AkDha FF*Teri baahon mei youn simath jaaon- ch 11 pg 130 (12July)

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Hi friends ! So back with another FF ... This FF is a modern FF of 21st century .. It will show you a romantic lovestory of Jodha and Jalal (Akbar) I hope you all will like it ...

Chapter 1

Suryabhan moving towards her " i love you more than any one can love " in a drunk tone ... " leave me ... Don't dare to come near to me ... or ..rr else ... i'll " she said in a depressed tone .. trying to run away ... but he hold her very tightly ... " or else ... ?? what will you do ... no one can save you from me "
he said locking her between himself and the wall of the room ... He moves towards her to kiss , but still threw him very hard ... and he fell on the floor ... as he was drunk , he couldn't get up to ran after her fastly ... she ran quickly from there ... her dupatta was lying on the floor ... and she ran without it .. trying to save herself ..

The moon was so calm today , cool breeze ... it was so silent , as if its heaven ... only the voice of her sandals can be heard ... she ran and ran very hard ... Suryabhan was following her ... " ruk jao Jodha... tumhein aaj humse koi nahe bacha sakta ... " Jodha started running more fastly ... soon she was so tired ... and there ... Suryabhan catches here ... " i told you na ... no one can save you from me... now .. where will u ran my love" caressing her hairs ... she bites his hand .. and he was shocked " ouch ... what the the ... ab mein tumhein nahe chodunga ... " he started following her angrily ...

Jodha was running , unknowingly ... where was she going .. she doesn't know .. she was looking back at him and was running suddenly she feels as if she was in someone's arms ... his manly chest ... his warmth breath ... his arms were so comfortable for her ... she felt very very comfortable and hugged him tightly ... holds his shirt from back , squeezing it ... " please ! save me ... please ..please.. " she said cryingly ... He too wrapped his arms around her at once ... he too felt so comfortable hugging her ... but who was that ??

Jism paak ankhon mei bhar loon
saans saans mei shamil ker loon ...
is duniya mei jaan gawa ..
kuch us duniya mei hasil ker loon..


Suryabhan reaches there .. and he saw Jodha in someone's arms ... a little shadow was hiding his face a bit ... Suryabhan said in a drunk tone " aiyee.. kon ha tu ... chal chod meri Jodha ko" . The stranger looked at Suryabhan with a anger look . his eyes filled out with anger .. his eye brows frowning ... He lose the hold of Jodha ... took off his coat ... and made Jodha wear it as she was without her supatta ... and made her sit in his car ... Jodha was so much worried .. The stranger moved towards Suryabhan ... " what problem do you have ? " he asked angrily ...

Suryabhan kept his hand tightly on the strangers shoulder " abee tu .. chal nikal ja yaha se .. kawab ma haddi mat ban .. " listening this bad words from his mouth ... he frowned more and more and was not able to control his anger any more ... and gave him a tight punch .. the punch was so tight and hard that he fell on the floor and blood came out from his nose ... " tameez se baat ker raha hu .. toh tameez se karo ... " the stranger said frowning at him ...

His punch was so hard .. that it made Surya go crazy .. and he ran from there ... leaving all his bad intentions behind , he ran trying to save himself from that man !

When the stranger went in his car ... he saw Jodha unconscious ... she had fainted, he sat in his car ... on the driving seat .. Jodha was beside the driving seat ... he tried waking her up .. he slowly caresses her face ... omg ... it was heavenly soft ... butterflies fluttered in his stomach ... her skin was so soft and it was so beautiful .. her fragnance .. shhh ! it was heavenly very good in smell ... he then tried waking her up by calling her ... he said " uthiye ... Jodha ... " but every thing in vain ...

He looks at her , move near to her and moves his hand at her side ... and then takes out the seat belt and their faces were so near , her breath can touch his face ... he ties the belt ... and then he moves her head a little up as it was falling ... he saw ,.. little of her hairs are coming on her face , with his finger he moved those hairs back at her ear .. and then he decides to take her with him for tonight ... as he doesn't feel good leaving her alone in this bad time ...

Sorry if it seems an ugly story 😆

So this was the update .. basically the new FF 😆 One more thing ... this is an FF so ..
all Surya fans ... sorry if you mind me writing like this .. but really i don't like that guy 😆 and tat's why made him a villan 😉

Hit likes please and comment 😃

index

chp 1 : pg 1
chp 2 : pg 10
chp 3 : pg 17
chp 4 : pg 25
chp 5 : pg 35
chp 6 : pg 47
Chp 7 : pg 57
Chp 8 : pg 71
Chp 9 : pg 82
Chp 10 : pg 92
Chp 11 : Pg 130
Chp 12 : Pg 143
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onaisa thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Supppeeerb👍🏼!!!!!!!!! ...loved it yaar it ws awwwsum 👏
Do write further!😊

Edited by onaisa - 11 years ago
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Wow what an amazing start 👏👏
But why did u have to end it so quickly 😡
Yaar this is not fair u started this awesome story now u have to update the next part tonight or else 😆
No but I am not joking u have 2 update the next part tonight
Tanx for the pm 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: onaisa

Supppeeerb👍🏼!!!!!!!!! ...loved it yaar it ws awwwsum 👏

Do write further!😊

Thank u so much Onaisa darling 🤗
I'm so much glad you liked my FF so much ... Muuuavh ! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rima4ever

fantastic start

please continue

awww 🤗thnk u so so so so much rima
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SUMESHNI

Wow what an amazing start 👏👏

But why did u have to end it so quickly 😡
Yaar this is not fair u started this awesome story now u have to update the next part tonight or else 😆
No but I am not joking u have 2 update the next part tonight
Tanx for the pm 🤗

awww 🤗thanks a ton sweety pie 🤗
as promised u will update by tomorrow or the day after tomorrow 🤗 no more time .. that's my promise to my sweety pie 🤗
i'm so Glad that you also like my FF so much mmmuuavvvh 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aanchal_c

awesome start.do continue soon.

Thank u so much Anchal dear 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ---Mehak---

awww 🤗thanks a ton sweety pie 🤗
as promised u will update by tomorrow or the day after tomorrow 🤗 no more time .. that's my promise to my sweety pie 🤗
i'm so Glad that you also like my FF so much mmmuuavvvh 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mehaku!!!! My darling my sweet heart what an awesome start loved it to core and became a die heart fan of ur FF... Wow amazing work loved it to core... 👏 and how dare u to call this chapter a ugly story 😡 it is the loveliest story and pls continue soon my rasgulla... 😃
Edited by NikkiReed - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: NikkiReed

Mehaku!!!! When r u updating... 😃

Edited by NikkiReed - 11 years ago

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