Swaron FF: Love or Freedom #2 *thrd 3 link posted*

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zk456789

@zk456789

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#661

Amazing update love the way you express sam and Sharon friendship in the whole story
And Sam leave SharonI am happy that swayam take all the things positively
And now waiting for the next chapter and swayam Sharon convo
Thanks for the pm
Do update soon

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Shreya

@swarontruelove

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#662

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I totaly loved the update. Sam's POV was sooo well explained!!!!!!!!!!! it was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i mean i could picture the whole thing, his surprise seeing swayam and how did it turn to anger instantly, how his anger got so overpowered that instead of soothing sharon he thought hitting swayam was important. how sharon got hurt with every hit swayam got and how swayam didnt hit bcoz he was giving himself punishment through sam's hitting nd beating for hurting sharon, his dear bff. i loved sharons pulling sam away frm swayam... it showed how much she loved him, how much she cared for her love, swayam. sam's nd sharon's convo was painful but one thng's sure sam so does love his frnd nd care abt her. he was sooo hurt of his best frnd shouting at him nd telling him to get the hell out of there, u so well explained it!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved the pain put in words by u!!!!!!! nd of course sharon's guilt.nd i loved how sharon took care of swayam, gave first aid nd bandaged him. the part with sharon's pov was beautifully written putting in words her guilt, vulnerability for loving swayam and so not meeting his eyes and her love for him. i loved that swayam didnt take it all negatively nd that was my biggest worry in the previous chapter. nd oh god! y did u end it there?? i so wanted to hear the next day's covo b/w them but oh well not everything happens as u want...so will be eagerly waiting for the update!!!!!!!!!!!! do update soon!!!! dying to read abt swaron's convo on this nd how sharon apologises to sam!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by swarontruelove - 11 years ago

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#663

it was nice
i really liked how u have explained sam's pov
and his and sharon's relation
sharon really understands swayam so well
it was great
thanks for the pm

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kriti094

@kriti094

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#664

D updt was nyc
i m feeling sad for all d 3 swayam , sharon n sam
dey all r suffering
i just hope sharon n sam's friendship gets back to normal soon
updt soon

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anzana

@Bista-anzana

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#665

Lykd sam's POV
.. the way you potrayed sam's feelings ws vry nyc.
he is concerned about sharon
sharon understandingd
why he was behaving weirdly
lubd sharon n sma bond..
& the best part was swayam heard everything
n he knows wat sharon feels for him
w8ing to noe wot will happen nxt..

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rinku90

@rinku90

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#666

It was a short but a nice update😊

liked the way u explained sam's pov.

it showed the bond that sam and sharon shared

loved sharon's pov .it showed how well she knows swayam and how much she loves him,it also shows how much she cares and love sam as a friend.her emotions were portrait amazingly.

waiting for swayam's pov regarding everything that happened.

now that he knows that sharon loves him how would he react to it and how will all that happened will affect swaron.

Waiting eagerly for ur next update.😃

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#667

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nice update dear...it was short but i loved it..

both d pov nicely describe..

gud to see his concern for sharon..

and m happy that swayam finally came to know that sharon loves him...

waiting for next update now.. 😊

Edited by sweetdivya - 11 years ago

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#668

Comment edited on page 92 sorry for the late comment...😛.

Edited by sweet16cash - 11 years ago

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--Suhani--

@--Suhani--

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#669

OH 😲

She told him to get out of her life o.O

WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????????????????????

Something must have happened.

He fought with swayam!??

or did he love Sharon!?

orrr IDK

Going to read the update SOON!!!

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--Ta_Sha--

@--Ta_Sha--

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#670

Originally posted by: sweet16cash
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Angel my dearest sister you write bloody awesome and i absolutely love it when you write emotional updates they're always a bomb...❤️ 🤗.
Starting with the update i loved Sam's pov this was the first time i saw Sam who is normally a prankster and a cool headed person display rage and more importantly it was for his bestie and i loved that part..👍🏼.

I loved the amount of care and affection Sam holds for Sharon and the bond which they share..😊. The little fighting sequence which you showed was good too and initially even i could'nt understand why Swayam was'nt reacting given the fact that he is a temperamental person by nature and then all my question were answered by Sharon and at that time my heart went out to Swayam he was punishing himself for subconsciously hurting his bff.. The entire sequence where you showed Sam and Sharon's pov was penned down very very beautifully by you their pain and their longing for each other could be seen easily by me...😊.

Then the part in the end where Swayam tells he will come back and clear everything makes me expectant of the next update so you better update soon gal warna woh headlines toh tujhe yaad hi hai..😆.

All in all an awesome update beautifully written..👍🏼.
Love,
Kashi..🤗.

awe thank you so much kashi ❤️

yup i was nervous that readers might hate sam after this but i guess they understood him 😊

i m glad u like his pov dear

lol yeah sharon has all the answers related to swayam 😆

hehehehehe how can i forget the headlines 🤣

thanks once again

will try to update soon 😊

love u 🤗