FF- DANGEROUS LOVE Thread 11:Link to Thread 12 / Page 1 & 146 - Page 48

Created

Last reply

Replies

792

Views

148.4k

Users

144

Likes

3.4k

Frequent Posters

mani24 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
oh meri jannat di kalse I've read this teaser 10 times already aur di jab bhi padhti hoon my heart cries for maan di 😭 ek taraf jo usne kaha woh uske dil ke hisaab se sahi hai use lagta raha ke he was able to bring there love back to her jiski wajah se she came back to him the way she always has been lekin ab sach jaan kar ke she knew the truth all along aur isliye she came back to him is killing him ke she just pitied me she does not love me anymore 😭 aur di geet ka outburst to her mother was right coz yeh sab zimmedar hai aaj maaneet ki is halat ke aur khaas taur par for maan he thinks he forced his love aur yeh baby is a result of tht force not for the love tht he has for her aur di my heart cried jab geet said ke yeh baby ek b***😭 keh layega 😭 no di aisa nahi hai we know tht right😭 aur di she just told her mother tht we all will party aakhir u got wht u wanted by ruining my aur my love's life😭 girls chalo jaldi se meri di ko likes aur comment do coz main ek aur minute bhi wait nahi kar sakti I want the update today di plzzz mere liye de dein coz di me dying to read the update di just dying like hell for the update😭
custodian75 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Teaser is giving me shivers.
jeyanthi123 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
nice teaser update soon dr...
waiting
Desigirls12 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago



lovely teaser... now again destinty started its game...
spvd thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
teaser
nice...
how could Maan say like that?
poor Geet...
cont soon...
sanghita0000 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
sad...but what happened to maan all of a sudden?? hope rano has not anything again...😡...I just hate her...😡
lemO thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
ohh...i was dam emotional...but i think we all want the dangerous lover back not this emotional who leaves her...oh god u right too good but what about the title dangerous love that was in the beginning...continue soon...s this was one of my longest update...waiting...
sdlife19 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 11 years ago



PART 74


Jaannn
she heard him call her and the moment she saw his eyes he questioned her you knew it all Jaan... you knew it all. His heart cried feeling the pain that she was going through, knowing the truth about her mother but she did not let him know. He just kept looking at her trying to find when she leant about the real truth but then suddenly everything flashed in front of his eyes making him to step back with the realization of her change and love. Maannn she called shaking her head for no as she saw him backing. I love you... I really love you he shook his head as she spoke those words falling on her knees seeing the pain and questions in his eyes. I really love you Maan... main sirf aapki hoon.. sirf aapki she cried but he stopped her by raising his hand and nodding for a no. He turned to leave but she just ran without caring for the baby inside her. She only had one person on her mind right now and she needed to stop him from going away. She grabbed his hand making him to turn and see her but then the piercing pain in his eyes shivered her to death. I love you she said cupping his face with her bleeding. You don't love me Geet... You don't love me Maan pushed Geet away from him but Annie just held her fearing her fall.You never loved me.. and I was the silliest person to think that Geet Handa loved Maan Singh Khuranna.. par ab tho sachayi saamne hain Geet.. tum tho sirf mujhpar daaya khaati ho.



Maannn Geet cried as she heard him. It did not matter that he pushed her but his words were slowly killing him but she only kept shaking her head denying his words trying to get closer but Maan just stepped back with her each step towards him. You did not... tumne sirf sach jaankar meri aur kadam uttaya Geet.. maine tho socha tha ki meri Geet mujhse aaj bhi pyar karti hain jaise pehle karti thi.. But you wronged me Geet... You proved my love wrong... It's not love but pity coz you feel that your Mother ruined me... do you get its only your bloody pity on me... and trust me Geet, Maan Singh Khuranna ko hamdardi nahi chahiye..nahi tumara jhoota pyar... ab tho mujhe ais laga raha hain that you never loved me at all.. woh tho sirf main tha who forced you into this relation.


