Swaron FF: Love or Freedom #2 *thrd 3 link posted*

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Rishabh Narula

@swaron1107

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Posted: 11 years ago

#691

Great update... Swayam's pov and mindset was very well depicted. It was really needed as the story is about him. I really like this Swayam, smart and cool.

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#692

My sissy dearest firstly I'm happy you took the strong decision to not discontinue this FF I'm not saying this because I'm greedy for your updates or somethings coz main tujhse summary jaan sakti hoon and I know you won't refuse your kashi that much but it takes a herculean effort on the part of a writer to write for a small amount of readers warna people normlly discontinue their works when they find a reduction in the number of likes and comments so I'd say commendable effort my sister I love for that..🤗.
Now coming to the update I liked this update very much it was a smart and sensible update where we got to see the mature side of Swayam yet again by you.. The way you described his internal battle where one side he worries about Ganga and Sharon the other side he worries for his Mother's health.. He is not looking for his happiness now he wants his close one's to be happy and I appreciated that fact very very much..👍🏼.
It was very nice to know what was Swayam's POV for the entire fiasco at Sharon's place and I look forward to reading the next update and Sharon and Swayam's confrontation..😃. Try to update soon angel..
Love,
Kashi..🤗.

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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#693

aswom update ...

but ye thoda peechle jaisa tha...

i understand swayam pov is imp...

plzz update soon...

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#694

i m very happy tat you gave swayam's pov

it was a much needed chapter

i m feeling bad tat you will up so soon

i followed it religiously

as a writer you are growing

sharing a rapturous love of words

and a lyrical elegance that makes every single

sentence silly with pleasure

coming to ur ff

swayam pov was beautifully penned

his confusion his guilt watever he felt for

ganga n sharon was very clearly written

tis update gave me clarity

as to wat swayam is really going thru

all in all a very well formed pleasing update

looking forward to ur updates 🤗

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#695

Awesome update :)

I loved how you showed Swayam's POV and how much he cares about his mums health

The way you showed how he felt when he was at the beach and also at Sharon's house was beautiful :)

I'm happy that he cares about Sharon's friendship and her happiness and knows that she wouldn't be happy of she lost one of her best friends

It's ok we understand, I'm happy as long as you don't discontinue so take your time :)

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zk456789

@zk456789

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#696

Awesome update
Happy while reading swayam pov
Waiting for next chapter
Thanks for the pm
Do update soon

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#697

Nice update..

you described swayam's POV beautifully...👏

continue soon...

thanks for the PM

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#698

beautiful!!
swayam's pov was the best part!!
awesome chappy!!

thanks for the pm.

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rinku90

@rinku90

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#699

Awesome update😊

swayam's pov was needed in this situation after what happened in last chapter.swayam as a character has grown so much from the start can be clearly seen in this chapter.He has matured so much.loved swayam's pov,his care for his mother,his guilt regarding the incident with ganga,his decision to come clean to sharon and then shock and guilt on knowing that sharon loves him and he is the reason for her heartbreak,everything was described so beautifully by you.

Though i am disappointed then the story didn't moved forward and ended on the same note as the previous chapter none the less i understand that swayam's pov was needed.

I hope the u don't discontinue this FF as i love it.

Waiting for the next chapter.

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#700

RES

UNRES

Firstly I'm really sorry I couldn't comment on the previous update as I was fit health wise

So here is the comment for both the updates 😃

Part 21

Oh God! 😲

Sam's anger toward Swayam was somewhere justified being a best friend but kya kare yeh dil hai ke maanta hi nahi 😛

Swayam ko koi maare toh ghussa aa hi jaata hai

The Sharon's hurtful words to Sam were.. Ouch!!!

Ghusse main dimag kabhi saath nahi deta

Sam must be hell hurt but at the same time I loved Sharon's reaction in the sense the things that she said about Swayam

She REALLY REALLY REALLY loved him 😳

Part 22

Swayam's POV was surely much needed here

And it was brilliantly penned down 👏

Swayam's guilt and the punishment to himself left an impact on me for sure

And I'm really happy that he was sure to tell Sharon everything about his past

But when will he realise ke yeh BFF ka care nahi usse jyada hai

The glimpses of a possessive and protective Swayam were fun to read 😃

No doubt that Swayam understood Sharon but he should very soon even understand his feelings

As I always say you and an A-M-A-Z-I-N-G writer

The way you capture each scene with the feelings and emotions behind it impresses me the most

Not to forget the flow of your story keeps the readers glued to your write ups

And I also respect your decision about the FF's future

Would eagerly wait for the upcoming updates

P.S Thanks for the PM 😃

Edited by Tan.vish.K - 11 years ago

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