot of space. They walked inside and placed the things in the kitchen. Aliya poured him a glass of water and give him his meds. She than helped him upstairs to their new room. She fixed up the bed and helped him lay down.
"I'll make dinner now and wake you up when it's done. For now rest." She turned away to walk downstairs but was stopped by the cold hand wrapped around her wrist. She turned around to see whats wrong.
"Thank you. For coming here with me." Aliya looked stunned. Thank you from Zain? He must be really hurt. She didn't know how to respond.
"Rest Zain." He let go of her wrist and she left the room. She felt torn apart. How lonely Zain must be feeling. Hurt by his own mother. With these thoughts running through her mind she went down stairs to cook dinner for them both.
An hour later Aliya came upstairs with both of their food on a tray. When she came into the room she noticed Zain was sitting on his bed, looking a bit upset. She knocked on the door before coming, disturbing Zain from his thoughts bring him back to reality.
"Dinner is ready." She entered the room and sat right infront of of Zain again with their food. "Are you okay?"
"Yeah I'm fine. I can feed myself today. You must be hungry too, so eat." Aliya smiled faintly and passed his plate to him. She picked up her own plate and began to eat. Dinner passed by quietly. Neither of them said a word. After Aliya picked up their dished and brought it downstairs to clean. She went into the kitchen and cleaned everything again. She turned off the lights, and was about to go upstairs to rest when she noticed Zain outside alone, sitting on the bench alone. She went outside to join him. Walking up to him, she noticed the tears in his eyes. She never really witnessed him crying before. She sat next to him, not saying a word.
"Aliya..."
"Hmm"
"You know how you asked me if I was okay."
"Yeah"
"I'm not okay." His voice sounded very shake-y. Aliya turned to look at him. He looked broken. "I - I just never thought that my own mom would do such a thing, you know?"
"Zain, I know this is tough for you." She put her hand on his shoulder, "But you should know that I will always be here with you. Always."
Zain looked at her, appreciating everything he has. He really did underestimate her. A lot. He changed his position, putting his head on her lap and his legs up on the bench. Aliya felt a bit awkward but said nothing. As he looked up at the stars, his tears escaped his eyes, for the first time in front of Aliya.
He turned his head to her stomach and just poured his pain out, sobbing like he hadn't cried in years. Aliya put her hand on his head and on his back and tried to comfort him.
"Shh. Zain, it's okay. Everything will be alright." He got up from her lap and tried to calm down. He cleaned his face from tears.
"I'm sorry. I shouldn't have- I just."
"Don't apologise. I'm here for you." He then relaxed and put his head on her shoulder.
"Thank you Aliya." She said nothing but just looked at the stars with him, praying to god that everything would be settled out soon.
Thank you everyone once again for reading and for those who commented again. I really do appreciate it.
The next chapter will be more ZaYa Romance! :) Please do comment!

Edited by IIdewaaneII - 11 years ago

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