taarey FF--BROKEN PATH - Page 25

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Posted: 11 years ago
i really loved ur story
plz contii it
& i really don't care whether d3 is there or not
i only care about taarey
so plz contii it & update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey dear dnt u think ki we r nt connected to ff as its differnt we all r connected as itis diff nly n we dnt bother ifit is nt relatrd to clg life or nt we wnt taarey so plz plz plz plz continue dear...kp smiling
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Posted: 11 years ago
even if its nt related wt d3 that s nt at al a prob
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome updt
loved taarey nok - jhok
eagerly waiting for nxt chapter
nd i loved ur story
so pls keep writing

Edited by Sona_loveVD - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
no not at all i m loving each nd every aspect of the story nd the characterization!!
doing well with the story reallt intresting storyline
do continue!!
nd yeah update very soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
arre .. aisa kch nahi h yr .. 😃
we taarey fans dont want anything except taarey ..! 😃

and rahi baat D3 ki toh konsa show h vo ..? 😆 😉

n pls dont discontinue ur story ..!

update soon .. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

OHHH MY GOHDDD...
omg.. omg...omg...omg...
okay enough of this shouting sessions..
m just speechless..overwhelmed...n very very happy
Actually i was getting only few like and some comments like "good" "awsome update" etc..toh i thought that u might be not liking it due to its NON-CONNECTION with d3..

thanks to all for their suggestion to continue this ff...i have never imagined that u people are liking it to that extant...

i mean...
i don't know wat to say...
BOW DOWN...
so don't want to bore you anymore...
enjoy the update..
once again thanks to alll👏👏👏👏





BROKEN PATH
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WILL THEY EVER MEET??



CHAPTER 9
Everyone gathered around Rey to congratulate him for his performance but Rey's eyes were busy in searching his MISS SPOTLIGHT cum CARELESS WEIRDO.

His ears were longing to hear his praises from her mouth. "kahan ho tum Miss Spotlight...?? Won't you come to congratulate me..??"

Finally his eyeballs found her.. "there you are..." But then he noticed the sadness in his eyes..

Her eyes were reflecting that how much hurt she is... her eyes were full of unsheded tears.


"What's wrong with her.. why is she upset...Not only upset she is hurt too??? kahin vo room vaali baat par toh nahi...Yeah I am sure vahi hoga...Shit Rey!!!!!!!!..what you have done...
Koi nahi miss SPOTLIGHT cum careless weirdo...agar tum meri vajah se upset ho toh it's my duty to bring your smile back to your charming face..." Rey mentally promised himself.

"Hey DJ...listen dude.. play this song but not now.. exactly after 10 minute." Rey told the DJ and smiled. "PERFECT...now you see taani.. I will make you smile."


"Taani yahan akele kyu khardi ho??" Janki came to taani.
" Ma'm.. I am not feeling well.. Can I leave.. please..."
"Kya hua taani...tabiyat toh thik hai na.. should I call doctor??"
"No ma'm.. I am just tired..rest krungi toh I will feel better.."
"OKAY taani.. tum jao... and don't need to come office tomorrow.. ghar par hi rest karna.."
"THANK YOU ma'm.. good-night..."

Taani turned to leave but suddenly someone caught her wrist and pulled her with a jerk. Taani lost her balance and collided at someone's built torso. Taani looked up to see the person who pulled her and she was shocked beyond limits.. He was REY...REYANSH SINGHANIA... the same person who troubled her few hours ago in the antara di's room and his DANCE PERFORMANCE.. which made her recall all those memories which she had buried deep inside in her heart..
"what is he up to..??" Taani tried to free herself.


JUST then music started...
Pehli nazar me kaisa jaadu kar diya... REY held taani's right hand..
Tera bann baitha hai mera jiya... he twirled her around and made her come to him...

Rey was looking towards taani..

Everyone gathered around them in a circle.

Jaane kya hoga..kya hoga kya ptaa...Rey again twirled her into Circle.. Does some contemporary steps


Iss pal ko mill k aa jeele jara... Rey then holds her waist and slides her left and right of him.