His each word only cut her more piercing her heart and soul into uncountable pieces. She just stared at him as he looked at her with eyes tat for the first time reflected his pain and fear for this relation and instead of hiding he was shouting the pain that he never did. Maan turned to look at his Dad and said walking towards him you were right Dad... Maan Singh Khuranna only forced himself on the innocent nave Geet Handa... iski tho saaza milni hain na mujhe Dad. Rajveer for the very first time was speechless as he saw those tears tat wetted his son's eyes. He had always seen Maan as a hard boy but today the vulnerability he was seeing was just killing him to no extent. The realization of not understanding his own son was killing him and right now he did not have any words to soothe the pain that his son was going through while Vicky stood rooted hearing and cursing himself for bringing this situation. Maan... You Rajveer tried to speak but Maan just smiled nodding his head Na Dad... aaj nahi. Aaj tho sach sabke saamne aaya hain... Maan Singh Khuranna is a bloody looser Dad. Rajveer shook his head denying it but Maan just smiled at the truth and turned towards Rano and said Choti Maa ab tho aapko darrne ki zarrurat nahi hain.. She is all yours Choti Maa.. waise bhi mera kabhi haq hi nahi tha aapki Geet par sirf ek ziddh thi jo aaj thoot gayi and m really sorry for all the pain and troubles I gave you.. but trust me Choti Maa I still love you the way I always did.. And I promise you that from this very moment there won't be any Maan in your life nor in her life and he turned to walk away but stopped seeing Geet looking at him.


Geet he called and she looked up through her teary eyes. Will you listen to my last wish she nodded not knowing wat he was saying to her ish bache ko maar do Geet and move on... Move on in your life forgetting this beast in your life.. samjh lena ki Maan tha hi nahi... let me stay in peace that even after I ruining you, you did not let me affect your life.. Please ek aakhri wish hain meri. He smiled as he wiped her tears and turned to walk away. She just kept staring at his back but then she said stopping him from going only if you stay with me Maan... or else you will find me dead along with this unborn baby. He turned clenching his fists while she continued My love is pity for you na Maan... then can you explain me wat real love is.. can you define wat limits love has. She waited for his response but not getting she laughed saying jab humare pyar mein koi limits hi nahi hain tho how will you define them Maan... humne tho woh sab haddein paar ki hain.. aur aap keh rahe hain ki main aapse pyar nahi karti... should I laugh or cry hearing this from you Maan. She looked at him in anger and then grabbed him by collar asking if I did not love you then I would not destroy myself to such an extent tat you were forced to be back to me.. sirf ek sach jaankar aapne yeh kaha tat my love is pity for you. bolo Maan.



She shook him as she poured all the pain she was having. Bolo Maan.. why would I stoop so low to get you back.. kya woh pyar nahi tha.. do saal se jyada wait kiya maine aapka.. woh pyar nahi tha kya.. yaha tak ki aapki Geet ko badal diya.. par nahi woh tho pyar nahi tha na.. you know wat Maan... fighting with oneself is more difficult than anything else par maine kiya.. har din fight kiya apne dil aur dhimaang se phir bhi I got only one answer that the Maan Singh Khuranna who can kill and destroy anyone who lays eyes on his Geet, how can he betray me.. How can he betray tat girl for whom he changed from a soft Maan to the dangerous Maan Singh Khuranna.. how can he let anyone else touch and see his possession his obsession..bolo Maan wat answer you have for this... aur aap keh rahe hain tat I don't love you. She laughed as if she was laughing at herself bataye na Maan kya galat kiya maine tat I hid the truth that I knew about this Rano Handa she said pointing towards Rano who unfortunately is my mother.. kya galat kiya by hiding it as my Maan did not wanted his Geet to know wat her own mother did to destroy her.. Bolo na.. kya galat kiya maine. Jaanthe hain aap she held him by collar again the day I came to know about it I wanted to kill her.. Kill her for not destroying me but to give pain to tat one person who would go to any extent to save me.. Kill others who would dare to touch me.. So why should not I hide this truth Maan.. jawab dijiye.. galat kiya kya... She cupped his face and said yaad hain the day when we returned back from our holiday you said that they are family and I need to forgive them.. maine tho sirf aapki baat maani hain Maan.. When you could not hold any anger for my mother and your choti Maa tho main kyu kahu tat I knew this truth after I was back from hospital after I had cut my wrist to kill myself.. boliye Maan... aapne tho inhe dhaamki bhi nahi di thi ush din you only said that I should not know the truth that she was responsible for the separation as you did not wanted me to go through that pain.. tho maine bhi wahi kiya na Maan.. (This was the time when Maan claimed her in anger and she cut her wrists in their cottage. Just two days after this she overhead Maan and Rano speaking and after this you all know wat happened).


