Love and Sacrifice~a dedication~MY DREAM/ PG6/MAR 8TH

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Hello all my friend and readers I am happy to share with you all I won poetry constant

All thanks to you gals and I love to give credits to one girl here

My charmer cherish she is the one who actually informed me about this constant I am not sure to participate or not. As I haven't did anything of that sort up to now she literally pushed me to write this poem. Thank u soo much charmer.


    Love and Sacrifice.



Love - the word speaks of bliss

Love - the word carry of dreams

Love - the word every human crave of

Love - the word awakens passionate desire

These are the words I have been listening

When I came to know the word called love

I didn't thought ones I could ever cherish

This blissful feeling in my life until I met you

Making me drown in carpet of passionate dreams

Making me to fly over clouds with your ones smile

Making me dance on our passion rhythm with

Your one warm embrace

You're the most beautiful girl I met till date

Confided with innocent fragrance

I felt like dream when you accepted my love


It is indeed a dream now as I lost my love

I lost my life



I am nothing today



You can proudly say it was sacrifice

But is it??

Answer my love why your voiced tamed out today

It was my heart bleeding with your sacrifice

You crushed my dreams with your sacrifice

My tears dried long back these are pearls of your eyes

All will say another name of love is sacrifice

But who will do that when it comes a question of them

You did that as a proof of our love as honor

I cont even curse you nor my fate as you are living in me

Your every breathe is making me feel alive

I am proud of you my love I can scream out saying


You are my love who is living in my heart

Who sacrificed her love



My gift as winner




Hope you all like this read below to know about this story and my friend



You know girls why I opted only Love and sacrifice because my friend chosen her family instead of her love. She is my best friend at my graduation but she left me now.

On feb 14th she got married to another guy and she didn't even told me that. I don't know why if she is suffering like that she can at least tell me pooji I am alone. I know she is alone at that time even called her left message for her on FB. After doing all those I got to know she left me because I know her love story. The worst part I am not her friend the realization I got very very late.

I am literally sad when I written this poem and now here I am starting their love story as gift for her. I really don't have anything to say here it's her life and I do support her as she given importance to her parents.

Felling proud of my friend now. But it pained my heart when my other friend called me saying " so when u are coming to marriage?" as they know I am her friend.

She doesn't even share her pain with me when she is suffering like that. I don't know she is happy or not but I pray to god to keep my friend safe and happy life long.

I am clueless will she talk to me like we do in collage days when we meet again. I just hope everything will be fine.

I know that guy also he is truly genuine person I supported there love also. I am scared to even call him now. You know gals what he said when I informed about my friend's marriage

"Will she be able to happy by this sacrifice?"

I am silent I don't know what to answer for his question. You can get how much he loved her. If he want can take her away with him but they didn't did that. So this story is dedication to my friend. The every word of this prologue the poem is for her.

I know there are many cases like this in this world but I won the poetry constant which I have written feeling there love their feelings. So a token for my friend for my success in from of this story.

I love you deepu "yes my friend name is deepu only"

This is for you (she is not in IF gals she don't even know about this world)


special thanks to nadu and also meethi

Praff and fiaza here is her story in my words



Sparkle

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Downhill thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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simply superb
loved it😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really touching poem cutie after reading this i can feel their pain hope both of them got happiness in their life god bless them and u r the best 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome poem.Pooju baby...
So beautifully written...
Every line is depcting emotions...
i'll pray 4 both's happiness...
May both get all the hapiness of this world
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats Poo for winning the poem competition in that segment
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😭😭😭😭amazing emotion poem & story..i feel very very sad for three of u..i really dnt know why some parent fail to understand and trust their children..congrats yaar..u are truly a great fren..
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Amazing poem..congrats for new story.. Will wait for it..
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Congrats for the New Story👏👏Its really interesting⭐️⭐️😛Beautiful Poem😳Waiting for the update dear
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Feeling so sorry for your friend and her love Honey, Hope she will feel the love once again in her new found life and live happily and so her love... and this is an nice theme for your FF honey, will be waiting...

And Congrats honey..,,, you deserved that victory, my honey is so talented... i am so happy for you... keeping rocking honey...

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