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tellygeek

@tellygeek

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Thank you once again Aparnauma.

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ButterflyOnRose

@ButterflyOnRose

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Can't stop myself from the participating in the conversation of JaGan serial story that started here 😆

@tellygeek you and me share some very similar thoughts I was a pretty big fan of JaAn and their separation hit me at my heart but i know it was necessary to separate them to show child marriage is wrong and i heartly accept that but in my view it was very poorly handled by cvs Jagya's character assassination was not needed to show ill effects of child marriage but what was needed was to prove adults were wrong but honestly till now cvs are trying to force down in viewers throats it was Jagya who was wrong in leaving a great partner like Anandi The constant comparisons of Ganga with Anandi are irritating Why Jagya should be given a wife who is carbon copy of his Balika Vadhu and needs to be compared constantly with her ? Cvs made him even guilty of the fact he didnt gave Anandi right to be a mother ? Is this some joke ? How much old were they at that time ? Certainly they were too young to become parents so why he was wrong? There are many questions like this which cvs cannot answer

The bhabhoot drama was something completely out of Jagya's character Never expected from him He was very hurt at Bhago's death so how he did that and his negative track i think i don't need to write how much bashing cvs got for it and they have to drop the track immediately because that was sheer piece of nonsense

coming to JaGan its unfortunate their story was rushed , butchered time to time to make story for Anandi and Sanchi through it Anandi's involvement in the story was unnecessary from the time of her forcing Jagya agree to marry something not expected from Anandi to Jagya asking Anandi find bride for me ..nonsense Anandi's character herself was tossed around in cvs attempt for making things complicated for her Her hiding truths of Sanchi and advocating her to her lack of communication with Jagya and Singhs about her views regarding SaJa marriage

Singhs characters were butchered , really hated their acts in all this

Story would have been great if instead of Anandi DS after seeing blood filled maang would have repented for her mistakes towards Jagya that spoiled his life and made it possible for JaGan to unite and i believe that was the story initially planned therefore out of all people only DS saw that khoon bhari maang even before Ganga herself but story was changed later

More than Jagya i would loved to see Ganga confessing her love first with encouragement from DS aware of the fact he too has same feelings for her but burying inside with a fear of already failing in two relationships He might not be able to be her right life partner This is something which was biggest fear in him and would only be removed by the woman who loves him and wants to share her life with him

but sad sad sad cvs kept changing the story The story is not consistent The scenes are cut short and rushed Many important scenes missing . Ganga's story is poorly handled Her story is mismatching from what she told and what kaka told Jagya More detailing is given to Sanchi's even eating samosas rather than JaGan

i know bygones are bygones but cannot forgive cvs for disappointing viewers with all the mess they did

Edited by sidra08 - 12 years ago

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Neha

@A-Musing-Me

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Supremely beautiful n exquisitely well written..thanks for this piece..

Ganga jagya.. a couple destined to come together since they completed each other n every possible way.. u have done more than justice to their bond. I loved them here.. n I loved the way u presented jagya.. the kind I always wanted on the show since I firmly believed he deserved it n not the unnecessary character assassination he got for trps..

Anyway u r a writer with an amazing eye on emotions n details.. thanks..

Neha..

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Payali09

@Payali09

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

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Simply beautiful! This captured my attention the instant I read it during the OS contest. It made me so happy to see such a wonderfully written story about a couple who I feel and know have been shortchanged by the CVs.

I, along with many people, had a lot of hopes when Ganga was introduced in the show. Her entry, her sufferings and her courage were such a great beginning. The highlight being that late night conversation where Jagya was finally able to share his burden with someone who listened with an open heart and mind. You captured that feeling so well in your story; that connection, that understanding and sharing of past shadows. But the best part was that your story showed them moving past those shadows and walking towards their bright future together.

So thank you again. For giving us what we all were waiting for a long time.

Please do continue with your writings. Looking forward to more great work 👍🏼

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tellygeek

@tellygeek

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Thank you Sneha and Payali for your appreciation. I am planning to write another one on JaGan soon.

Sidra - Strongly agree with you on this point, there were enough hints for Dadisa to understand that Jagya and Ganga are made for each other, she could have been instrumental in uniting them while the others kept supporting Sanchi.

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seetha74

@seetha74

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Really I appreciate your writing skills ! I noticed this prior to this competition...when you were just 15 posts old !

Yes ...she must be a writer !Then my face lit up with impish glee !

Capturing an event through descriptive writing involves paying close attention to the details !

Here you succeeded excellently ! In both stories you displayed this descriptive style !

Love it ...really love it !

By using all your imagination in such a way that a vivid image is formed in the readers mind , and you succeeded in this aspect also !

In Jagan'sstory ...hmn...i am extremely happy !Your well defined Jagya is a pleasure to watch while he was expressing his past life...and esp..his relation with Anandi...i consider it as a brave and well needed aspect ! Without defining his relation with Anandi he cannot proceed any further

In his any future relationship !He has to clarify ...and your Jagya did it in a great way .!Hats off to you dear !

So many people criticised and bashed me on this point !But even to day i am a little bit adamant to defend my point !---that Anandi is his weakness and as well as his strength and an important part in his life and her presence and guidance will always be there through out their lives ...and the beautiful part is Ganga wholeheartedly accepted this fact and respected his feelings ! By depicting this point simply you won many hearts !

Once again Congratulations and best wishes to you !