So long Geet.. so long and you did not even let me know he cried saying it as he stepped away from her again. The mere thought that she was back to him only after she came to knowing the truth was killing him. She looked at him with anger and pain and then suddenly she screamed Celebrate you win Rano Handa. Geet turned towards Rano and continued maaza aata hain na to see your daughter's life being thrashed the way you wanted... come on Rano Handa she walked pushing Annie a bit and grabbed Rano's hand let's celebrate this ultimate win of yours.. aakhir aap ne apni asli jeet paa li by ruining me and my love.. dekho na.. hear wat my own husband says that this baby is the result of his sin and you know wat you are the one who forced him to commit this sin par I don't feel it.. coz rape is when the other person also fights to stop par maine tho kiya hi nahi but see na he says tat he raped me.. ab tho aur maaza aayega after all he is going to leave me with this baby all alone aur jaanthi ho ki bina baap ke bache ko kya kehte hain.. A bloody b*****.. And tats wat is our baby is... hain na Rano Handa.. yahi chahti thi na aap..Chalo.. Let's celebrate... Party karte hain.. After all Rano Handa finally ruined her daughter the way she wanted.


A dark cloud passed over the entire haveli where none could speak a word as they were witnessing the destruction of their children. Nahi jaanthi hoon main ki why did you do all this and I don't want to even know... but you have won and tats the ultimate win for you.. you not only destroyed me and Maan but my bother and Di too Rano Handa and see now you all are together and m all alone. She laughed again moving in circles around Rano and now you will be more happy after all I will kill myself along with this life... jaanthi hain aap she suddenly started to cry loud yeh Geet tho Maan ke bina jeena hi nahi jaanthi. How can I stay alive when my Maan will leave me and go.. She could not even think of it as this time she would kill herself but then she had her questions to Rano.. Why did she decide for her life? She stood up and wiped her tears looking straight at Rano Maa.. Can you recall about the last decision you took for me leaving this one.. she turned and asked other can anyone remind me any one of your wishes or decision you'll enforced on me.. boliye jawab dijiye na. She circled everyone and then smirked saying how can you remember when you all never did anything for me.. paida kiya aur chod diya saying that Geet Handa belongs to Maan Singh Khuranna.. Hain na Maa... bachpan se yahi bola gaya tha na ki Maan hi tumara sab kuch hain aur ushi Maan ko Geet se dur kiya.


Do you remember Maa she questioned holding Rano's shoulders when I was around 13 years ush kidnapping se pehle I asked you wat should I do after my 10th exams aur aapne aur Papa ne kya kaha tha.. jao apne Maan se pooch.. Ask him wat he wants me to study... She smiled remembering those moments when Maan had asked her tat though he would want her to study wat he did but it was her wish but then suddenly her smile turned into a painful one. She looked at Rano again and asked do you remember Maa... har baar kuch manghu you asked me to get permission from Maan.. tho aapne ye decision kyu liya. Rano did not have any words to answer while Geet just smirked and turned towards Mohinder. Where was your love and power when I was kidnapped Papa... kidnappers ne dhamki di aur aap yah rote rahe.. par it was my Maan who dared to find them and kill them.. agar ush din Maan nahi hota tho aaj main shayad zinda bhi nahi hoti... and then it was Maan who played his game of making me feel that I was dreaming.. waha aapne ya Maa ne decision kyu nahi liya... why did not you two made Maan to back out from that situation.. par nahi why would you coz you trusted him more than yourself... hain na.. But I have seen the change.. darr ke saaye mein jeeti thi main... just thinking why my Maan changed so suddenly and then when I realized the truth.. I had seen the pain in his eyes... par phir bhi koi nahi tha tab.. it was Maan who consoled me saying that they did not touch me.. boliye Papa.. Did my own family ever decide anything for me.. From my clothes to my food everything was decided by Maan.


