'Murder or Suicide?'- Story Posted

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi, everyone..i m heartfully thankful to u all for the dedicated and true support for increasing my creativity in previous story..
I m just back home from hostel yesterday and i m going to present my 15 minutes creativity here..
I m extremerly sorry if i m wrong...and i hope u will provide me your comment, advice and suggestions..
This story is too short..but anyway i m posting...

Promo, second post..
Story, third post

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Promo:
Dr. Salunke: Poison was taken through water and this poison does no reaction when physically observe because this poison act slowly. He added finger print belong to grish..

Kya he ye poison ka raaz, janne ke liye wait kijiye agle post ka..
Edited by binod.abhijeet - 11 years ago
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Suicide or Murder? Short Story

SCENE 1 - Crime Scene

Abhijeet sir, Daya sir, Sachin and Freddy are on the murder place. They notice that a man was killed by hanging on the fan with the support of rope.

Abhijeet sir: bring body down the floor.

On examining is done of the parts it is found that neck has turned into shade of blue colour due to hang.

Sachin: Aisa lagta he ki yeh admi ka khoon nai par atma hatya hai.

Abhijeet sir: Ho bhi sakta he aur nai bhi.

At order of Abhijeet sir, body is sent to forensic lab by Sachin and some traces of finger print are taken by Freddy. When examined by Sachin, he finds that no neighbour has seen anyone coming in house around 1 week time. Neighbour also adds that the body belong to Mr. Grish and he lives alone there.

SCENE 2 - Forensic lab

Abhijeet sir appreciate saying that Dr. Tarika does everything perfectly but Dr. Salunke changes the environment of lab saying that Grish was killed by poison but not by hanging on the fan.

Dr. Salunke: Poison was taken through water and this poison does no reaction when physically observe because this poison act slowly.

ACP sir wonders how it is possible and Dr. Salunke says everything about the poison and how he died. He also adds that the finger print belong to Grish.

SCENE 3 - CID Bureau

ACP sir and abhijeet sir are discussing about the case. Abhijeet sir wonders how culprit has got information about this poison.

Acp sir: Ha abhijeet me bhi hohi soch raha hon.

Abhijeet sir asked Nikhil to find all information about poison and after sometime Nikhil comes back with all the information.

Nikhil: This poison is not available in India but is only available in one country, UK, London to be specific, out of the entire world. And only there are two shops in London which sell this poison.

When Abhijeet sir calls those shops in London, he finds out that these shops exported only 2 bottle of poison to India and the importer was from Delhi.

Abhijeet sir to acp sir: Hum log aj he Delhi jayange.

Acp sir: haan... Abhijeet all the best.

SCENE 4 - Delhi

Senior ins. Abhijeet, Daya, Rajat, Sachin and Purvi are in Delhi. According to address they reach at a building. They knock the door but no one opens it.

Abhijeet sir: Daya darwaza tordo.

After Daya breaks the door, they go inside.

Abhijeet sir: Achi tarah se talashi lelo.

Ins. Daya found another bottle of poison and called ins. Abhijeet.

Abhijeet sir : han Daya? Oh my God... poison?

Rajat: Es sabke ke piche kaun ho sakta hai?

Ins. Daya: ek bar miljay uska yeh hal karunga ki peher chalaneke layak nai chodunga.

(After 5 minutes)

Someone is coming and without talking Ins. Daya provide a nice slap.

Ins. Abhijeet: jo bhi pata hai bol hamko time nai hai.

He said that he was involved in this for money. He also said that main kheladi' is someone else. Then cid team goes to a farm house as he said.

SCENE 5 - Farm House

Shooting takes place at farm house. Cid team wins the shoot and on chase by Ins. Daya a man named Rakesh is slapped and he starts to share all the information about the incident and how he murdered Grish.

Abhijeet sir: Tume to phasi hi hogi phasi.:-@

Rakesh: Huuu..;-(

Abhijeet sir: Aj ham delhi ghumenge kue sablog tayar hain?;-)

Others: Haan..:-:-D

Poison description:
The part of MSG that negatively affects the human body is the "glutamate", not
sodium. The breakdown of MSG typically consists of 78% glutamate, 12% sodium, and about 10% water. Any glutamate added to a processed food is not and cannot be considered naturally occurring. Our normal digestive process slowly breaks down this natural or "bound" glutamic acid and it is then delivered to glutamate receptors in our body and brain. Broken down this way, it is harmless.

In a factory, however, the bound glutamic acid in certain foods (corn, molasses, wheat) is broken down or made "free" by various processes and refined to a white crystal that resembles sugar. Since free glutamate can be a component part of certain food additives, such as autolyzed yeast or hydrolyzed protein, it is essentially unregulated when it comes to labelling standards. This allows it to go into food unlabeled as MSG. A label may say "yeast extract", "calcium caseinate", or "beef flavoring", but the product still contains varying amounts of "free" glutamic acid. This makes it very difficult for consumers who are trying to avoid it. It is also very dangerous for those who suffer severe reactions to it. Many people who are very sensitive to MSG experience respiratory, neurological, muscular, skin, urological and even cardiac symptoms.

The End

So what you do all think?

Edited by binod.abhijeet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice...waiting for the story! 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Waiting for that POISON KA RAAZ, BINOD...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Simple; yet mysterious😆😃
Waiting for your story😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: saman0

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Simple; yet mysterious😆😃</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Waiting for your story😊</font>


might not be so mysterious but just simple...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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All the best binod...waiting :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry I didn't get it...what is 15 minutes creativity? The promo? 😕
I thought it was a story. 😆
Anyway...promo sounds good. please write it soon. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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New story! Will read it next week. 😊

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