Baldev FF-Baazigar anniversary pt 24 pg 65

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Warning!!!!!!!!!!!
This is hard-core very negative SS..if u feel u won't be able to bear such negativity..plx dnt read..its only for baldeva fans with a king size heart...

Don't throw chappals at me after reading it..its not my fault i already warned u๐Ÿ˜ƒ


"Baazigar o baazigar tu hai bada jaadugar"๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 1..pg 1
part 2..pg 6
part 3..pg 9
part 4..pg 12
part 5..pg 14
part 6..pg 19
part 7..pg 22
part 8..pg 25
part 9..pg 27
part 10..pg 29
part 11..pg 31
part 12..pg 35
part 13..pg 39
part 14..pg 42
part 15..pg 44
Edited by overactor - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Baldev SS
"Bazigar"
part 1

"kabhi kabhi kuch jeetne k liye kuch haarna padta he..aur haar k

jeetne wale ko baazigar kehte hen"

Baldev heard this on the radio as he sat on a bench..it was night

time and he was still out..roaming alone..but he felt all alone

too...left out..as if he didn't belong with the people around

him..there was happiness everywhere..everyone in the village was

celebrating..all people were over-joyed..except for him..he was all

alone..even when he had his friends and his mother by his side..he

still felt lonely..and this loneliness was killing him..eating him up

from inside..
He saw Ranveera smiling and laughing..Veera was all happy as her

brother was now elected as the new surpanch..the whole pind was

with them.

He clenched his fists as he saw them..anger and rage over-powering

the best of him..he was burning..he wanted to burn everything with

it.

He went to the crowd who didn't remember that he exsisted..

Baldev; oye band karo e sb tamasha ( he shouted ) kisi k zakhmon

pe namak chidakna to koi tum log se seekhe..ek ki jeet dikhai de rhi

tum log ko (he threw the alcohol bottle he held on the floor) lekin

dusre ki haar nhi dikh rhi.. (his eyes were emitting alot of heat, his

breath was hot..he was on fire)...

Veera stepped in

Veera; oye tu haar gya apne karmon ki wja se to kya teri wja se sab

sog manayege?

Baldev; oye veera..( his voice was too intense it send shivers through

her spine)..huh! sog..tune aaj tak aur kiya hi kya he..ro dho k dono

bhai behen sirf logon ki hamdardi jeette a rhe ho..

Random pind guy: o puttar..e to chunaw hen..e sb to chalta he..koi

haarta he to koi jeetta he

Baldev; acha!..to me qn nhi jeeta..such to he..tum sb pind wasiyon ko

ise hi chunna tha..shuru se hi..mene akhir bigada kya he tum sb ka?

Veera; baldev! apni haar ka tu khud zimedar he..dusron ko qn dosh

de rha he...

his gaze was so dangerous...she swallowed hard..he held her arm

with so much force..the blood from the arm was stopped.

Baldev; dosh...huh!..sb se bada dosh to tujhe dunga me..tune akhir

choda hi kya he mere pass

she looked at him..he was very serious and this was not one of their

usual fights..it was different..and he was different..the funny guy

was no where to be scene..he was a volcano at the moment that

would release the lava anytime..

Veera; baldev (she got tears in her eyes) menu dard ho rha he..

Ranvi moved forward to help her..Baldev put one hand on his chest

and that was enough to stop him..

Baldev; me dard kr rha hun..me..dard to tune diya he menu

Ranvi was struggling to get pass his hold.

Veera; baldev...(tears fell from her eyes, her voice described the

pain)..menu bht dard ho rha he..baldev..

He left her arm with a jerk...and pushed Ranvi.

Baldev; tum logon ko andaza bhi nhi gayal sher kya kr skta he (he

said with gritted teeth)..koi nhi...tum sab se badla lunga me..chun

chun k badla lunga...

Ranvi; pind de surpach de samne tu..teri himmat kese hui

Baldev; wada aya surpanch...huh!..tujhe to sb se pehle maza

chakaonga me..

and then he looked at veera

Baldev; tune to menu sb se wada zakham diya he veera...tenu to esi

saza dunga..k zindagi bhar yaad rkhegi tu..

he turned and left..
and as he went he threw stuff..broke tables..threw the chairs...kicked

stalls..