She looked at everyone wanting someone to answer her questions. She smirked knowing that none could answer her questions. Prem bhaiya she smiled sadly at him and asked you always knew that I was scared of Maan's anger but wat did you do.. ek do baar aake mujhe samjhaya. Saying Geet you need to grow up and understand Maan.. he is not that old Maan but did you ever try to understand the pain I was going through seeing you and Di... koi nahi jaan paya ki Geet ke mann mein kya hain.. haan Maan janthe the he always knew me but his fear of losing me was more than his love.. boliye aap sab.. kya kiya aap sabne when Dev was harassing me.. Did anyone of you tried to find who was behind me Papa.. aap tho mere family the phir kyu aap sab ne Maan pe chod diya tha.. Wat if he could not have found Dev... Would you regret your decision of giving your daughter to Maan... Maan married me when I was not in my sense phir bhi kuch nahi kaha... Why did not you fight with Maan and slapped him for it.. boliye.. aapka haq nahi tha kya mujhpar ya was it that once I was born you left me as you thought Maan would take care of me.. sirf pyar kiya aapne aur kuch nahi.. kabhi mere andar jhak ke dekha ki Geet ko kya chahiye.. Never then why Maa why did you destroy my love...kisne haq diya aapko meri zindagi barbaad karne ki..galatiya aap kare aur saaza mujhe aur Maan ko mili... where were you when I was destroying myself in those two years..


Par tumne tho dhamki Rano said and she regretted the moment she said those words. So you were scared of me.. agar itna hi darr tha phir why...jaanthi hain Maa wat I hate mysedlf more as the Maan Singh Khuranna who always claimed to say that I was his life and would never ever leave me, but he did.. Mere Maan ne sirf aapke liye mujhe marne chod diya.. he tried to prove me that he was just using me for his lust.. par agar aisa hota tho he would have used me before I turned 18 na Maa.. jab bhi hum akele the we did cross out limits par ush hadh ko paar nahi kiya humne kabhi.. phir lust kaha se aaya Maa... and now I understand that there is no love in our relation.. There nothing called feelings between us.. kyu ki agar hota tho Maan aaj yeh nahi kehta tat my love is pity for him.. He too failed to understand me the way you all did... She wiped her tears and walked towards Rajveer and said Bade Papa you know you were always wrong for saying that I don't deserve Maan par sach tho yeh hain ki I don't deserve Maan.. dekhiye Bade Papa you all were scared coz you all thought he was hurting me and forcing me to stay the way he wants.. agar aisa hota tho My Maan would never listen to this woman who claim to be my mother Bade Papa... aapko tho garv hona chahiye ki aapka beta itna maantha hain aap sabko tat he did not even mind me dying... yeh mere Maan ka pyar hain and now I will do as he say.. hamesha tho unki sunthi aayi hoon na tho ab bhi waise hi karungi as I don't want anyone to point their fingers at his baby.. I don't want anyone to say that our baby is...


Chup... she felt the sudden chill in her body feeling the hand on her mouth. She blinked seeing him staring at her with pain and love. No one can call our baby like tat samjhi tum.. zinda hoon main ab tak and yeh humara hain and dare anyone says anything to our baby I will kill that person.. chahiye woh choti Maa hi kyu na ho. She blinked her eyes and just threw her arms around him hugging him tight. He could clearly understand the fear she was going through but yet he did a mistake of doubting her love and it was obvious to him when he learnt about she knowing the truth. Jaan he tried to pull her as she was pressing herself into him. He was scared for the baby and though he had decided to kill but internally he was fighting with himself every moment. Mujhe baby chahiye Jaan... apne gunnah ki saaza main humare bache ko nahi dena chahta Jaan... nahi tumhe khona chahta hoon. She cried pressing herself more into him while he just let her do it. I hate her Maan.. I hate Maa.. I hate her he cried understanding the pain as this is wat he feared. He never wanted his Jaan to know this truth about her mother but she did and she had hidden it from him. He looked up at Rano and said with pain in his voice I did tell you Choti Maa.. but do you remember wat you said that I don't need to worry for your daughter.. aapne apni promise nahi rakhi choti Maa.. You destroyed her to such an extent that probably even I can't guess... mer gusse aur darr se bhi jyada destruction your one decision did... but I was mad to believe you that you would look after my Geet.. I was mad to trust the mother in you when you promised me that you will keep her happy... I was mad to bind myself to the promise I had made to you... mujhe tho uski waqt wapas aana chahiye tha when she left you all.


But how could I see Rano could not even complete her words as she heard Maan screaming calling out to Geet patting her cheeks. She instantly ran to him and the moment she tried to touch Geet Maan pushed her for the very first time in his life. His eyes emitting the fire but one side he was dead scared seeing his Jaan laying lifeless in his arms. He had always managed to keep him strong even when she was hurt worst but today hearing her pain he was scared for her, scared to death that the fear he was hiding of losing her would turn true. Jaannn he patted her cheeks but there was no response from her. Jaan please open your eyes.. please itni badi saaza na do Jaan.. please. His tears clearly indicating that how scared he was. He looked up and called Annie who was instantly near him trying to wake Geet. Annie tell her to open her eyes na.. please.. meri Geet mujhe chod ke nahi jaa sakthi please na Annie.. mujhe itni badi saaza nahi mil sakthi hain.. please... I won't be able to leave without her.. kahu na apni Geet se aakhen kholne ke liye.. dekho main maantha hoon main galat hoon but I want her.. I want our baby Annie.. please tell her to open her eyes.. please. He begged but there was nothing Annie could do.