Taani was shocked beyond limits..Her body was there but uska mind..uska dil..kuch bhi toh nahi tha vahan par.. Her sense of organs has stopped functioning from the point when Rey performed first dance move with HER...


She was just like a LIFELESS BODY who was twirling along with rey at the each move. It was rey only who made her dancing with him.. Taani was not even moving from her OWN.


Mai hu yahan..tu hai yahan.. meri baahon me aa..aaa bhi jaa.
. Rey again twirls taani and does a step which made them face each other.

Ooo jaane jaa..donooo jahan..meri baahon me aaa..bhool ja.
. Rey looked intensely in Taani's eyes and put some lock of hairs behinds her ear...
There was complete silence for few seconds...


Jahan ek taraf Rey was completely lost in Taani's angelic face..her beauty..her charm.. He just wanted to stop the time at this moment for forever.
Vahi dusri taraf Taani was completely lost in her world... The world which had many beautiful and harsh memories.. the time which she never wanted to recall..the memories which she had buried deep inside her soul..

EMOTIONLESS is the perfect word to describe her current situation..


BABY I LOVE YOU...
Rey turns her by her waist.
BABY I LOVE YOU...I LOVE YOU SOO..
BABY I LOVE YOUUU..


At last Rey holding her waist and shoulder turning taani around in a circle which ends up as taani is on rey's arm and Rey holding her by waist.




Everyone applauded their performance and gives them a huge round of applause, which bring taani back to real world.


" LEAVE ME.." Taani said in low yet very stern and angry tone..
"Excuse me.." Rey smirked at her tone.
"mene kaha..chhoro mujhe.. NOW.." Taani again in low voice.
Rey noticed the seriousness in her voice and made her stand properly.


"WOW.. Rey..great performance.."
"yeah this was better than your solo performance.."
"Oye kaddu...oops sorry MY ROCKSTAR.. great performance bhai.. and you made taani to dance.. taani you too were... TAANI..where is she???" Antara said.
Rey noticed that taani was not present there.. "Ye kahan gayi..abhi toh yahin par thi.." he turned to the left and saw taani was leaving from exit door.


"TAANI... taani.. oye miss careless weirdo..hello.. I am talking to you.." Rey shouted and ran behind taani
Meanwhile Taani reached lawn area and was leading towards the main door.
"TAANI...mai tumse hi baat kar raha hu." Rey finally caught her wrist and made her stop. "tumhe sunaayi nahi de raha..and where the hell are you going..listen..."
"HOW DARE YOU..." Taani shouted in top voice and jerked his hand.

Rey was shocked beyond limits. He haven't expected taani to behave like this. He was shocked on seeing taani in that situation...


HURT...
DEVASTED...
SHATTERED...
And beyond that her eyes were reflecting anger which was only for HIM.

"HOW DARE YOU...how dare you to touch me again Mr. REYANSH SINGHANIA.. How dare you to make me dance with you...HOW dare you..." Taani poured her all her anger to him.
"Taani...what's wrong..."Rey tried to calm her down.
"Samjhte kya ho aap apne aap ko??... Haan... what the hell do you think of yourself.. Jo mann me aaya vahi karoge..pahle bina permission ke room me aana and then bina mujse puche vo dance...did you took my permission before that DANCE.. did you even asked me once.. Did you even asked whether I want to do that or not."

"TAANI.. it was just a dance.. what's the big deal in it." Rey's anger was too rising.

"IT IS mr. Reyansh singhania...It is a bloody big deal for me..."

"Taani.. It was just a dance..or tumhe dance se itni problem kyu hai.." Rey holds her by her shoulders and asked.. "WHY TAANI..."


"Because I HATE IT... I HATE DANCE...suna aapne.. I hate dance..."



Edited by kirti.virman - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg it was am amazing update
poor rey he did a mistake again
& end part of this update
was very emotional
but y taani hates dance at that
extent
plz plz plz plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...loved it
Rey want to hear his praise from taani
but taani hates dance
loved it how he try to bring smile on her face
Taarey dance was so good
Cant wait to know about taanis past
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome updt
enjoyed reading it
rey trying to bring the smile on taani face
wow taani anger
loved it
curious to know why taani hate dance
updt soon
eagerly waiting

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