Swaron FF: Love or Freedom #2 *thrd 3 link posted* - Page 69

Originally posted by: swarontruelove

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I totaly loved the update. Sam's POV was sooo well explained!!!!!!!!!!! it was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i mean i could picture the whole thing, his surprise seeing swayam and how did it turn to anger instantly, how his anger got so overpowered that instead of soothing sharon he thought hitting swayam was important. how sharon got hurt with every hit swayam got and how swayam didnt hit bcoz he was giving himself punishment through sam's hitting nd beating for hurting sharon, his dear bff. i loved sharons pulling sam away frm swayam... it showed how much she loved him, how much she cared for her love, swayam. sam's nd sharon's convo was painful but one thng's sure sam so does love his frnd nd care abt her. he was sooo hurt of his best frnd shouting at him nd telling him to get the hell out of there, u so well explained it!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved the pain put in words by u!!!!!!! nd of course sharon's guilt.nd i loved how sharon took care of swayam, gave first aid nd bandaged him. the part with sharon's pov was beautifully written putting in words her guilt, vulnerability for loving swayam and so not meeting his eyes and her love for him. i loved that swayam didnt take it all negatively nd that was my biggest worry in the previous chapter. nd oh god! y did u end it there?? i so wanted to hear the next day's covo b/w them but oh well not everything happens as u want...so will be eagerly waiting for the update!!!!!!!!!!!! do update soon!!!! dying to read abt swaron's convo on this nd how sharon apologises to sam!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: kriti094

D updt was nyc
i m feeling sad for all d 3 swayam , sharon n sam
dey all r suffering
i just hope sharon n sam's friendship gets back to normal soon
updt soon

Originally posted by: Bista-anzana

Lykd sam's POV
.. the way you potrayed sam's feelings ws vry nyc.
he is concerned about sharon
sharon understandingd
why he was behaving weirdly
lubd sharon n sma bond..
& the best part was swayam heard everything
n he knows wat sharon feels for him
w8ing to noe wot will happen nxt..

Originally posted by: rinku90

It was a short but a nice update😊

liked the way u explained sam's pov.

it showed the bond that sam and sharon shared

loved sharon's pov .it showed how well she knows swayam and how much she loves him,it also shows how much she cares and love sam as a friend.her emotions were portrait amazingly.

waiting for swayam's pov regarding everything that happened.

now that he knows that sharon loves him how would he react to it and how will all that happened will affect swaron.

Waiting eagerly for ur next update.😃

Originally posted by: sweetdivya

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nice update dear...it was short but i loved it..

both d pov nicely describe..

gud to see his concern for sharon..

and m happy that swayam finally came to know that sharon loves him...

waiting for next update now.. 😊

Originally posted by: --Suhani--

OH 😲

She told him to get out of her life o.O

WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????????????????????

Something must have happened.

He fought with swayam!??

or did he love Sharon!?

orrr IDK

Going to read the update SOON!!!

Originally posted by: prateek.007

Hey Buddy,Finally i am here and done with the read..Its so so amazing read with lots of twits and tales,i had enjoyed..So moving on with chapter wise..

thanks buddy finally u got the time to read 😊

Chapter 17
First of all i am glad to see colorfull update with song lyrics..Loved the way u made swayam to open up with sharon,to shares his thoughts n views like their childhood days..As a reader i like this swayam who finally attempt a chance to renewed his relationship with her..Dream sequence was really beautifull..It was perfectly written in case of sharon to describing her love and desires for swayam..But unfortunately kiss was not possible..But i will be waiting for their Kiss..In short,Awesome update Buddy

i m glad u found it colorful

i m glad u liked the dream sequence

Chapter 18
Well it was damm emotional update containg all the possible spices of interesting story..I love ur idea of giving individual pov's..It was beautifully scene u had described,i like SwaRon convo regarding anniversery..I found swayam as confused guy there.dont know why..Anyways Finally we got SwaRon kiss..Whao.I was really expecting this as surroundings was best for it...what a beautifull detail description there..And it was so nice to read when swayam adds sharon photo to the collage..A small family has been renewed..Great done buddy..
thanks buddy

i m glad u liked the idea of different povs

n the kiss n collage part

Chapter 19
Amazing update buddy,I really notice that u are so amazing update by update..Ur writing have such talent to make ur reader awestruck..Here u showed friendly duo of sharon and sam..It was beautifully potrayed..Loved the possesiveness of swayam..Finally dude is jealous to seeing her so close to sam..I am glad ki swayam has taken a step towards sharon to get her back in his life again..Then complete evening spent by them was beautifully described,nice outfits..Now i am really shocked here that swayam's mom asked him to marry sharon..

thank u buddy for the praise

i m glad u like possessive swayam

lol everyone was shocked 😆

Chapter 20
Now the condition changed here and i love that..I am glad to see such caring side of swayam for his mother..It was really beautifull monolouge of swayam u had described..it was perfectly penned down in case of swayam as a guy who was angry young man before and suddenly so changed...BM and sharon convo was awesome indeed,i really loved their Duo,their understanding,their bonding...Again i loved the convo of sam and sharon..He was so caring for his BFF..

i m glad u liked this side of him

n BM and sharon's convo

yup he is caring

Chapter 21
Well buddy,now u know how to grab attention of ur readers..and in this update u did so well..Damm emotional update for me..I just loved the way u potrayed sam's feeling,His friendly love for sharon,He was so concerned for her and in between he punished swayam..Swayam was acting so weirdly and it also confusing for me but after reading sharon part,i got it completely,He was punishing himself and indirectly he was hurting sharon..Now this is called True Love..The whole scene u have desrcibed so well..It was perfectly penned regarding anger,hurt,love and pain..I was expecting swayam reaction there but after getting ending part where swayam tells he will come back and clear everything make me more expectant..I am excitedly expecting some amazing twist above..

lol yeah buddy i guess i do know 😆

yup he punished swayam for his deeds

n lol yeah sharon cleared the confusion

well yeah i will show swayam pov on everything happened

n what will happen in future

Ohk finally done..!!
I must say,all the updates are pretty awesome..I enjoyed a great read..Thanx for ur all PM's and sorry for the late,I know buddy how it feels when reader didnt comment in timing constraint and ignored PM..So sorry once again..U are doing great so keep it up and Do update soon..
thanks once again buddy

n u r welcome n its ok

will update soono



Prateek