Geet you can't leave me and go.. please Jaan.. open your eyes... you can't die.. aise nahi jaa sakthi he did not know wat he was speaking as he was so scared seeing her so limp and lifeless in front of his eyes that the fear he always had came right in front if him. Jaann.. open your eyes.. Jaan.. dedko baby ko kuch hoga please.. open your eyes.. dekho na Annie he pulled her hand touching it to Geet's face. She is not opening her eyes.. tumari baat maan leti hain na woh kaho na ushe.. to open her eyes.. ask her to see me Annie.. main mar jaunga uske bina Annie.. please.. yeh aise.. and suddenly he felt a stinging pain on his face. Annie looked up in anger and shook him by shoulders kuch nahi hua hain.. do you get your Geet is not dead bhai. She cried as she shook him but he just stared at her with pain and fear and she was helpless to see her strong brother so vulnerable for the first time in his life. She cried cursing the almighty for giving them this pain of love when they only did is to love each other immensely giving up everything in their life and the person who was responsible was their own and seeing Maan cry his whole family stood much more vulnerable as they could feel the hidden pain in their Maan.. Probably the pain that he was hiding since she was kidnapped and he had seen the worst state of hers. Rajveer was totally shaken seeing his son that he collapsed on the floor falling on his knees. He had failed to see the fear in his son's life and he was the worst father that he could not see the pain he was always hiding behind the anger while others just could stand and shed tears for Maan.



Precap: A mother's realization but its too late for it.. Coz sometimes even when you want you cant reach to tat person.


I hope I have done justice to this update and trust me I have cried throughout while typing. Don't know how many would like but somewhere I feel I have done the justice to the dangerous lover Maan who was hiding his fear deep within and probably today it was out with Geet's emotional breakdown.


Would not like to say but i have to as Dangerous love is nearing its end. Another 4 updates and done.

Next update will be only after 25 pages of comment tat to long comments.

Do like and comment

Edited by sdlife19 - 11 years ago
dreamyharika thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
truly emotional and a great update di!!

more of the realization it was a confession of geet!! i liked the way she spoke out saying the only person who truly loved her was and is maan!!

and the main point is the clarification on the rape part that he didnt do it in actual sense was the best part di which i wanted geet to say it and she did😊

the best and lovely update as ever but rano😡 what realization she needs now?? bahar phenk do usko she doesnt deserve to be called as geet's mother!! i hate her
Edited by dreamyharika - 11 years ago
harman12 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Such a painful update made me cry

But happy that maan realised how much geet is important in his life

Now really want rano to understand the truth

Hope geet n baby ko kuch na ho
Edited by harman12 - 11 years ago

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

11 years ago

Priya Fan fiction - Update thread /pg 121-2 aug

hello friends... am not able do pm regularly... so please my all friend follow this thread... i post the link here... so you get link easily of

Expand â–¼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: NilzStorywriter

8 months ago

Something About Us- MG || (Part 50|Page 50)

Something About Us Hey All, starting a new story. It is a kind of reboot or version 2 of the story Something About You . Hope you will enjoy it...

Expand â–¼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: SillySoni

1 years ago

Dolent - Maaneet FF - Chapter 17 page 25 - 31/12/24 Dolent - Maaneet FF - Chapter 17 page 25 - 31/12/24

Hi, as the title suggests this story is going to be full of sorrow, but because it's my FF there will be unconditional love as well Whoever...

Expand â–¼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: WaveTeal

1 years ago

My First Crush * Maaneet TS * 🔺🔺UPDATED @ Page 6 || 28th Mar My First Crush * Maaneet TS * 🔺🔺UPDATED @ Page 6 || 28th Mar

M y First Crus h INDEX ~ A Maaneet Tale ~ CONTENTS : SHOT 1 - PART 1 Page 1 ~ Scroll Down PART 2 Page 1 ~ Scroll Down SHOT 2 : Scarlet Flames -...

Expand â–¼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".