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Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#671

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli
it was short but substantial
as a writer you definitely know how to catch the interest of ur readers
bohot sahi tym phe chapter ko end karti ho
i liked the way you potrayed sam's feelings
as a true frn he was concerned about sharon
n sharon knowing swayam so well she understood
why he was behaving weirdly
i loved the way you showed sam - sharon bond thr
but the best part was tat swayam had heard everything
n he knows wat sharon feels for him
eithr its gonna be awkward for the two
or swayam will confess in the end
but i m waiting for swayam's pov
do write more looking forward to ur updates 🤗

thanks dear

i m glad u liked his pov

well lets see where this truth leads swaron to

n will update next part in Swayam's POV 😉

also will update soon

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Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#672

Originally posted by: HR-DMG4life
Nice update :)
I don't really like the way Sam reacted I know he's her best friend but he was too possessive it was kind of like their going hit or something but I hope he doesn't cause any problems for SwaRon
I loved a how you showed Sharon's POV
I really want to know what Swayam was thinking at the moment
Please update soon :)

well u right he was harsh but it was for Sharon

so plz dont b mad at him

as far as swaron is concern he wont come in b/w swaron but will not like swayam for a while cause he hurt sharon no matter if it was unintentionally

i m glad u like sharon's pov

will show his pov as well

will update soon

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Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#673

Originally posted by: zk456789
Amazing update love the way you express sam and Sharon friendship in the whole story
And Sam leave SharonI am happy that swayam take all the things positively
And now waiting for the next chapter and swayam Sharon convo
Thanks for the pm
Do update soon

i m glad u like their bond

n yup swayam took it well

thanks and will update soon

n u r welcome dear

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Lavender_Luna

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#674

very nice update...

and simplify things na

mujhe hoda complicated lag raha hai padne me

i donno y

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Ashu

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Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#675

I just read all the chapters and I love them!!
Love swaron fights!!
Ganga is an interesting character!!
Love sam and sharon's bond!
Hope everything will be okay!!
Please continue soon and pm me!!

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Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#676

Originally posted by: 8085548022
it was nice
i really liked how u have explained sam's pov
and his and sharon's relation
sharon really understands swayam so well
it was great
thanks for the pm

thanks a lot dear

i m glad u liked sam's pov n their bond

n u r welcome

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Posted: 11 years ago

#677

Originally posted by: tareyforever333
I just read all the chapters and I love them!!
Love swaron fights!!
Ganga is an interesting character!!
Love sam and sharon's bond!
Hope everything will be okay!!
Please continue soon and pm me!!

thank u dear

i m glad u liked it

will update tomorrow

n pm as well

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Posted: 11 years ago

#678

Originally posted by: hima_taarey
very nice update...
and simplify things na
mujhe hoda complicated lag raha hai padne me
i donno y

thanks

n would do u mean dear

please pm or scrap me to tell me in detail 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#679

Originally posted by: swaronlove001
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unres

wow its an aswom update loved it. ...

this stry bcms more intresting...

waiting 4 nxtg update...

update soon
sry 4 late rply

thank u dear

will update soon

n its ok

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prateek

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Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#680

Hey Buddy,Finally i am here and done with the read..Its so so amazing read with lots of twits and tales,i had enjoyed..So moving on with chapter wise..

Chapter 17
First of all i am glad to see colorfull update with song lyrics..Loved the way u made swayam to open up with sharon,to shares his thoughts n views like their childhood days..As a reader i like this swayam who finally attempt a chance to renewed his relationship with her..Dream sequence was really beautifull..It was perfectly written in case of sharon to describing her love and desires for swayam..But unfortunately kiss was not possible..But i will be waiting for their Kiss..In short,Awesome update Buddy

Chapter 18
Well it was damm emotional update containg all the possible spices of interesting story..I love ur idea of giving individual pov's..It was beautifully scene u had described,i like SwaRon convo regarding anniversery..I found swayam as confused guy there.dont know why..Anyways Finally we got SwaRon kiss..Whao.I was really expecting this as surroundings was best for it...what a beautifull detail description there..And it was so nice to read when swayam adds sharon photo to the collage..A small family has been renewed..Great done buddy..

Chapter 19
Amazing update buddy,I really notice that u are so amazing update by update..Ur writing have such talent to make ur reader awestruck..Here u showed friendly duo of sharon and sam..It was beautifully potrayed..Loved the possesiveness of swayam..Finally dude is jealous to seeing her so close to sam..I am glad ki swayam has taken a step towards sharon to get her back in his life again..Then complete evening spent by them was beautifully described,nice outfits..Now i am really shocked here that swayam's mom asked him to marry sharon..

Chapter 20
Now the condition changed here and i love that..I am glad to see such caring side of swayam for his mother..It was really beautifull monolouge of swayam u had described..it was perfectly penned down in case of swayam as a guy who was angry young man before and suddenly so changed...BM and sharon convo was awesome indeed,i really loved their Duo,their understanding,their bonding...Again i loved the convo of sam and sharon..He was so caring for his BFF..

Chapter 21
Well buddy,now u know how to grab attention of ur readers..and in this update u did so well..Damm emotional update for me..I just loved the way u potrayed sam's feeling,His friendly love for sharon,He was so concerned for her and in between he punished swayam..Swayam was acting so weirdly and it also confusing for me but after reading sharon part,i got it completely,He was punishing himself and indirectly he was hurting sharon..Now this is called True Love..The whole scene u have desrcibed so well..It was perfectly penned regarding anger,hurt,love and pain..I was expecting swayam reaction there but after getting ending part where swayam tells he will come back and clear everything make me more expectant..I am excitedly expecting some amazing twist above..

Ohk finally done..!!
I must say,all the updates are pretty awesome..I enjoyed a great read..Thanx for ur all PM's and sorry for the late,I know buddy how it feels when reader didnt comment in timing constraint and ignored PM..So sorry once again..U are doing great so keep it up and Do update soon..

Prateek