He was on his bed..anger overpowering the best of him, not letting

him sleep.

Baldev; iss pind k liye kya kuch nhi kitta me..aur in logon ne mere hi

sapne tod diye...wo bhi us ranvi waste..kabhi maaf nhi karanga me in

pind waliyan nu

In the morning he was ready with his destroying plans..he went

straight to the surpunch office..where Ranvi was being welcomed as

the newly appointed surpanch..

Jaggi; chalo paaji..sab khtm kr den

Baldev had a evil smile on his face..they burst into the office.

Baldev; oye ranvi tenu ki laga..tu surpunch ban k aish krega aur hum

makhiyan maarenge? o nhi oye..

he looked at Jaggi..Jaggi nodded..Baldev kicked the table of

surpunch and poured some alcohol on it..and set it on fire..

Ranvi and the others were shocked.

Man; o niqlo ithe se..ye pagal munda..sb jala dega bhago..

they all ran outside..two guys pulled Ranvi out.

Baldev laughed..

Jaggi; paji niqlo ithe se..e jaga jalne wali he..chalo

He pulled him out..Ranvi grapped his collar as soon as they were

out.

Ranvi; e ki kitta tune..

Baldev pushed Ranvi..

Baldev; e to sirf shuruwat he..abhi to mene pure pind nu jalana he..e

aag to ab tak sirf menu jala rhi thi..ab tum sb bhi isme mere sath

jalo ge..chal jaggi..

They went away..baldev still fuming...

Baldev was setting all the hay on fire...he was burning badly and he

wanted everything else to burn with him..

Ranvi held his shoulder and turned him..he was about to punch him

but Baldev held his fist...

Baldev; sochna bhi mat..e galti kr di na ranveere..to is phoose k sath

tu bhi jalta hua milega

Ranvi; Baldev..teri himmat kese hui mere pind nu

Baldev; oye bas..( he shouted, his eyes all red, his body shaking in

anger)...bht sun li teri bakwas..tera pind, teri mahanta, teri achai, teri

sachai, tera badaqban aur...aur teri veera

there was alot of pain in his voice when he said teri veera..

Ranvi and the other people stared at him.

Edited by overactor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Even though iam too lil to read this!!
Iam reading it...for Baldevaa!! ONLY!!!
cONTINUE SOON!!
Edited by DazzilerDizzy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow !! Diz is amazing yawr ๐Ÿ‘
Uff ballu in AYM avatar
and da dialogues was superb ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ... cont soon n plz pm me ๐Ÿ˜Š

P.S: finally ballu n tuwadi gal sunnli jala dala pritampura nu ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: wuFi

Wow !! Diz is amazing yawr ๐Ÿ‘
Uff ballu in AYM avatar
and da dialogues was superb ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ... cont soon n plz pm me ๐Ÿ˜Š

P.S: finally ballu n tuwadi gal sunnli jala dala pritampura nu ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿ˜†


real wale ne to sunni nhi to isse to sunni hi padegi na๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: overactor



real wale ne to sunni nhi to isse to sunni hi padegi na๐Ÿ˜ƒ



Hawn ye sahi hy ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: wuFi

Wow !! Diz is amazing yawr ๐Ÿ‘
Uff ballu in AYM avatar
and da dialogues was superb ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ... cont soon n plz pm me ๐Ÿ˜Š

P.S: finally ballu n tuwadi gal sunnli jala dala pritampura nu ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿ˜†


I wonder if he doesn't become a surpanch in the show...wht is he gonna do!!๐Ÿคข
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: DazzilerDizzy


I wonder if he doesn't become a surpanch in the show...wht is he gonna do!!๐Ÿคข

burn the pind as he's doing it here๐Ÿ˜ก
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hai hai...inna gussa?!!! such intensity,...damn bud...I love it!!!

He's burning it all down...LOL.

This is even better than I had imagined...cannot wait for the update...hurry up!!!

some of my favourite bits:

The fact that he let go when she cried...you've made him intense as heck, but not evil...thank you๐Ÿ˜Š...oh and this part:


"wada aya surpanch...huh!..tujhe to sb se pehle maza
chakaonga me.."๐Ÿคฃ




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