OS:JaGan - You are My Freedom

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ita awesome...i loved it...and voted for the same...u r one of the best writers in this forum...do write more..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome.. Did not read it before.. Thanks for posting here..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tellygeek this is one of the best OS's on JaGan i have read
You are a wonderful writer Hopefully you will write more on JaGan too in future It will be treat for us readers😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you HemaG, Libra and Sidra for your kind words. I do intend to write more on Jagya, I like this character very much alongside Dadisa and Anandi.


Thanks Hina, Seetha and Santhiyaa_J for your quiet acknowledgement.

Edited by tellygeek - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@tellygeek,this is an awesome writing,u sketched the character as well as story so well,u broght it so beautifully where cvs failed...goodjob👏please write more on Jagya.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Andriaa

@tellygeek,this is an awesome writing,u sketched the character as well as story so well,u broght it so beautifully where cvs failed...goodjob👏please write more on Jagya.😊



Thank you Andriaa.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tellygeek, I really loved your story.
I wish CVs had portrayed something like this which would have suited both their characters very well, instead of bringing that stupid SaJa triangle.

This is how I had imagined that after completing her studies and divorce from RAT, G would one day realise that she is in love with J but yet it would be J to propose first with a nice confession that touches hearts.

I wanted to see depth and emotions in J-G love story before they married. And of course marriage with everyone's consent at the very first time.

But CVs kind of ruined it, rushed it through, faltu ka court-case etc etc. and made J to be a culprit once again by tossing him between two women.

Anyways bygones are bygones. Your's is a lovely plot and very realistic when it comes to J-G characteristics.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Missesha - Thank you for your lovely comments. As per me, this communication was the missing piece in JaGan union.

Now that you have mentioned it, I want to add that I was a die hard Anandi-Jagya admirer, but the director decided to separate them, obviously to portray the ill-effects of child marriage. But Jagya's character assassination was something I didn't expect ! that Babhoot incident during Bhago's funeral was Jagya's lowest point where he showed that has become totally insensitive to Anandi's pain !

The Amnesia story was also done to make us appreciate this new man in Anandi's life ! Otherwise did she really need another man in her life ?

As you mentioned, bygones are bygones, am happy that Anandi found her match in Shiv and Jagya is happy with Ganga.

Edited by tellygeek - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am not into reading OSes but the title of your OS grabbed me.
This was how I wanted to see Jagya and Ganga story in BV.

I was way too irritated and disappointed with the way Jagya Ganga relationship was shown in the show.

Reading your story made up for the disappointment with the show.I could actually picture it in front of my eyes.


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